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| Gabriel_Whist | Jan 7 2009, 10:39 PM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Tetsuban Ganjouken Alias: Ken Gender: Male Age: 15 Country of Origin and Village: Fire Country/Konohagakure Current Residence: Konoha History: Ken is the oldest son to an ancient family of blacksmiths. They are an extremely small clan, and Ken is the heir to the clan, and the only shinobi in his generation, none of his siblings or cousins have inherited the kekkei genkai or shown any interest in the ninja lifestyle. He has been trained in the family's ninjutsu arts by his grandfather since he was 5 years old, and his father has trained him in the family's smithing techniques for an equally long period of time. He graduated from the academy swiftly, and has been a genin since then. His mother is extremely ill, dying, and it takes a toll on him emotionally. Rank: Genin (If there isn't going to be a chunin exam in the game though, I'd rather just start as a chunin, since other wise I'll be a genin forever.) Faction: Konoha, The Forge (His family's special ops team, they forge masterful and often enhanced weaponry for Konoha's ninjas.) Team: I'd like to be in one with other active characters. Chakra Affinity/Specialty: Earth, specifically his clan's unique magnetic chakra. Characteristics Visual Appearance: http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj184/bottleofpeace/kaguyacopy.jpg http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9118/newteamit4.jpg (The one on the far left) Physical Appearance: Average height, slender build, though well toned, with a chest, torso, and arms that are extremely well muscled and strong from his blacksmithing work. He has short, spiky black hair, and dark eyes, with handsome features. Clothing and Armor: He wears baggy white pants that tuck into black open toe and heel boots (normal Naruverse ninja shoes, just boot length), a sleeveless grey hoodie several sizes to big, zipped up over an all black baseball shirt (sleeves are longer than short sleeves, shorter than full length), with black fingerless gloves that have metal plates on the back. He wears his forehead protector around his upper right arm, the shoulder, but the side of it as opposed to on top of it. He has weapon packs hanging on suspenders that don't go over his shoulders, which rest on the back of his thighs, and a short sword sideways on the small of his back at the waist, with the hilt pointing towards the right. Personality: Ken is an extremely stubborn and strong willed individual who never backs down from a challenge. He loves to explore, and to fight, and to work hard, and to challenge himself at all times. He finds his greatest joy in his smithing, where he can challenge his strength, his craftmanship, his creativity and more. Weapons Shuriken, kunai, rope, explosive tags, and steel wire go in the ninja packs, and his sword goes on the small of his back, sideways, with the hilt pointing to the right. Weapon Name: Maruchitaiken Weapon Description: Form 1: A short straight katana with the appearance of being many plates, and segments like a telescoping baton in a way. Form 2: A massive katana that looks similar to a buster sword, held together by powerful magnetic forces that shine a bluish purple light through the small gaps between the plates. Form 3 and onwards: Currently unknown Photo of Weapon (Optional): Range: Short Special Abilities (If Any): Form changing. Using his magnetic chakra, Ken can disassemble and reassemble his blade in different configurations with different strengths and weaknesses, though currently he can only switch to one predetermined form. Kekkei Genkai Kekkei Genkai Clan Name: Tetsuban Village of Origin: Konoha (Existed before Konoha, currently resides there though) Jutsu name (optional): Jishaku (the main/base jutsu) Clan Jutsu: Consist of numerous jutsus utilizing metal, and magnetism, specifically and most commonly a control over metal objects with their chakra, similar to controlling a puppet with chakra strings, but instead controlling the metal objects with magnetic waves of chakra. It also has a physical aspect, consisting of blood so heavily rich in iron that even the bone marrow and thus bones are heavy in iron. This grants them greater durability to physical attacks, with a larger weakness to lightning and electric attacks, and allows them to control their own bodies with an advanced clan limit, Seikeikane. The last ability is their dojutso, the Jishakugan, which allows them to see magnetic fields, and thus metal objects that are hidden, granting them knowledge of all metal in the area, including ore in the ground which they can use for jutsus. Clan Limit: Only one in ten children are born with the kekkei genkai, and to use the Seikeikane and Jishakugan they must unlock them in specific and difficult manners. To unlock the Seikeikane they must learn to truly communicate with metal, and understand it, which requires them to spend at least 100 hours (500 word count) forging, and to craft at least 10 great pieces. To unlock the Jishakugan they must have unlocked the Seikeikane, allowing them to utilize their iron rich blood in their eyes, and they must overcome a great emotional difficulty, allowing their hearts true path to unlock, which allows iron to flow more swiftly through the body. The Jishakugan allows the user to learn more advanced techniques, and there may be more levels to it, but currently they are only myth as no one has acheived them in over a hundred years. Weakness: Magnetic fields can be disrupted by lightning/electric fields of equal or greater strength, the users body is weaker to lightning and electricity than a normal human, and their largely metal body makes them susceptible to magnetic attacks from fellow clan members, as well as making them heavier than a normal person, and thus requiring more chakra and greater control to stand on trees, water, etc... Though metal walls and the like would be easier to stand on. Jutsus Clone Jutsu, Replacement Jutsu, Rope Escape Jutsu, Transformation Jutsu Jutsu Name Level One Jishaku Rank: D Element: Metal/Magnetism Range: Short Type: Supplementary Effect: Allows the user to control metal that they could physically lift within a short range of their own body. They can control up to the weight they could physically lift, however it is spread out. Ex.) Only one large item, but numerous kunai could be easily done. At this weak level the control is minor, and cannot effect metal through other non metal solids. For example, a metal blade wrapped in a cloth could not be controlled by the Jishaku level one. Jutsu Name Kougake Rank: C Element: Metal/Magnetism Range: Short Type: Supplementary Effect: The user performs a single symbol, then slams his palms to the ground, drawing out metal ore in a near vacinity, to create gauntlets around the users hands to enhance attack and defense, or even as a supply of metal for other attacks. The strength, control over the appearance of, etc... is based on the strength of the users bloodline and chakra control. Jutsu Name Izumichou Jutsu Rank: D Element: Metal/Magnetism Range: Short Type: Attack Effect: The user summons up a spring coil under the foot from the ore in the target area, launching them in the intended direction rapidly, usually accompanied by spinning weapons around themselves, or occasionally a boost for a single blow. Edited by Gabriel_Whist, Jan 8 2009, 08:32 PM.
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| TFE Magnus | Jan 8 2009, 07:34 PM Post #2 |
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Negro please.
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I don't want you to be able to manipulate other people's metal weapons. You need to edit your Level One Jishaku, essentially with it as vague as that you're Magneto and can never be hurt with anything. |
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| Gabriel_Whist | Jan 8 2009, 07:47 PM Post #3 |
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Well, he can knock kunai aside with it and stuff like that, but its not subconscious, so his ability to do so would be no greater than his ability to dodge the same strikes, and be a waste of chakra as such. Also, if you read the level one Jishaku, it is extremely limited. It is close range, no more than a few meters (I don't know metric actually, but I'm thinking 2-3 yards maximum), and he can only control as much as he could normally lift, meaning that its application is quite limited. He can't just control all of his enemies weapons or anything like that. Can you explain exactly what you want me to change, because right now it seems to me that it fits well within the vague parameters you dictated. The only way I can think to limit it anymore is to say that he cannot control metal through a non metal object, i.e. he can't control a metal knife if it is wrapped in a cloth. |
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| TFE Magnus | Jan 8 2009, 08:11 PM Post #4 |
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Negro please.
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Add that, but you're telling me if Kisame swung Samehada at you you could just stop and warp it with your mind? It's not kunai I'm worried about, it's swords. |
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| Gabriel_Whist | Jan 8 2009, 08:29 PM Post #5 |
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He couldn't even lift Samehada, so no, he couldn't even block it with his magnetic chakra, at best he might be able to slow it, or nudge it to the side, but thats it. Even with higher levels he wouldn't be able to do that much, as Samehada is a special blade infused with Kisame's chakra, so he would be combatting Kisame's own chakra strength and control to try and control it himself. To actually be able to pull Samehada away from Kisame or something like that, he would have to have more chakra, and a greater level of control, pretty much, he would have to be an overall stronger ninja. So, since pretty much all custom weapons tend to involve some sort of chakra ability, and would be infused with their users chakra during combat, Ken would have to be of equal or greater strength than his opponent to control pretty much any custom weapon. |
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| TFE Magnus | Jan 8 2009, 08:37 PM Post #6 |
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Negro please.
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Alright, as long as you edit in the thing about chakra-infused weapons and higher levels and the thing about covered metal. And make sure to never add any new abilities or gains in Tatsuban without clearing them past me, like any other jutsu or abilities gained in this RP. |
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| Gabriel_Whist | Jan 8 2009, 08:41 PM Post #7 |
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I edited in the covered metal thing, and since at this level he wouldn't really be able to use it against chakra infused weaponry at all yet, I don't think that its really necessary to get into that at this stage. And of course, I'd never just add abilities without checking with you. |
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| TFE Magnus | Jan 8 2009, 08:43 PM Post #8 |
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Negro please.
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Approved, keep in mind guys and gals, you may have three characters in total this does not mean you absolutely have to have three but that it is the maximum of what you can have. However, you can only have one major canon character tops, so if you already took one major canon character your next character has to be an original or a minor canon character. I'll be the judge of what canons are major and minor, but common sense makes it obvious. Major members of the series and faction leaders, etc., are all usually major canons. But when in doubt, ask, it never hurts and maybe I'll allow you to have the canon you want. Also remember that you can only have one character from each village or organization.
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