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[Atredis] Hei Namtetsu; Jonin/Squadron Serpent
Topic Started: Nov 28 2008, 07:48 PM (122 Views)
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General Information
Name: Hei Namtetsu
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Gender: Male
Age: 42
Country of Origin and Village: Land of Water, Village Hidden in the Mists
Current Residence: Land of Fire
Rank: Jonin
History: Hei was born into a nin family and thus was sent to the academy at a young age. He graduated top of his class and reached Genin a few years later. He made Chunin at the age of 25. He was sent on many missions exceeding his rank knowing that he could do them with ease. He completed missions some had deemed suicidal showing his aptitude as a nin and as one who would never surrender. Finally at the age of 30 he was named a Jounin rank nin. There were voices within wanting to name him an ANBU member citing his skills. He turned down the ANBU offer, not wanting to have to be secretive. He fought on the front lines against many crime syndicates. He gained fame throughout the lands as a Genjutsu specialist. He soon learned of a rising presence called Akatsuki. He tried to warn the village of their power but with no avail. He soon left his country and became a missing nin. He journeyed across the world looking for others who knew about Akatsuki. He soon found his way to Sauske's Squad Serpent. He joined Team Dragon not having the full trust of Sauske. He brought many things to the table for Sauske including his use of genjutsu and his archery skills. He proved himself worthy by defeating several nin in only a few minutes in front of Sauske. Sauske liked the mans style and abilities but didn't fully trust him. Now Hei is a part of a Squadron who is directly faced with fighting his hated enemies Akatsuki.

Faction: Squadron Serpent
Team: Team Dragon
Chakra Affinity/Specialty: Water

Appearance: Posted Image
Physical Appearance: Hei stands at 6'1 with short blond hair and blue eyes. He is white and has a few scars under his armor.
Clothing and Armor: see pic
Personality: He is a caring person and is very loyal. He wants to utterly destroy Akatsuki because of what it represents and will stop it nothing to put a halt to their plans. He is open and will voice his opinion quite openly. He likes to have a good time and likes to see smiles on peoples faces.

Weapons
Weapon Name: Suju
Weapon Description: A long bow
Photo of Weapon (Optional): see char pic
Range: 200 yards
Special Abilities (If Any): The bow sucks in chakra from Hei and uses it to make the arrow pack more punch and travel drastically faster. The amount stored is variable on the time since the last shot. More shots equal less power.


Jutsu #1 Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Effect: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

Jutsu #2 Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique
Rank:D
Element:N/A
Range:Short
Effect: This jutsu causes the target to see a horrifying vision. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. After a short period, the illusion will begin. This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have moved before the illusion sets in. This jutsu is first seen when Kakashi used it on Sakura, transporting her into the forest and making her seeing a beat, bloody and near dead Sasuke illusion, causing her to scream and faint.

Jutsu #3 Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique
Rank: C
Element:N/A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Supplementary
Effect:Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a vision of fire. After Yoroi forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.

Jutsu #4 Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Element:Water
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Jutsu #5 Suishuu Gorugon - Water Attack Strong Current Torrential Rain
Rank: C
Element:Water
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Effect: Water Chakra is used to form a mass of water that is sent at the opponent in the form of a biting serpent.

Jutsu #6 Kokuangyou no Jutsu - Journey into Black Darkness Technique
Rank: A
Element:N/A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Supplementary
Effect:Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat.
Edited by Atredis, Nov 29 2008, 02:09 PM.
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Negro please.

You're missing parts of the template...team, faction, chakra affinity. Fill it out completely.
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edit done
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Negro please.

A bit overpowered, try to tone down his jutsu a bit and give him some weaknesses, at this point you're representing some super ninja archer who can easily dispatch anyone in a second like a god.
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re edited
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Negro please.

Eh, okay.
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