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| Deleted User | Dec 13 2008, 12:56 PM Post #1 |
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The dark slum room was cold and windy as a strong gust blew through the draftee room, with no furniture but a simple mattress and a barrel with a fire raging in it for heat. The hairs on the back of Jadens neck stood on end as the cold wind overcame the warmth of the flames he was sitting close beside. The wind whistled and whipped all around the room and stopped as quickly it came, everything was so depressing and glum in the slums. Even with everyone hiding from that one small building from what its new occupant had done they couldn’t fathom going near the psycho not now not ever. The light sabre he had was too useful even with his lack of skill to anyone without a blaster which no one had in the area. The metal of the sabre was cold yet comforting to Jaden as it hung clipped to the side of his belt, it was so powerful in his hands yet it could be more powerful if trained and organised just like his father…no more so it could be stronger than that weakling that was cut down so easily. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 7 2009, 02:13 PM Post #31 |
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Without answering him Gyntha simple smiled and walked out of the room with her cloak billowing due to the slight speed to her step, her heels clicked on the dirt covered ground as she descended down a flight of stairs towards the hovels entrance. As she approached more light from outside shown upon her and gave her a much more eye catching illumination than from the small barrel fire had done, with this new light her eyes adjusted and seemed to lessen in intensity making them a subtle pale orange gold to their bright self illuminated colour. A sleek speed was parked only a few metres away from the entrance; with the homeless occupants of the area scurrying away quickly from admiring such a lavish and clean vehicle, that was never seen in these regions. She stood waiting for Jaden to catch up and simply looked over those who had been close to the speeder with a callous menacing grin. “Pathetic little vermin they all are, you could have at least began to do the planet a favour and dispose of some more before I arrived.” Her tone was light as if it were a joke but knowing her it was a fact she meant it and was holding herself back from exterminating every living creature in her sights. |
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| Firelizard | Jan 7 2009, 03:13 PM Post #32 |
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Jaden followed Gyntha out of the building, boots thumping on the floorboards of the run-down building. He wasn't burdened by any possessions or bags like Gyntha had, as his only carry on had been a lightsaber, permanently dismantled by who Jaden saw as his new teacher. Jaden's body instinctively shivered as the biting cold hit him with a force unequaled by any other he had felt before. Jaden looked on as the homeless regulars looked at and admired the sleek speeder that had to be Gyntha's with disgust and hatred. He had already killed many of the scum, but they multiplied like Gizka. He jogged the rest of the way to the speeder and Gyntha, bristling at the comment by the woman. "They're like Gizka, Gyntha. If you kill one 30 will take its place. I can tell you that my sword arm was sore after exterminating one building in this scum hole." Jaden understood that it wasn't a joke, seeing as how it was Gyntha who had said the remark in the first place. He wiped his mind of the issue and looked at the woman expectantly, eager to start his training and hone his killing abilities. |
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| Silber rache | Jan 7 2009, 04:41 PM Post #33 |
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| Deleted User | Jan 9 2009, 01:09 PM Post #34 |
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“We shall make this world a much better place in due time and we can use these whelps as our practice targets, the real thing gives much better training than droids. Now lets get out of here just encase I’m underestimating the coruscant security force.” With that Gytnha got into her speeder and started the motors as Jaden got in with her, she was a very smooth pilot as she lifted vertically off the ground and rose into the higher traffic rows and merged seamlessly with the rest of the traffic. “I feel a much more lavish setting for our discussion shall prove to be more beneficial for the both of us. Now you shall see what life style you can have as one of us.” She laughed as the wind rushed past her face as the speeder darted off the traffic line and headed to a very manicured and extremely expensive looking hotel called the ‘Elite’. [I've added in your XP and creds so it's cool and the comment was toy ou you've earned the max points so feel proud :P and keep it up heres the new thread so post away dude. http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7071024/1/ ] |
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