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| Shiroc | Dec 16 2008, 07:32 AM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Mikichi Taimu Alias: Nezumi Gender: Male Age: 23 Country of Origin and Village: Wind Country/Suna Current Residence: Wherever work takes him History: Mikichi’s mother and sister died before he can remember so he was brought up by his father. His father taught Mikichi about the Taimu clan’s abilities. But it was found that Mikichi’s father had betrayed Suna and he was executed as punishment. After that Mikichi was shunned as the son of a traitor by the village. He raised himself and kept out of village life except for attending the academy. He had no friends and the few relatives he had were distant. Mikichi discovered that rats were also shunned by the rest of world just like himself. Mikichi began to feed rats and saved them from traps and cats. One day Kotsuzui Kajiru, lord of rats, approached Mikichi and asked why he was so good to rats. Mikichi replied, “Because they are my closest of kin.” Kotsuzui Kajiru formed a summoning pact with Mikichi in return for the kindness he’d shown to his fellow rats. He graduated the academy at 11 and become a Genin. After a few more years of training Mikichi planned to take the Chunin exam. A few days before the exam Mikichi became enraged by villagers, and he summoned Kotsuzui Kajiru to destroy the village. He was quickly overwhelmed and would have perished if Kotsuzui Kajiru had not helped him flee Suna. Mikichi was pursued by Suna shinobi in order to ensure he did not leak Taimu secrets. But Mikichi survived. He spent a year on the run. Then he heard that a local gang needed someone to steal certain valuable artifacts. Seeing it as a way to gain some protection Mikichi stole the artifacts and went into service for the gang. He assumed the name of Nezumi and from there he progressed to become an infamous mercenary. Rank: Last official rank of Genin Faction: His own Team: None Chakra Affinity/Specialty: Nezumi specializes in stealth and lone combat. Characteristics Visual Appearance: None Physical Appearance: Nezumi is short, and slight. His orange eyes dart about in search of danger. He lets his black hair hang in ragged tangles around his head and allows stubble on his face. Nezumi keeps his face straight and betrays no emotions. Clothing and Armor: Nezumi typically dons a black body suit overlaid by a black trench coat. Under his trench coat Nezumi wears three belts strung with pouches around his waist, and two across his chest. He also wears two pouches on each leg, one on each thigh one on each shin, and two shoulder pouches. Outside his trench coat Nezumi wears a backpack full of survival gear and supplies. Personality: Calculating, reserved, and pragmatic are three words that describe Nezumi. He reveals nothing in his words or body language. He prefers stick to the point and does not mince words. Nezumi is naturally distrustful of other people and sees everyone as a potential threat. He has a strong survival instinct and allows it to govern most of his choices. These are his strength for they have protected him from his enemies but they are also his weakness for they prevent him from making friends. He would be the first to say “Better the Devil’s right hand man than in his way”. And yet Nezumi sometimes catches himself committing small acts of kindness. Weapons Nezumi keeps 3 soldier pills in each shoulder pouch along with several shuriken. Inside his waist pouches are a combination of explosive tags, flash bombs, smoke bombs, kunai and shuriken. Nezumi keeps Makibishi(caltrops), steel thread, more kunai and more shuriken in his chest pouches. Strapped to his back are 2 Windmill Shuriken. More kunai and shuriken are kept in the pouches on Nezumi’s thighs and shins. The traveling pack holds bandages, salve, rations, sleeping bag, tinderbox, rope, blankets, and a lantern. Kekkei Genkai Kekkei Genkai Clan Name: Taimu Village of Origin: Suna Jutsu name (optional): Clan Jutsu: The Taimu clan perceive time at roughly half the speed of others. This allows them to react more quickly than others ninja to attacks since they experience the world in “slow motion”. It merely gives them more "time" in which to decide how best to block attacks. Clan Limit: Members of the Taimu clan is extremely small because the bloodline limit is not always passed to children and because many were slain in the ninja wars. In fact, only four people are known to posses their ability. Weakness: While the Taimu clan perceives time more slowly than most people it does not actually make them faster. It can be characterized as giving a Chunin level Jonin speed and reactions. Additionally, the Taimu recovers chakra at a slower than average rate: approximately 1/3 normal rate. Jutsus Jutsu Name Great Cutting Whirlwind Technique Rank: B Element: Wind Range: Any Type: Offensive and defensive Effect: A concussive wind that slices through anything in it’s path Jutsu Name Underground Submarine Voyage Rank: C Element: Earth Range: NA Type: Supplementary Effect: The user sinks below ground and quickly travels through it to wherever Jutsu Name Sonic Thrust Rank: C Element: Wind Range: Short Type: Offensive Effect: A sharp point of wind is thrust at the enemy typically from a weapon of some kind. Jutsu Name Fireball Rank: C Element: Fire Range: Short-Mid Type: Offensive Effect: Shoots a stream of fire from users mouth. Jutsu Name Shuriken Control Rank: A Element: Wind Range: Any Type: Offensive Effect: By manipulating air currents the user can control the path of an airborne object and guide it a target or hover them on updrafts. Jutsu Name Hair Wind Rank: Unknown Element: Wind Range: Short-mid Type: Offensive Effect: Generates spinning pillars of air. Jutsu Name Sword of Wind Rank: A Element: Wind Range: Short Type: Offensive Effect: Creates a sword of wind sharper than any blade that can not be blocked. Jutsu Name Dragon’s Big Job Rank: Unknown Element: Wind Range: Any Type: Offensive Effect: Creates a pillar of cutting wind. Jutsu Name Mud Overturn Rank: C Element: Earth Range: Short Type: Defense Effect: Raises a wall of earth in front of user Jutsu Name Shadow Clone Rank: B Element: NA Range: NA Type: Supplementary Effect: Creates a chakra copy of the user Jutsu Name Hurricane Shuriken Rank:C Element: Wind Range: Any Type: Offensive Effect: Pushes a projectile with wind giving it hurricane speed. Jutsu Name Sly Mind Effect Technique Rank: C Element: NA Range: Mid-Long Type: Supplementary Effect: A Genjutsu that causes the target to travel in circles. Jutsu Name Call of the Swarm Rank: B Element: NA Range: NA Type: Supplementary Effect: A summon jutsu for rats. Summons rats who will follow the users orders as well as the lord of rats Kotsuzui Kajiru(Marrow Gnawer), a man sized ninja rat. Jutsu Name: Grass Clone Rank:C Element: Grass Range:1-5 short Type: Support Effect: This jutsu creates a clone of the user from nearby grass or plants. Mainly used as a decoy, the clones created are incapable of causing a noticeable amount of physical damage. Jutsu Name: Seed Growth Rank: C Element: Grass Range:10+ long Type: Passive Effect: By converting chakra into the power of life, the user can use it to accelerate growth in all plants. Not a particularly hard jutsu or a useful one by itself since this only causes the plant to grow in a natural way, this jutsu acts as the basis for most other nature jutsu Jutsu Name: Grass armor Rank: B Element: Grass Range: self Type: Defensive Effect: creates Spiked armor made out of grass to protect the user from harm. The grass is hardened to the point that it is like steel and the spikes can be shot out from the armor but only one time and then the armors falls off and you have to make it again. Edited by Shiroc, Feb 24 2009, 03:09 PM.
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| TFE Magnus | Dec 16 2008, 11:07 PM Post #2 |
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Negro please.
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Isn't that a clan jutsu a bit unbelievably overpowered? His freaking kekkei genkai is just being able to see time HALF slower so he's essentially an ultra super saiyan when it comes to speed and faster than anyone else in the world? So...he's the fastest ninja in the world with that potential...Everyone would be ultra slow to him, with NO WEAKNESS to the ability or kekkei genkai? ![]() |
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| Shiroc | Dec 17 2008, 01:52 PM Post #3 |
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I will admit it can seem that way. The fact that he can see it coming doesn't mean he can block or dodge it though. Most of the time you see the attack coming but just can't avoid it. Well, he'll have a little more time than most people but he could still be hit. It's most powerful when there's a flurry of attacks or thrown objects or something when he can find a path through it but otherwise it just means he's got better reactions. Think of it this way, he's like a Chunin level guy with Jonin level speed. Anyway, if you prefer I don't use it I'm fine with taking it out. |
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| TFE Magnus | Dec 18 2008, 07:10 AM Post #4 |
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Negro please.
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Listen, you don't have to remove it, but at least edit it and limit/weaken it with the stuff you're mentioning yourself. Otherwise it stays defined as something totally vague, you may say you won't use it overpowered or it's a Chunin level guy with Jonin level speed, but what you ACTUALLY wrote down gives you leeway to be unbelievably broken. |
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| Shiroc | Dec 18 2008, 11:40 AM Post #5 |
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Alright, I've edited it and in hindsight I've decided to weaken it a bit more too. Sorry, I should have done something like that in the original post. |
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| TFE Magnus | Dec 20 2008, 04:33 AM Post #6 |
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Negro please.
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Alright. Approved, keep in mind guys and gals, you may have three characters in total this does not mean you absolutely have to have three but that it is the maximum of what you can have. However, you can only have one major canon character tops, so if you already took one major canon character your next character has to be an original or a minor canon character. I'll be the judge of what canons are major and minor, but common sense makes it obvious. Major members of the series and faction leaders, etc., are all usually major canons. But when in doubt, ask, it never hurts and maybe I'll allow you to have the canon you want. Also remember that you can only have one character from each village or organization.
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| Shiroc | Feb 17 2009, 01:20 PM Post #7 |
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Nezumi has spent time learning these new jutsus: Jutsu Name: Grass Clone Rank:C Element: Grass Range:1-5 short Type: Support Effect: This jutsu creates a clone of the user from nearby grass or plants. Mainly used as a decoy, the clones created are incapable of causing a noticeable amount of physical damage. Jutsu Name: Seed Growth Rank: C Element: Grass Range:10+ long Type: Passive Effect: By converting chakra into the power of life, the user can use it to accelerate growth in all plants. Not a particularly hard jutsu or a useful one by itself since this only causes the plant to grow in a natural way, this jutsu acts as the basis for most other nature jutsu Jutsu Name: Grass armor Rank: B Element: Grass Range: self Type: Defensive Effect: creates Spiked armor made out of grass to protect the user from harm. The grass is hardened to the point that it is like steel and the spikes can be shot out from the armor but only one time and then the armors falls off and you have to make it again. Nezumi continues training and I'll add new jutsus as he learns them. |
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| TFE Magnus | Feb 17 2009, 01:22 PM Post #8 |
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Negro please.
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Alright. |
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