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| J-Rose | Nov 22 2008, 12:50 PM Post #1 |
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Name: First: Szanin Last: Jarose Alias: Sane Gender: Male. Age: 21 Country of Origin and Village: Village hidden in the Rain Current Residence: Village hidden in the leaves. History: He had a normal childhood... Even though when you are from the village hidden in the rain, you don't see the sunlight, but it was good. He liked playing in the rain so it didnt bother him. He then heard of the Akatsuki when he was 10years old and wanted to see what the fuss was about. When he went to the area that people were running to, he saw a most horrifying sight. There was blood stained everywhere, people were screaming and crying, others just lied dead with out a physical scar to be seen. After seeing this he packed up his clothes, somefood and a book called, Play5 and walked off. Although the borders of the country were heavily guarded they took him as a little kid that was lost from another village, so they let him go with out a problem. Reason he left: His parents died during the war. After the long journey, he began to feel the stress of all the things he had seen and encountered in the past and through the journey. Just as the guards were about to question him, everything went black. After a day of being in the hospital and tossing and turning from the visions in his head, of a man with different colored rings in his eyes. Szanin finally wake up. When Szanin regained consciousness they told him that he was in very weak condition. But szanin being the hard headed ninja that he is, he got out of bed and walked out of the hospital, and began to do push ups. Now he is 21 years old and very wondering and a serious person. Though he thought things got better he knew that all the village did was trade one evil leader for another. Rank: Jonin Team/Affiliation: Konohagakure Chakra Affinity/Specialty: Inexplicably good at Taijutsu. He has somewhat of a natural flow along with his movements, its unusual but in a good way. It alows him to dodge with out using to much energy or use his speed to much. Characteristics Visual Appearance:none Physical Appearance: Szanin has a slender yet fit build, He is slender and lean but has very cut muscles. Has White strait hair that goes to his middle back, has Hazel Grey eyes and creamish skin thats lightly tanned. Clothing and Armor: Szanin wears black skintight muscle shirts sometimes with sleeves and sometimes without . Has black long pants(Like Hiei's baggy pants from YuYu hakusho.) has black socks with grey slippers. He also wears a half tabard. Its like a normal tabard but with out the top part and its grey with black trim on it. and also wears medical bands that wrap up almost to his elbow but only wears them under the long sleeved muscles shirts or can be seen if he wears no sleeved muscles shirt. Personality: Most of the time he is a cool layed back person, but when someone gets him going for a fight then he wont stop until the person is on the ground. Szanin is cool and layed back but can get serious when need be. His strengths are nothing specific, his weakness is seeing someone in danger. He remains calm at almost all sotuation but gets angry in a hostage situation. Weapons General ninja weapons, shuriken, kunai, rope, explosive tags, steel wire, or other weapons like senbon needles, swords, whips, etc. Please list these, and where your character keeps them. You can also make custom/special weapons/swords/ninja weapons/whatever as long as they aren't too farfetched, using the following template. Weapon Name: Poison Needle. Weapon Description: He plucks a hair out of his head and makes it into a needle which is all silver and as long as a kunai with poison at the tip of it which slowly kills the target with pain. Photo of Weapon (Optional): none Range: (0-5m short, 5-10m mid, 10+m long) No real range limit it can be thrown and also usd as a close melee weapon. Special Abilities (If Any): Pain/slow poison: Poison that slowly kills the target from the inside, the longer the battle then the worse the pain. Also slowing their reflexes in the process. Jutsus Original Jutsu: Dance of the Broken Titan. (He calls it that because when he was young and thought of all the things he had to overcome at the age of 8-10 during the journey from Village hidden in the rain to Konoha and all the starvation and fights with beasts he had. Long story short... He named thet attack because he got it during the journey and at the end of the journey fainted.) Rank: A Element: Wind Type:Offensive Range:)-5 meters. Effect: While using the dance of the broken titan his palms and (When his hand is balled up in a fist his whole fist starts glowing.) Also his feet strt glowing even thought it isn't really seen because of his black socks. The glow is chakra that was intensified and held their making his attacks, quicker, more agile, stronger, and more painful, also adds his own little style to it. It rivals lady Tsunade's strength but at times surpasses it. Weakness: The jutsu has no real weakness but if one of his friends or someone is in trouble he gets angry and also he well do anything the enemy asks from giving his own life to making money for them. But always finds a way at getting back at them. The Dance of the Broken Titan only lasts 6 posts and also can only be done once every thread. Jutsu #1 Name Drunken Fist Rank: B Element: Wind? Range: (0-5 meters short, 5-10 mid, 10+ long) no range. Type: Mostly defensive Effect: When Szanin gets drunk he becomes near unhittable and spends his time dodging and playing with the enemy thinking that the enemy is joking around. Jutsu #2 Name Shattered Giant Rank: c Element: Wind Range: 5-10 mid Type: Offensive Effect: Szanin has seen Rock Lee do this attack, he then began trying it on enemies during missions. He then mastered it but with a twist. Instead of slamming the person down like lee or Guy he jumps off of their feet while the are in mid-air, impulsing down on the enemy during the jump, making them hit the ground head or face first. Jutsu #3 Name Wind Gale Rank:B Element: Wind Range: 5-10 mid Type: Offensive, Defensive Effect: He does do the same thing but instead of just one kick, Szanin balances himself on one hand and spins like a top, hitting enemies around him with great force because he covers his feet in the Dance of the Broken Titan technique, making his spin much faster and more painful when it hits. Jutsu #4 Name Piercing Sky Uppercut Rank: B Element: Wind Range: 5-10 mid, 10+ long Type: Offensive Effect: While using his signature flow and Dance of the Broken Titan szanin uppercuts the person with great force, sending them flying upword. This move is usually used to put the enemy into a strategic attack point in the air. Jutsu #5 Name Dance of the Gentle Rain Rank: B Element: Wind Range: (0-5 meters short, 5-10 mid, 10+ long) Type: Offensive. Effect: Szanin what he does is combine the power of the mega palm thrust of the Akimichi clan with the Hyuga clans Gentle Fist. He doesn't make his hands huge but he uses his ridiculous amount of physical strength and combines it with the gentle fist jutsu while also using his own Dance of the Broken Titan. But it does not block chakra points, it may fracture an organ or some bones but it does not mess with your chakra. Death Foreseeing Technique Jutsu #6 Name Fear of Forseeing. Rank: C Element: Wind Range: (0-5 meters short, 5-10 mid, 10+ long) Type: Offensive effect: the user makes the target forsee their death while also making them find out it is a genjutsu there for when they dispell it the second genjutsu begins directly after making the user see their worst fear. Which starts off with five leaves flowing past the target making the genjutsu seem real. Also the effect of sly mind ability. Jutsu #7 Name Split Earth Crushing Fault Rank:C Element: Earth Range:All ranges Type: Offensive Effect: Szanin puts his palm on the earth and makes giant cracks go in all directions, Making the people in the surrounding area's fall into it and then it closes , crushing the enemy inside. Edited by Revan46, Nov 27 2008, 01:37 AM.
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| Revan46 | Nov 22 2008, 01:28 PM Post #2 |
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Shh...don't wake the baby. CRAP IT'S AWAKE, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!
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Let me know when your done. |
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| J-Rose | Nov 22 2008, 10:36 PM Post #3 |
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Hey I am done with profile. What do you think? |
[ The temptation to leave this Ludicrous world behind is growing stronger... Although there are few of us who are able to break the chains binding us to this horrible reality... The are others who are weak-minded fools who let those same chains seal their fate to the world of reality. May your imagination break you away from the mind torturing and mind numbing Status-Quo known as reality. | |
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| Revan46 | Nov 23 2008, 11:14 AM Post #4 |
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I'm sorry I am causing so many problems, I'm just a little iffy about passing and rivaling Tsunade's strength. I suppose it's okay as long as you don't post saying your always killing people with your blows. I ask that you add in your only allowed to use it one time per thread, and that it lasts for about five to six of your posts. If you add that in, you'll be all set. |
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| Revan46 | Nov 23 2008, 01:07 PM Post #5 |
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I edited your profile because I don't consider the Dance of The Broken Fist a Kekkei Genkai really. It's just an original jutsu you created. Otherwise it looks fine. Just start posting and keep in mind the rules and be careful not to powerplay. Approved, keep in mind guys and gals, you may have three characters in total, with a limit of two canon characters out of that. Do check out the Canon List and consider some stuff before the good characters are taken. Edited by Revan46, Nov 23 2008, 01:07 PM.
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| J-Rose | Nov 23 2008, 01:08 PM Post #6 |
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ok editted =) please check it out. |
[ The temptation to leave this Ludicrous world behind is growing stronger... Although there are few of us who are able to break the chains binding us to this horrible reality... The are others who are weak-minded fools who let those same chains seal their fate to the world of reality. May your imagination break you away from the mind torturing and mind numbing Status-Quo known as reality. | |
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| Revan46 | Nov 23 2008, 01:17 PM Post #7 |
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You didn't have to edit anything, I did the editing. No more posting in this thread please. |
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| Corynder | Nov 23 2008, 01:33 PM Post #8 |
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Arti'ws m? a? xrusope'dillos A?u'ws.
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Um. What about the wars before Pein showed up? He's old enough to remember them, he would have been 10 when Pein put a stop to it. How did he get past the Amegakure borders? (They don't let anyone out or anyone in.) Only Pein and Konan were in Amegakure. The rest of Akatsuki, though members of Akatsuki, seperated ways and stayed hidden for nine years. He wouldn't have seen them. It DOES stop raining in Amegakure. |
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| Revan46 | Nov 25 2008, 10:54 AM Post #9 |
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I will correct it Cory, stop modding my rp.
Edited by Revan46, Nov 25 2008, 10:55 AM.
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| Revan46 | Nov 25 2008, 02:54 PM Post #10 |
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So I'm sorry to do this but Cory's right. Can you redo your history to include points she mentioned? Take out the Deidara killing your parents, explain how you escaped Amegakure, and what happened to him when Pein arrived? |
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| Revan46 | Nov 26 2008, 11:09 AM Post #11 |
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Well I am still iffy, but it's better than it was. Just make sure not to use the same profile for other Naruto rps, such as Death Before Dishonour, I'm not sure they'll be as lenient. |
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| Revan46 | Nov 27 2008, 01:37 AM Post #12 |
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I'm just letting you know I edited your history because Pein would not have come when you were a child. And I changed your affiliation to Konoha. If your in Konoha that is your affiliation NOT Rain. |
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| Corynder | Nov 27 2008, 03:29 AM Post #13 |
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Arti'ws m? a? xrusope'dillos A?u'ws.
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Just letting you know... the reason we get obsessive about this with you, and I mean anyone who's talked to you on the site, is because we expect this from EVERYONE. It's not a personal thing. It's so that everyone does the same effort... so no one feels like they put more effort into something than another |
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| J-Rose | Nov 27 2008, 07:09 AM Post #14 |
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its cool and thanks Revan =) |
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