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| Silber rache | Nov 29 2008, 06:24 PM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Karakurenai Ookami Alias: Crimson Gender: Female Age: 15 Country of Origin and Village: Hidden Sand Current Residence: Residence within the Hidden Sand village History: She was the first born daughter of a great shinobi family whom had spent their lives through generation after generation protecting the land of Sunagakure. For the best part of three decades the Ookami family specialized in wind based jutsu, the males even seeking out actively wind chakra females to marry to carry on the lineage with the hope that one day it may even become a blood line limit, but to this day it continues to just be a speciality in which they have at their disposal. The family had expect the child to be a male, but where still quite happy to find that their child turned out to be a beautiful baby girl, with their hopes and dreams of her future clear to see in their very eyes if you were to look into them. As she grew up though, she didn't turn out to be the darling child that they had hoped and prayed she would turn out to be, any chance she got, she would be causing some form of mischief, enjoying terrorizing the house and the neighbours with her hyperactive antics. Though the only pleasing factor is that, even at a young age, she was growing to know the family jutsu quite well, performing it quite adeptly. The biggest downfall to this was that she used it for new ways to cause destruction, which again pained her parents cause they had no idea how to get that aspect of control over her hyper active nature. Once she was around six years old, they managed to get her into the ninja academy of Sunagakure, praying that it would finally manage to get her head back into the family ways, less about bouncing around having fun, and more about protecting the village that they had once sworn to protect. It didn't seem to have that effect though, not in the short term at least, she still loved causing havoc, but now she had other children to drag down with her, though most of them being quite happy to take the fall for the fun they where having. She very quickly established herself as the alpha of the group, taking the lead of most of the little mission that she would think up to put a spanner in the works of Suna, even if it was in a playful fashion. As the years went on though she started to notice the other shinobi, the other females of her class, one in particular being Temari. Her mother and father had once been assigned, and in many occasions still where at that point, to protecting the Kazekage, and his family, so she had noticed her a few times before hand. This though, was the first time she looked at her as a warrior instead of a girl, admiring the beautiful grace and power that the young genin should through her early missions as she began to establish herself as one of Suna's shinobi. Karakurenai had decided from that moment on, she wanted to be more like Temari, beautiful, proud, strong, graceful... She wanted to be all of that as well. So for the next few years she dedicated herself to following in Temari's footsteps, training almost constantly to try and get herself to the same level as the girl she admired. For that time, her parents couldn't of been more proud, beginning finally to believe that she would be the next Suna protector, and someone that her younger brother, whom had only been born when she had turned 10, would look up to, much like she had Temari. Though, like all good things, it had to come to an end, as she got closer to the graduation years, she began to fall back into her old ways, causing mischief once more... though no where near on as grand a scale, it was now a lot more controlled with the knowledge that she had picked up over the years. As she reached the age of 12 she went for her test to make Genin, passing it first time, with a few laughs from the other members of her class as she took it upon herself to do silly improvisations on some of the techniques she was asked to perform. Regardless of the stupidity shown, she managed to pass and become a full fledged shinobi. Suna at the time, being understaffed, she was assigned to work under the recently promoted Temari as her sensei, something that she loved at the beginning. Soon though, she would find that Temari was a much tougher teacher than she first imagined, though it wasn't without its positives, she still would of rather had a sensei whom she could of chilled out with from time to time, something she could of never imagined experiencing with Temari. As the years passed and she got closer to 15, the chunin exams came around once more, Temari having the confidence in her group of genin, chose to put them forward to go for the exams in Konoha. She felt an overwhelming honour that Temari thought that of her, that she began to relax around her sensei once more, and calming down her personality as well to try and stop the shouting so she could enjoy the team ethic they were beginning to build. The tests themselves went rather well, finding out soon after the performance that she was to be named a chunin with the rest of her squad. Later that year, her sensei's brother was taken, and she had vowed to Temari that she would do whatever it took to help and save him and help bring him back to Suna where he belonged as the Kazekage, finally taking on the business that her family had been doing for decades. She was part of the main group that had, at first been stationed to watch out for enemy attackers, before being sent out to where Naruto and the rest of Team Kakashi worked to save Gaara, to bring him back alive. She was relieved when Gaara was brought back to life, knowing that she could never look her parents in the face if she was to be the first Ookami to fail in her duties. Rank: Chunin Faction: Sunagakure Team: Team Whirlwind Chakra Affinity/Specialty:
Characteristics Visual Appearance: ![]() Physical Appearance: A true beauty behold is this young woman, from her beautiful Crimson eyes to her short brown hair which reaches just lower than her face. She is around 5’4” in height, and as such looks petit at times. Beautiful smooth skin covers her hour glass, and curvaceous body , her curvy build drawing attention to her slightly larger than average breasts. Haven been through many battle in her past, she has picked up her fair share of wear and tear at times. A wound etches across her toned stomach from a battle with a genin, who’s kunai tore deep into her flesh, though it is healed, the faint outline of the scar remains. Her worst is along the top of her back where she was cut in training when she was in the Shinobi Academy Clothing and Armor: A brown kimono style dress with the sleeves removed for easier movement, using a sash which is of a dark shade of brown to tie round her slender waist. Under the kimono she wears a fishnet style short sleeve top. She usually wears a scarf Personality: She can be quite the childish person at times, only serious when the time calls for it. Though she would prefer to have a good time than be deadly serious, though the situation when she first became a genin, rarely occurred, now that she is a Chunin she has to be serious a lot more often. Though if one of her friends are in trouble, she usually waits till the last minute so she can be the big ‘hero’, unless she sees them being in genuine trouble before that. She is kind, and helpful to her friends mostly, though she can at times be like the wind, either calm or destructive and punishing. Weapons shuriken, kunai, rope, explosive tags, steel wire, kept in a pouch either attached to her thigh or attached to a belt on her lower back. Weapon Name: Kaze no Ookami Weapon Description: A pair of Sickle like weapons that she can attach to each other using a chain. Photo of Weapon (Optional): ![]() Range: Mid-Long Special Abilities (If Any): Can Channel wind through the weapons to increase the strength of her own techniques. Is used to produce her whirlwind technique. Kekkei Genkai N/a Jutsus Jutsu Name Great Cutting Whirlwind Technique (Daikamaitachi no Jutsu) Rank: B Element: Wind Range: All ranges Type: Offensive/Defensive Effect: A more powerful version of the Cutting Whirlwind Technique. Jutsu Name Summoning Technique: Fang Dance (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kiba no Mai) Rank: C/B Element: Wind Range: All ranges Type: All of the above Effect: One of Karakurenai's most devastating techniques. She summons ; sickle holding weasel, when it appears, it begins spinning the sickles attached to a chain, with forward slashes it creates a technique much like the cutting whirlwind, except stronger, though to conserve power, it doesn't move much, when it does move, it moves quickly. The technique only lasts a short amount of time before the summon is deactivated. The rank of the technique is determined by the chakra sacrifce she makes, if she instantly summons Kiba No Mai, then it is a C rank jutsu, but if she charges it up (over one or two posts) the summon is stronger, verging on B rank. Jutsu Name Mystical Palm Technique Rank: A-rank Range: 0-5 meters short Type: Supplementary Effect: The Mystical Palm Technique is a multipurpose technique that can heal wounds and perform surgery. To heal with the ability, users collect chakra to their hand to speed up cell regeneration wherever it is applied. For the latter, the user focuses their chakra into a blade to make cuts where necessary, though because the blade is made of chakra the flesh is never cut. This aspect of the ability can be used in combat, though it requires great precision to be effective. When utilized in combat it allows the user to sever their opponent's muscle fibers or their chakra circulatory system at the point of contact. Jutsu Name Kaze Bunshin No Jutsu Rank: B-rank Range: short-long Type: Supplementary Effect: The User summons the power of the wind to form a clone of him/herself, similar to the shadow clone jutsu Jutsu Name Soaring Phoenix Claw Rank:A Type: Offensive Effect: Upon performing a series of Hand seals, The user grips his/her wrist, focusing chakra into his palm in the form of wind, sort of like a mini hurricane on their hand, forming into a ball, sparking and striking. Is used much like the Chidori and Rasengan as it is a form of both. Jutsu Name Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique) Rank: D-rank Element: Range: Type: Supplementary Effect: A high-speed movement technique. It is described as 'appearing with the wind and disappearing like the wind.' It's a very basic jutsu and it appears that most shinobi above Genin-rank know it. Using chakra to activate the body, the user is able to move from one point to another with extreme speeds. This super-fast movement is almost impossible to see with the naked eye. To a normal person, it would seem as if the user has teleported. The amount of Chakra used depends on the distance and elevation between the user and the destination. Jutsu Name Renkudan (wind release: Drilling Air Bullet) Rank: C-rank Element: wind Range: all ranges Type: offensive Effect: takes a deep breathe and shoots a large compressed ball of air at the opponent, causing an enormous conflagration if it hits. |
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| TFE Magnus | Nov 29 2008, 06:36 PM Post #2 |
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Know this isn't done yet, but a few questions and points. Faction would be Sunagakure if she's indeed a current Hidden Sand ninja. Who's exactly are the members of this Team "Whirlwind"? Is Karakurenai her first name? |
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| Silber rache | Nov 29 2008, 06:54 PM Post #3 |
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its more her ninja team is called team whirlwind, its the team set up with Temari as the Jonin sensei, me, momo and a few others discussed the formation of the team earlier. So its no different than the likes of Team Kakashi etc. And yes, Karakurenai is her first name lol Members:
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| TFE Magnus | Nov 29 2008, 07:05 PM Post #4 |
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Negro please.
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Oh, is it a present Kappa character or has he yet to post his? |
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| Silber rache | Nov 29 2008, 07:46 PM Post #5 |
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its yet to be posted I believe, I think he's gonna work on it and put it up ![]() either way, the profile is ready for your review
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| TFE Magnus | Nov 29 2008, 07:52 PM Post #6 |
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How do you have Kamatari? Seems like it'd probably be a Temari-unique one, unless she introduced you to Temari and you made a contract or it's a different weasel with a different name. |
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| Silber rache | Nov 29 2008, 07:55 PM Post #7 |
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I imagined it be a pact that she made from the teachings of Temari, but it'd likely be a different weasel she would summon, though definitely taught by her sensei, but Temari would of had her create the blood bond and contract. |
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| TFE Magnus | Nov 29 2008, 07:58 PM Post #8 |
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Well okay then, take out Kamatari and add a different weasel summon with different abilities at least, maybe weaker since Temari's summoning at a jonin level.
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| Silber rache | Nov 29 2008, 08:06 PM Post #9 |
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ok, there ya go, the weasel she summons is now called Kiba No Mai |
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| TFE Magnus | Nov 29 2008, 09:23 PM Post #10 |
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Negro please.
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Approved, I suppose I'll list this team when it's fully completed. |
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