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| gale | Jan 7 2009, 06:59 PM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Spyder Alias: Metallic Knight Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 20 Birthdate: Unknown Birthplace: Loguetown Current Residence: His ship History: Spyder has always been alone for as long as he can remember. He was small boy living on the streets begging for food just enough to stop the pain in his sides. One day he met kindness from the innkeeper in his village. The old man and his daughter took care of him and fed him. One day rouge marines came in and killed the old man and the girl this is why Spyder has an intense hatred for marines. Just when they were going to turn on him a tall man with a long white beard came in saved Spyder and dispatched the marines. The scientist known as Geeki gave Spyder his name and dream. Geeki was a scientist studying devil fruits, and started tutoring Spyder in the ways of the scientist. Finally one day Geeki decided he was going to give the Kane Kane fruit to Spyder. Geeki knew the abilities of the fruit and started training him. Two years later marines came back again and tried to get Spyder out of the way, but Geeki jumped in the path and was severely injured. Spyder went ballistic and killed all the marines. Spyder tried his best but he was a scientist not a doctor. On his deathbed he gave Spyder his prized briefcase with his notebook. He is now sailing the seas with his crew. Personality: He is a very quiet individual only talking to his crew. He is also extremely serious never cracking a smile only on rare occasions. He never looses his temper and is rather calm in battle. Only if his nakama are getting hurt will he loose his temper. His IQ is off the charts and he uses that not only in his research but in battle too. One thing he eats an enormously huge amount. Life Aim: All pirates are fueled by something and so are marines. Does your character want to find the One Piece whilst becoming the strongest pirate of the world or are they fueled by a more personal desire and aim to avenge a long-lost friend? Appearance Visual Appearance: Physical Appearance: Spyder is lightly tan from all the years he has spent in the sun. His face is in an oval shape and he has been told that he is rather handsome. His long black hair ends right above the shoulders, but its pulled back into a ponytail. He has broad shoulders and you can clearly see his muscles through his dress shirt. He always has a serious look on his face people say that his eyes penetrate your soul. His mouth is set in a straight line almost all the time but he has cracked a smile a few times. There is a medium sized, diagonal scar across his nose ending at the midpoint of his eyes. Clothing and Armor: Rectangular wire rimmed glasses adorn his face. He wears a white dress shirt with just the top two buttons unbuttoned. Over that is a high priced brown suit jacket with matching pants and brown dress shoes. Briefcase: The only thing he carries with him is his briefcase. It never has or will leave his side. It has a twenty five-digit code that only he knows. It has all his files and basic lab equipment in it. It also has a secret compartment in it that holds his most prized possession a very thick, big green notebook that was given to him by his hero and mentor. In that book is all the information on every devil fruit he has seen so far. He also carries all his beli in it. Combat Fighting Style: He fights with his Devil Fruit Weapons: Devil Fruit: Kane Kane Fruit Translated Name: Metal Metal Fruit Devil Fruit Type: Logia Devil Fruit Weakness: Very very high heat Devil Fruit Power Description: Spyder gains the ability to turn any part of his body into metal. This metal is more of a liquid metal for example he can turn his hand a big metal hammer one minute and change it to something else the next. He can do many things with this ability melt to a puddle of liquid metal and slide under a door, or morph any part of his body into anything he can think of. This metal is stronger than other type of metal therefore swords, bullets, explosions, and physical blows just bounce off of him. He looses all his powers to the standard devil fruit weaknesses. Techniques: Kane Kane Claw: Spyder transforms his fingers into a metallic claw. He can use it for close up melee combat. Or he can extend his fingers to pierce through multiple enemies. Kane Kane Pummel: Spyder transforms his right hand into a large ball end of a mace. With this he can run up and punch the enemy, shoot it out on a chain, or extend it on a chain and swing it around. Kane Kane Machine Gun: Spyder turns his upper body into metal and pushes it off his body forming hundreds small round balls. He then can shoot one or all of them at once. Kane Kane Dome: Used to protect allies and sometimes him. He creates a dome of metal around himself and allies. Kane Kane Cannon: Spyder puts out either hand forming a cannon ball sized metal ball. He can manipulate the ball out side of his body making it explode, send shrapnel every were, and even shooting good sized spikes out of the ball. Kane Kane Smother: Shooting a small blob that covers the enemies nose and mouth to suffocate them to death. Kane Kane Pinwheel: Turns his leg all metal and stretches it to kick the enemy. He can also spin and stretch his leg and take out multiple enemies Kane Kane Knight: Spyder uses his devil fruit to cover his entire body in metal. This metal takes the form of a form fitting metallic knight armor. This technique greatly increases Spyder’s speed and strength. Kane Kane Iron Maiden: This can only be used after he activates his Kane Kane Knight. He shoots multiple chains from any direction he chooses to capture the enemy. He then produces multiple spikes from his chins to his forehead and pulls them in at a very fast rate thus impaling them on the spike. Therefore Iron Maiden Kane Kane Graveyard: This can only be used after he activates his Knight Mode. Slamming his hand on the ground and pumping a small amount of is metal into the ground. He brings up thousands of spikes in a circular radius for about a mile. Kane Kane Excalibur: While he is Knight Mode he can form his right arm into a intricate, large, English style broadsword. This sword can be manipulated into a long razor sharp whip, and even increase his strength even more. Kane Kane Tiamat: Named after the Babylonian goddess Taimet. Once again this can only be used after his Knight Mode. He forms a large female with , a tail, a thigh, "lower parts" (which shake together), a belly, an udder, ribs, a neck, a head, a skull, eyes, nostrils, a mouth, and lips. Next thing the enemy knows they are in a metal cube being ripped apart by metal dragons and snakes. __________________ Crew Name: Metallic Knight Pirates Ship Name: OokiKarasu Ship Appearence: An all black ship this was stolen from the captain of the marines that Spyder killed. It can hold has rooms for 10 people comfortably. It has four rooms: Spyder's room that holds all his research equipment and a small bed, two more bed rooms, and a rather large room that has seven hammocks for sleeping and male and female bathhouse. Under the deck are a dojo, infirmary, and kitchen. The head peace is that of crow and the Jolly Roger is skull with crossbones that has a metallic knights helmet on. Ship Equipment: Has six cannons and a harpoon gun in the front. Crew Members: Looking for crew members : ) ____________ Crew: Metallic Knight Pirates Position: Captain & Scientist Current/Former Bounty: 250,000,000 for the destruction of two marine bases and murder of marine officials. |
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| The King of Fap | Jan 8 2009, 08:08 AM Post #2 |
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Fap is the name, fapping is my game
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I'll let my co-mod handle this |
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| Chizu | Jan 8 2009, 12:26 PM Post #3 |
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Alright, all in all a nice char, like it and thumbs up for the idea. However I do see a few things that need to be changed/edited so this would get approved. First of, his history. I did read it all, but I stil don't see a significant reason why you should use the term rouge Marines. Much more then that if they went against the old man, please state the reason. Were they corrupt and wanted money? Were they bandits masket as Marines. It's not just for my curiousity but for the entire RP. Also you should state the reason why the Marines came back, was Geeki a wanted man, was his research in some way dangerous to the world government, so tell us. Also everything else checks out except for one thing. The last attack- Kane Kane Tiamat - As far as I understand it, it creates a create which fights for Spyder, ok. But where did the metal box come from all of the sudden, and also I don't want to see all these metal dragon and snakes in this same attack, since it somewhat contraditors the first half of the attacks description. So once you make those changes just Pm me, or post in here so I take a look and we get this approved. ^^ |
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| Frozen Vampire | Jan 8 2009, 12:29 PM Post #4 |
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He has way to many attacks man. |
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| Chizu | Jan 8 2009, 12:40 PM Post #5 |
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Well with 12 attacks, it is a bit much. So you know what, drop it to 10, for now. |
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| The King of Fap | Jan 8 2009, 03:12 PM Post #6 |
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Drop it to six or lower |
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