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[System] Shivan Empire
Topic Started: Nov 14 2008, 06:55 PM (153 Views)
Niroth
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System Name: Shivan Empire
Original or Canon?: Mix
Capital Planet: Shiva
Other Heavenly Bodies: X'all I - IV, Shiva's moons.
Government: Imperial
Leader: An enigmatic figure known as "Overlord"

Races:

Shivans - Large, four-legged spidery creatures that are around 80% machine. Shivans have been questioned whether to be created, or if they created themselves. No one has seen the race without their mechanical shell. On the head of the body, are seven eyes, as well as two large tentacle-like claws on the back that are probably used to grab things, or access things. Two large energy cannons are attached to arms at the front for combat-forms. They communicate through high and low frequency screeches, or through "linking", a similar process to a chat room. The species rely on a hive-mind. Beneath the mechanical shells, are large slug-like creatures. Shivans breath a combination of toxic chemicals mostly, but their young have a strange effect on Oxygen based environments, as it accelerates their growth with a better outcome of no defects. However, the oxygen becomes as useless for them as CO2 is to us.


Economic Tier: 3
History:
Shivans are a slug-like race, that live in a hive-mind environment. Shiva has been their home for their entire lives, and slowly but surely, they've been developing technology. However, the Shivans were weak. They're population relied entirely on numbers of power. The species's only attack were stingers, and it took around four to take on a small predator. They should have been extinct with these facts. However, when things looked a little bleak, a so called "Alpha" of their species rose up in power and intelligence. This Alpha lead the Shivans to a golden age of technology and prosperity, thwarting any enemies in their way with new technologies. Now, their old hive had been remodeled in a major way, now called the "Overworld Spire". All Shivans are covered in robotic exo-suits, and the species is practically manufactured at mass-production level to ensure they don't die out. A gigantic city spreads around this spire, as the Shivans begin to turn their eyes to the stars.
Major Cities: The single Shivan "City" on Shiva is made up of city-size areas. Here are the current sectors and their uses:
- Overworld Spire (extremely large tower in the center of all this crap. Capital and command area of all Shivan activity)

- Breeding Sector (Large constructs made to breed new Shivans safely)

- Construct Sector (Large factories designed to construct weapons, mechanical bodies, pretty much everything they use)

- Reserve Sector (Where all completed Shivans reside)

- Military Reserve Sector (Large constructs designed to contain all matter of military creations)
Population: Approximately 15,000,000 last planetary census
Planetary Defense:
- Tier 4 Space Platform
Military:
1st Shivan Corps
75,000 Infantry
25,000 Artillery
25,000 Tanks

2nd Shivan Corps
75,000 Infantry
25,000 Artillery
20,000 Tanks

3rd Shivan Corps
75,000 Infantry
20,000 Artillery
15,000 Tanks

Navy:
Imperial Fleet
100 Subspace Fighters
45 Bombers
3 Cruisers
Edited by Jeff, Nov 20 2008, 10:00 PM.
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Note: When determining the population, take the fact that the species is pretty much mass produced instead of regular breeding methods.
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I've got a Ph.D in kicking your ass.

Ok, the point of your planet's history section is to actually make a history, not to say that its mysterious and unknown. Fine if you don't want to tell other races your history, but you still actually need one. Also, no dimensional drives. Everyone is warp tech, and nobody is simply vanish and appear someplace else via dimension drive. All in all, what I mean is when you have a history section, actually fill it up with a history, don't cloud your origin and use the rest of the space as an excuse to creat over-powered technology.
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Kaworu's eyes suddenly widened in anger and exertion, putting a good deal of spiritual power and physical strength into himself as he slammed his spear shaft vertically forward against Jeff's locked blade to send him back.

"And you would give your life for such a meaningless task? Delaying me will not halt my goals."

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A'ight. I'll make the necessary changes.
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I've got a Ph.D in kicking your ass.

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Kaworu's eyes suddenly widened in anger and exertion, putting a good deal of spiritual power and physical strength into himself as he slammed his spear shaft vertically forward against Jeff's locked blade to send him back.

"And you would give your life for such a meaningless task? Delaying me will not halt my goals."

Yes, I fought Kaworu. And I lived.[RPGData:10005|9|28|56|3|3|482|222|Dragon Sword|Dragon Armor|Dwarf|40551|None|None|134|6|1|0|None|NaN|None|The Klu Klux Klan]
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Recruitment has been stepped up. As well, Harbinger has been sent to explore the nearby systems.
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Plasma Artillery is finished. Artillery units are now more powerful.
Edited by Niroth, Dec 30 2008, 10:20 AM.
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