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[Jarose] Szanin Reno; Jonin/Konohagakure
Topic Started: Nov 24 2008, 10:49 PM (120 Views)
J-Rose
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Name: Szanin Reno
Alias: Broken titan or sane
Gender: male
Age: 21
Country of Origin and Village: Land of rain village hidden in the rain.
Current Residence: Village hidden in the Leaves
Faction: Konohagakure Jonin

History: He had a normal childhood... Even though when you are from the village hidden in the rain, you don't see the sunlight, but it was good. He liked playing in the rain so it didnt bother him. He then heard of the great ninja war when he was 10years old and wanted to see what the fuss was about. When he went to the area that people were running to, he saw a most horrifying sight. There was blood stained everywhere, people were screaming and crying, others just lied dead with out a physical scar to be seen. Then Akatsuki came... and things got a bit better but Szanin still didn't trust them so he packed up his clothes, somefood and a book called, Play5 and walked off. Although the borders of the country were heavily guarded they took him as a little kid that was lost from another village, so they let him go with out a problem. Reason he left: His parents died during the war.

After the long journey, he began to feel the stress of all the things he had seen and encountered in the past and through the journey. Just as the guards were about to question him, everything went black. After a day of being in the hospital and tossing and turning from the visions in his head, of a man with different colored rings in his eyes. Szanin finally wake up. When Szanin regained consciousness they told him that he was in very weak condition. But szanin being the hard headed ninja that he is, he got out of bed and walked out of the hospital, and began to do push ups. Now he is 21 years old and very wondering and a serious person. Though he thought things got better he knew that all the village did was trade one evil leader for another.



Chakra Affinity/Specialty: Taijutsu

Note: He doesn't train on anything but taijutsu,=. He only uses genjutsu when its like an ambush or a ninjutsu when he has the targets at strategically placed points.

Flows like water.

Characteristics

Visual Appearance: Any possible image goes here.

Physical Appearance: Szanin has a slender yet fit build, He is slender and lean but has very cut muscles. Has White strait hair that goes to his middle back, has Hazel Grey eyes and creamish skin thats lightly tanned


Clothing and Armor: Szanin wears black skintight muscle shirts sometimes with sleeves and sometimes without . Has black long pants. has black socks with grey slippers like the ones that Monkey D. Luffy has. He also wears a half tabard. Its like a normal tabard but with out the top part and its grey with black trim on it.
and also wears medical bands that wrap up almost to his elbow but only wears them under the long sleeved muscles shirts or can be seen if he wears no sleeved muscles shirt.



Personality: Layed back and cool. When there is a battle he is always at the front lines fighting.


Weapons


Weapon Name: Hairline Needle
Weapon Description: He plucks a strand of hair from his head and it shortens but becomes thicker making it seem like a shenbon needle but instead he has a limitless supply because the strand of hair that he pulls grows another one right when the taken one forms into a needle.
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Range: (0-5m short, 5-10m mid, 10+m long) All ranges
Special Abilities (If Any): Can cut everything that comes it contact with except the one who made it.



Jutsus

Jonin A through E


Jutsu Name Dance of the Broken Titan: Strength
Rank: A
Element: Taijutsu
Range: (0-5 meters short, 5-10 mid, 10+ long) Close to mid range
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Effect:
Szanin's palm's and feet begin to glow green and blue. what this glow is, is the chakra Szanin strengthened and holds there for as long as he needs to. It enhances, the power of the attack, Szanin's strength, and his own flow technique.

The flow is the first form which is the one he usually uses, the second form is when he gets glowing. the flow is like a passive flow on him. Its in all of his movement, he uses it to dodge most of the time, which doesn't require him to use any of his real speed or strength to dodge.


Jutsu #2 Name Shattered Giant
Rank: c
Element: Wind
Range: 5-10 mid
Type: Offensive
Effect: Szanin has seen Rock Lee do this attack, he then began trying it on enemies during missions. He then mastered it but with a twist. Instead of slamming the person down like lee or Guy he jumps off of their feet while the are in mid-air, impulsing down on the enemy during the jump, making them hit the ground head or face first.

Jutsu #3 Name Wind Gale
Rank:B
Element: Wind
Range: 5-10 mid
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Effect: He does do the same thing but instead of just one kick, Szanin balances himself on one hand and spins like a top, hitting enemies around him with great force because he covers his feet in the Dance of the Broken Titan technique, making his spin much faster and more painful when it hits.


Jutsu #4 Name Piercing Sky Uppercut
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Range: 5-10 mid, 10+ long
Type: Offensive
Effect: While using his signature flow and Dance of the Broken Titan szanin uppercuts the person with great force, sending them flying upword. This move is usually used to put the enemy into a strategic attack point in the air.

Jutsu #5 Name Dance of the Gentle Rain
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Range: (0-5 meters short, 5-10 mid, 10+ long)
Type: Offensive.
Effect: Szanin what he does is combine the power of the mega palm thrust of the Akimichi clan with the Hyuga clans Gentle Fist. He doesn't make his hands huge but he uses his ridiculous amount of physical strength and combines it with the gentle fist jutsu while also using his own Dance of the Broken Titan. But it does not block chakra points, it may fracture an organ or some bones but it does not mess with your chakra.

Death Foreseeing Technique


Jutsu #6 Name Fear of Forseeing.
Rank: C
Element: Wind
Range: (0-5 meters short, 5-10 mid, 10+ long)
Type: Offensive
effect: the user makes the target forsee their death while also making them find out it is a genjutsu there for when they dispell it the second genjutsu begins directly after making the user see their worst fear. Which starts off with five leaves flowing past the target making the genjutsu seem real. Also the effect of sly mind ability.



Jutsu #7 Name Split Earth Crushing Fault
Rank:C
Element: Earth
Range:All ranges
Type: Offensive
Effect: Szanin puts his palm on the earth and makes giant cracks go in all directions, Making the people in the surrounding area's fall into it and then it closes , crushing the enemy inside
Edited by J-Rose, Nov 28 2008, 03:29 AM.
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The temptation to leave this Ludicrous world behind is growing stronger... Although there are few of us who are able to break the chains binding us to this horrible reality... The are others who are weak-minded fools who let those same chains seal their fate to the world of reality.

May your imagination break you away from the mind torturing and mind numbing Status-Quo known as reality.
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Negro please.

You only have one jutsu? And you forgot to even take out the stuff in there that you don't need, like notes part of the template and the Kekkei Genkai section you're not even using.
Furthermore, your history is strange, since none of that really happens, you're twisting around a strange history of Amegakure and the Akatsuki. They weren't ruling the village until recently when Pein won the civil war. There's no way you would've seen them as a child, Deidara isn't even that old! You have a weirdass history.
You can just take out any mention of the Akatsuki and just say the killings happened because of a civil war or invasion or something, the Land of Rain was always full of random wars.

Furthermore, you confuse me, isn't your faction Konohagakure? How could your faction be Amegakure if you fled them for Konoha?

And also, I'm fine with your specialty being taijutsu, but only put that, get rid of the "One of the best in all of Konohagakure at taijutsu and also in akagakure" because you're NOT.
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I think its much better then it was before... But then again thats for you to say.
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May your imagination break you away from the mind torturing and mind numbing Status-Quo known as reality.
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Negro please.

Errr, I told you, Akatsuki and Pein couldn't have been attacking when he was five years old. Make it some ninja war or something.

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Furthermore, your history is strange, since none of that really happens, you're twisting around a strange history of Amegakure and the Akatsuki. They weren't ruling the village until recently when Pein won the civil war. There's no way you would've seen them as a child, Deidara isn't even that old! You have a weirdass history.
You can just take out any mention of the Akatsuki and just say the killings happened because of a civil war or invasion or something, the Land of Rain was always full of random wars.



And why get rid of the faction section entirely?
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Ok I edited =)
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Negro please.

Alright fine almost done, but Faction section?
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Negro please.

Eh, I can cope with this.

Approved, keep in mind guys and gals, you may have three characters in total this does not mean you absolutely have to have three but that it is the maximum of what you can have. However, you can only have one major canon character tops, so if you already took one major canon character your next character has to be an original or a minor canon character. I'll be the judge of what canons are major and minor, but common sense makes it obvious. Major members of the series and faction leaders, etc., are all usually major canons. But when in doubt, ask, it never hurts and maybe I'll allow you to have the canon you want.
Also remember that you can only have one character from each village or organization. ^_^
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