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Slums to Sith; Jaden Karr
Topic Started: Dec 13 2008, 12:56 PM (277 Views)
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The dark slum room was cold and windy as a strong gust blew through the draftee room, with no furniture but a simple mattress and a barrel with a fire raging in it for heat. The hairs on the back of Jadens neck stood on end as the cold wind overcame the warmth of the flames he was sitting close beside.

The wind whistled and whipped all around the room and stopped as quickly it came, everything was so depressing and glum in the slums. Even with everyone hiding from that one small building from what its new occupant had done they couldn’t fathom going near the psycho not now not ever. The light sabre he had was too useful even with his lack of skill to anyone without a blaster which no one had in the area.

The metal of the sabre was cold yet comforting to Jaden as it hung clipped to the side of his belt, it was so powerful in his hands yet it could be more powerful if trained and organised just like his father…no more so it could be stronger than that weakling that was cut down so easily.
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Though the wind felt like it bit into the deep, dark recesses of his own soul, Jaden ignored it as best he could. Showing weakness in the place he called his new home was a death sentence. But weakness was not a trait of his, the pile of dead bodies he had gathered while cleaning out the slumhole so many had once called home showed his willingness to not show weakness.

Jaden looked down at the lightsaber his father had once owned and gave a malicious smile. The old, weak man had been but a hindrance to the release of the power Jaden now felt. The cold, sharply designed hilt served as a reminder to Jaden to never falter from his goals.

How much death Jaden had wrought with the weapon made him shiver in delight more than the cold could. It was a release to feel the hunt, and to cause what would be a mans final moment, and more than that, warmth. Killing gave Jaden more pleasure than a Twi'lek or wealth could ever give a Hutt.
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A sound of clapping suddenly came from behind Jaden at the door way to the room; the clap was gentle as the fingers tapped against the soft smooth skin of the owners hands.

“Very well done, so young and yet already full of hatred and anger. You have accomplished so much already as well might I add, killing a powerful Dark Lord and creating fear in so many pointless whelps that they fear even mentioning of your little residence. Very impressive little one, though with your feelings and power uncontrolled as it is you are not worth the fear you instil into others.”

The woman’s’ voice was cold yet smooth as she spoke with a slightly uplift of joy at the mentions of Jaden’s accomplishments. With the shadows of the building and the lack of light only the right side of the woman’s face was noticeable, her light skin made lighter by the white light of the moon and street lights gave her the appearance of a ghost as he lush red lips smiled proudly at Jaden.

She looked normal from the very small section of her silhouette that was illuminated, though the only thing that made her different was her eyes. The eyes were different to any human in an unnatural way, they weren’t any normal shade they were a bright yellow which seemed to be illuminated themselves as both eyes could be seen clearly even with one fully in the shadows. They looked like they belonged on a beast and not on a fair ladies face, although who was to say this was not a lady and more of a beast?
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The wind still biting at Jaden's unclothed skin, he raised his head to the newcomer who had dared risk entry into his small, new home. His ears perked, and he smirked at actually being praised for the actions he had committed.

"It seems that my small tasks have caught un-wanted attention. Praising though it may be, it is still unwanted. Why have you come here?"

Jaden's voice was cold and unemotional, but his body language showed that he was still giddy from his deeds. And this woman, though she may be a stranger who was probably sent here to kill him, her praise made him even giddier.

Standing up to face the woman, Jaden got a good look at her features. Though she looked like one of the Coruscanti officials, her actions and small details such as the eyes revealed that she was something more than a prissy, idiotic higher up. What really caught Jaden's attention were her eyes. They seemed to be tranquil and filled with energy and unspoken rage at the same time. His lightsaber still in his grasp, it looked menacing with a slight bit of dried blood still on it.
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The woman didn’t move from where she was staying cloaked in the darkness as if it were a shield more for Jaden’s sake than hers. Her smile grew a little at Jaden’s words which caused her to lick her lips to wet them a little letting them easily slip apart for her reply.

“Well now now so much animosity. For a child you think you have the mind of an adult since you posse that light sabre. How far from that fact you truly are, a simple tool is all you hold boy, a tool which I came to see how effective you are with nothing else.”

Her voice seemed to be a lot more cheerful now as she spoke, the sense of blood and the anger was electrifying to this new strange woman. Her tongue flicked across her lips again quickly in anticipation of this uncontrolled anger that stood before her. Nothing pleased her more than the rashness of youth.
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Jaden took a step further, pondering the woman's words with little else going on his mind. The smirk disappeared as a grimace appeared on his face. Jaden's index finger neared the activation button, the hand along with it shaking to ignite the blade and kill this woman.

"I dare say my actions bequeath the status of child upon my person. Though if I didn't have this lightsaber, or what you call a tool, I would use my hands to tear out your heart as easily as this lightsaber would. Now, you seem to have an interest in me, and I in you. If I didn't, you would already be dead. Now, explain why you are here and I may let you live."

Jaden's grimace materialized into a smile filled with the instinctive and deadly edge he seemed to resonate. His hand shaking even more with the urge to kill this woman, Jaden tried to still the shaking with no effect.
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“So touchy my young boy you are so like your father when he was younger, silly little man he was.”

The woman was short in words this time and simply smirked as she stepped backwards into the long hallway from which she had entered from. The doorway faced the long closed hallway which was fairly long with several doors on each side each either shut or half opened in their dilapidated state, there was a single light at the very end of the hallway which allowed anyone to find their way down the reasonably unobstructed floor.
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Jaden grinned even wider and started to follow the woman out of the hallway. He stopped at the doorway, facing the woman who hid in the shadows with no fear in his body or mind.

"How did you know that weak fool? I hope you didn't train him, for he was killed by mere child"

Jaden's smile turned into a smirk as he tried to see a reaction on her face. He still held the lightsaber in his hand, but curiosity gripped him now more than the urge to kill was.
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The woman chuckled heartily at being insulted from Jaden’s comment. Her silhouette was a lot more defined now with the light behind her as she stood now three quarters down the long hallway facing Jaden at the door. By the looks of the black image she was about 5’8 with long hair that the colour was unnoticeable maybe black or brown at best, she was wearing a cape that just stopped short of her ankles that obscured the rest of her image and blunted out her physique.

Those same eerie eyes were visible no matter the lighting; those cold sinister yellow eyes stared at Jaden as if they were drilling a hole into his very essence of being. She didn’t seem to blink at all as her eyes were fixated on the boy and his lightsabre.

“I hope you don’t insult all women like that child. I did know your Father but I would have killed myself out of shame if I had trained him, no his old Master had sent me to pay him a visit. Though, I was too late before your little incident with that rogue Jedi, my apologies for not arriving sooner. If I had I would have made sure you did not live either. Now let me see if you are worth living after all.”

With that the woman seemed to pull something off her hip and hold it casually with her right hand letting it slightly glint in the light from behind. What ever she held it was metallic and slender not like the chunky lightsabre Jaden held tightly in his hands now.
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Jaden smirk grew into a grim face of determination and anger. How dare this mere woman insult him, and think that she could kill him. That added insult to injury, and he wanted to kill her, to feel the life run out of her like so many fountains.

"I hope I didn't scar you with my insults. That's really a lightsaber's job in my-"

Jaden hoped to catch the woman off guard by stopping in mid sentence and attack her before she could defend herself with that weapon she held in her hand.

Jaden lunged forward, screaming a battle cry in tune with the fury and energy building up in his heart. He didn't know how, but if he concentrated on his speed, especially on his legs, Jaden seemed to move much faster than the normal person. He did exactly this and activated the lightsaber, aiming for the death blow near the woman's heart.

(If you don't know, Jaden is using Force Speed ;) )
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A small tut came from the woman as Jaden rushed towards her unthinkingly and untamed, she was so far unimpressed by his rash response. Typical attitude for a child she though quietly and sighed as he sped towards her. His sudden actions didn’t cause her to jump into action but it caused her to delay herself till he was merely inches from her the light off his sabre illuminating her pale yet innocent looking face.

She looked no more than her mid twenties and would be the sort of woman than men chased after to have such a beauty at their arm. Her lips were blood rep with make up and her cheeks were as pale as ever yet it didn’t look ghostly more of an attractive beauty to her than anything. The ominous glow of the deadly sabre didn’t affect her attitude as she merely dodged to the side with a speed even Jaden couldn’t have figured possible for a human let alone such a beauty that was in front of him.

She had pulled away to his right and parried around him to face his back as he so carelessly flew past her in his misjudged rage. Her right hand had been tucked into her side as she felt no need for it now, not quiet yet this boy needed to be tested more. Maybe he was useful after all as her own tool in her plans.

“Good let the anger flow through you, embrace it use its power and strike your enemy down!”

Her voice was almost excited as she spoke from behind Jaden though there was a hint of amusement as she slightly chuckled in between words; she was enjoying this right now. Something she had hoped to share with his late pathetic Father.
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As Jaden was rushing at her, he seemed to notice her beauty in awe. She had the eyes of a beast but the body of a Twi'lek slave, no even better than a Twi'lek slave. Her calm attitude and the like along with her incredible impressed Jaden, and made him make up his mind to give her a quick death. A death a woman of ehr beauty and power deserved.

His attack was stopped as she suddenly stepped aside, making sure that the lightsaber did not meet its intended target. Jaden was startled and almost ran into the opposing wall. His anger erupted like a volcano, no more than a volcano. The lightsaber hummed as if with annoyance at not striking into flesh, and it wanted more.

He quickly turned around and gracefully avoided a collision with the opposing wall. Jaden then lunged at the woman again, growling in anger. He tried to stab and slash at her, hoping to land a hit, no, knowing that a hit would land. The attempts to attack the woman personified his attitude, furious and vengeful.
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Her blood was racing, she was excited she enjoyed the futile attempt of pray every time; the lust to kill was intoxicating even if it wasn’t her own. She smiled wider the white of her teeth turning red from the hue of the lightsabre again as it lunged towards her in the futile savage manner Jaden was displaying.

Her feet seemed to flow against the on coming light, with a simple step and twist the sabre passed by her ample chest with ease and a clear safe zone showing how effortless it was to dodge such an un-nurtured mind in the art of fighting. Rubbing salt into Jaden’s already injured ego the woman reached out with her left hand and graved his chin softly caringly; her skin was so soft it felt as if only an air current had been pressed against his youthful chin.

The next attack was just as futile as she smirked again now still stepping back once more before sharply forward towards Jaden, and rolling around his side pressing her back against his arm and throwing her cape up purposefully into his face to disorientate him. She was enjoying this little dance though her partner could have been a little more refined for her tastes but the young was always so invigorating with their unpredictability.

Unspoken she chuckled as she stood behind Jaden again her right hand still pressed again her side lightly unwilling to finish their dance just yet, she enjoyed toying with her prey first and liked to savour in their last moments of life.
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Jaden stopped for a moment, to have a quick moment of rest and to fully analyze the situation. The first problem of course was that the woman was not dead yet, and the more important matter was that she was toying with him. He reran the scene in his head hundreds of times in the course of a couple seconds.

Jaden started to see through the red haze, and realized that brute force would not kill this woman like it had for so many others. The red hue shined off of his face to show a smirk and broad, shiny teeth. Jaden looked at the woman and then rubbed his cheek where the woman had ever so softly touched his cheek.It left dirt, grime, and residue, but the touch still felt as if it were there.

The anger at realizing the full extent of this fight, that it was only a mere fight for one of them propelled Jaden into even more range. He ran at the woman and jumped into the air, slashing his blade in a circular motion aimed for the woman's throat.
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With lightning fast reflexes the woman threw up her right hand and ignited her own red lightsabre and let it forcibly contact with Jadens’ and hold him in place after his feet feel back to the floor.

“Well, there maybe a future for you yet boy, you show some promise after all. I guess I had better test you than just send you to the slaughter.”

The two sabres crackled and sizzled as they slid together with the woman adding in strength that a slender body like hers shouldn’t have. They push she added was enough to make Jaden have to fall back a few steps as she laughed out loud for once and slashed quickly with her uniquely curved hilted lightsabre. Her movements were smooth and thought out someone who was fully trained in the way of the lightsabre unlike the novice Jaden and his careless attempts. Her slash had started high, high enough to stick into the roof melting the material effortlessly showing the power of her lightsabre and how deadly it was as well as Jadens.
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