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[rif] Tenou Saze; Vizard/Karakura Vizards
Topic Started: Jan 9 2009, 08:47 PM (96 Views)
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General Information
Name: Tenou Saze
Alias: Enou, Zami, Ochi
Gender: Male
Age: 250
Birthdate: september 22nd in the 1850's
Birthplace: Kyoto, Japan
Current Residence: Vizards Warehouse
History: He spent a long time as a shinigami. He was in the advanced classes, in everything. He became so good he got to stay back into the academy and take special tests, and become fu`ll shinigami. Seeing there were quite a lot of jobs in the soul society, he decided to be an instructor. He like the idea of being a 'sensei'. Being sensei for many years got to be a joyful decade until Aizen paid a isit using some kind of cube called"Hyogoku" This hyogyoku change him somehow, he had to figure it out. He took it in his his studies and resigned as a sensei;as it might've affected his teaching, or fighting a bility. I was about only one day laterand Saze woke up holding a shinigami by the neck in his hands. He had no clue what happened, he investigated what happened and all trails led to him. Seeing this and knowing this he knew he had to leave the soul the soul society and seek out help.
Faction: Karakura Vizards.
Rank:
-former Hand to Hand Combat Intructor.
-former swordmanship Instructor


Appearance
Visual Appearance:
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Physical Appearance:
-5"8
-124 lb
- red hair
- faded blue eyes

Clothing and Armor:Ignore the clothings. He will usually wears black suits.
Personality: A very easy going person. Very nonchalant, laid back. He likes to laze around, and let the day go by. He likes socializing with the other shinigami, and likes watching the idiocy of some.
Visual Age: To be a 250 year old man he looks to be 28.

Zanpakutou
Zanpakutou Name: Ketsueki
Spirit Appearance:
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Inner World: Inner world It is a large zen garden. It is full of plants. It holds a peaceful waterfall dumping into a small pond with a vast amount of coy.
Sealed Form:
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Shikai
Shikai Release Phrase: Pray to gods!
Shikai Appearance: The sword will turn into a black scythe. Black blade and everything.
Shikai Abilities: Saze could call, "Dip" and the scythed will glows a light purple, aas this happens Saze can sling reatsu at an opponent. Saze can call "Florish" and he will carve kanji into the air with his finger. The kanji will disappear and Saze will fire his reatsu like a bazooka.Saze can't use kido and this is his substitute for it.

Sword Dance Alpha: First Strike: Reaper's Scythe
Description: Will swing his sword, with soul pressure compacted to it. After the swing a large backlash of reatsu come at the opponent.

Sword Dance Beta: Second Strike: King's Guillotine
Description: Will throw sword into the air, and jump on the sword like a skate board. They will the create a guillotine made of soul pressure, and will come down, crushing the opponent.

Hollow Information
Inner Hollow: A slick man in a all white suit, with pale, white hair, and skin and his hair pulled back. A sadistic, person, looking for what he calls fun. When he comes out he will ussually just yell at Saze, for always holding back or not being able to fight to full extent.
Hollow Mask: mask]
Hollow Control: Saze doesn't have any problem with his hollow in fact he can work in sync with it. He can't fully draw it out but he can cast a forth of the mask by pointing to the center of his forehead. When he does this process he will be able to pulled out the jaw of his out.
Hollow Powers:
-Hierro
-Cero
-Dark Clutch= Will allow him to fight without using his zanpakuto. He will try grab or strike an opponent, upon contact the dense reatsu will burn with the intensity of a cero.
Edited by rif, Jan 30 2009, 02:34 PM.
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Negro please.

Not bad, but you could at least expand his history to say why and how he became a Vizard and had to leave Soul Society to join the Karakura Vizards. And if you're in the Karakura Vizards' Warehouse, wouldn't your faction be Karakura Vizards? You're with them, right?

Oh and you need to actually describe your inner world, rather than just answering with..."inner world". ^_^;
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oh sorry I wasn't paying a attention.

Okay editted
Edited by rif, Jan 9 2009, 09:05 PM.
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Negro please.

You still haven't changed anything in this sense:

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Not bad, but you could at least expand his history to say why and how he became a Vizard and had to leave Soul Society to join the Karakura Vizards. And if you're in the Karakura Vizards' Warehouse, wouldn't your Faction be Karakura Vizards? You're with them, right?
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okay I think I got it this time.
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Negro please.

Still forgot his Faction.

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Not bad, but you could at least expand his history to say why and how he became a Vizard and had to leave Soul Society to join the Karakura Vizards. And if you're in the Karakura Vizards' Warehouse, wouldn't your Faction be Karakura Vizards? You're with them, right?
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I saw what you meant... Okay I should be okay now.
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Negro please.

Approved, keep in mind guys and gals, you may have three characters in total, with a limit of two canon characters out of that and a limit of one MAJOR canon character. So if you already took one major canon character your next character has to be an original or a minor canon character. I'll be the judge of what canons are major and minor, but common sense makes it obvious. Captains, major characters, faction leaders, Espada, etc., are all major canons.
Do check out the Canon List and consider some stuff before the good characters are taken. ^_^
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