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[System] Socialist Coruscant Empire; Coruscant
Topic Started: Nov 11 2008, 07:58 AM (248 Views)
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System Name:
Socialist Coruscant Empire

Original or Canon?:
Mixture

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Capital Planet:
Coruscant

Other Heavenly Bodies:
4 Moons (couldn't find names so i made my own to fit) :
Marflous (Military Training done on this)
Hulake (A lot of Industry done on this planet main shipbuilding)
Frekiu (Most Agriculture)
Foosa (Prison)

co-ordinates
(53,36)

Government:
Communist

Leader:
Primar Philip Hack

Races:
Coruscanti Humans 100%

Currency
Corusot

Economic Tier: 1


History:
The Coruscant humans have been around in civilised communities for 40,000 years. The most changes though have occured in the last 200 years.

The year of 49,836 SC (Since Civilisation) Coruscant countries were facing energy shortages due to 20,000 years of heavy industrilisation using many natural resources. The economic powerhouses of the east had destroyed much of the natural habitat within their countries and vast cities flowed endlessly in some places from border to border. The huge wastelands of the west are where most people live and held most of the resources.

By 49,852 SC the Eastern cities were loosing power with huge power cuts shutting down swathes of urban area. War was declared by the Eastern Alliance on the Western Iron Pact. A war of attrition cost 32,000,000 lives over all. Vast peoples armies were conscripted and technology went on in leapps and bounds. Lasers, tanks, bolt guns and power armour all was built in Millions! The Estern alliance quelled the final western resistance in 49,864 SC and peace at last prevailed just in time as the Military fuel stockpiles built up before the war were dangerously low. A huge monument was built to honour the dead of both sides with nearly 19,000,000 million head stones in the boundries.

The wastelands of the west were even more decimated with the huge shanti cities were just piles of scrap. In 49868 the east moved their factories from the cities of the East to the west where the 20,000,000 million westerners work pretty much as servants.

In 49892 the Eastern Alliance moulded and with the common Coruscanti language formed one country under the radical leader Marshall Gorgos Markosich.

Over a period of 20 years Markosich revolutionised the planet. He increased the number of wildlife reserves and he increased the number of hydrogen and nuclear fusion plants that guarenteed clean energy for 1000s of years to come. He colonised the 4 moons and turned the smallest (30 miles in diameter) into a massive prison. One was set aside in 49910 SL for military production and training to improve Coruscants defence force. A further one was made into an agricultural mega state run farm. Finally in 49912 Industry and the remaining Westerners was moved to the last moon where they have their own local government and enjoy many more freedoms aswell as full Coruscant citizenship. A careful watch is kept by a huge police force.

By 49932 Marshall Markosich had died, and Coruscant mourned his death and built a huge statue. Political unease occured and an interim government lasted for a year before it went severly bankrupt from building so many public amenities and services, major companies had wildly overcharged the government. Though a new man came to the fray, a strong charismatic man, he valued the ideals of Markosich but also believed in giving more power to the many poor who now worked and lived in the slums, this man was Edward Brooks. He noticed the massive divide between rish and poor and how the beautiful Coruscant cities were slowly dying. He turned Coruscant communist, ejected the power corupt officials and changed the government. The people hailed him and coruscant grew from the dust. All people now lived in wonderful houses and had more money to spend on consumer items. Medicine and science again with increased state spending flourished. Communism worked here as there was no corruption, everyone genuinely was equal. People chose how to spend their money so obviously houses were different but living qualities improved, people took more holiday time industry and technology sky rocketed,

Coruscanti people are very happy. The new Primar Hack is now concentrated on improving the economy of this great nation and building up the treasury to spend on scientific and military endeavours. The troops will fight to the death for the glory of the motherland and the defence of their homes He has also in the last 20 years instigated a national service programme where everyone serves for at least 3 years in the army and then they can choose if to stay on or not. He has made the people believe in themselves as a species and that they can do good for the empire. He is ready to bring them into a new age of space discovery and conquest.

Major Cities:
Brooks City (Capital)
Hackograd
Markosichgrad
Ostgrad
Primgrad
Husanegrad
Maugrad

Sites in Brooks City
Great monument to the dead, 19,000,000 men buried here from the East West war One of the few green places in Brooks city
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Government Forum, huge building to fit all government official almost a mile square
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Gladiator Orditorium, one of the favorite sports of the coruscanti people.
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Space Research building, tallest building in Coruscant
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Coruscant international university
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Coruscant Intergalatic Space Port
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Population: Approximately 18,000,000,000 last planetary census
Planetary Defense: (Everyone starts with a tier 4 space platform and may fill your defense pads by PMing me via research)

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Military:
1st Red Army
500,0000 Infantry
100,000 Artillery
100,000 Tanks

2nd Red Army
500,0000 Infantry
100,000 Artillery
100,000 Tanks

3rd Red Army
500,0000 Infantry
100,000 Artillery
100,000 Tanks

4th Red Army
500,0000 Infantry
100,000 Artillery
100,000 Tanks

5th Red Army
250,000 Infantry
50,000 Artillery
50,000 Tanks

Navy:
Main Coruscaunti Fleet
150 Subspace Fighters
55 Bombers
5 Cruisers

Coruscaunti Secondary Fleet
100 Subspace Fighters
35 Bombers
3 Cruisers
Edited by Philsthemanalhack, Dec 7 2008, 10:55 AM.
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I'm not going to delete this thread, purely in the interest of not being a tyrannical bastard, but when exactly did we say this was open for threads to be put up? We didn't. Its not ready yet. Locked until launch.
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Okay dude, what is with your history? First its completely and utterly broken and makes very little sense.
Like this example here.

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Trotots they habited over the whole surface of the planet and lived happily. They liked science and maths and made many technological discoveries but infighting made sure none of this got off the ground.


Okay so they were happy... but with wars? so were they happily fighting? and this little bit of history makes no sense here.

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Understandibly friction grew as the Trotots became restless of the Human prescence and many had started dying of human diseases such as the flu and common cold as unlike most things the Trotots relied on Gods rather than Medicine.


Okay they liked math and Science yet never thought to try curing their colds? So they suddenly turn to god, even though they made "many technological discoveries" as you put it.


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A massive interstella rocket fleet had been built but these ships were very basic, no steering or outside comunication they were just pointed and luanched.


No steering? How the fuck did you land?

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On earth things were very dicey the 20th world war had started up and the world was ravaged again


umm.. Earth has its own history, you should try to make yours fit theirs, it seems like that would make sense, since you’re from the same planet.

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70 years past on board


umm.. These basic ships that have... No Steering! and can’t go LightSpeed! somehow make it halfway across the galaxy... in 70 years! Come on... be more realistic please.

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The British Government hastily prepared defences and weapons, a destructive war lasted for 40 years with an estimated 300,000 human casualties but their inginuety caused 2 million Trotot casualties


umm, a destructive 40 year war only brings 300,000 human casualties? I thought you mentioned these Trotots had "many technological discoveries" why could they not put up more of a fight? not to mention you said they were fighting all the time before you arrived, so would they not have experience doing so?

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Though a new Dictatorial reigeme took over the British government and soon a new war for the conquering of the planet ensued


Your system name is the British Coruscanti Republic is it not?

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1000s and 1000s of years past... The Army is extremely experienced and large after many wars with the Trotots


You slaughtered them "1000s and 1000s" of years ago, how can they still be that strong all those years later!?

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The all powerful British Coruscant Republic now is home to 1 trillion people who follow the Jedi religion with many temples and churches


First of all, you’re not All powerful, second, while the Force does exist no churches and religions have poped up yet.


This whole thing is just sad and needs to be completely done over.
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Can you recheck my history and im sorry
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I'm sorry, but you editted minor things about this history, our instructions was to completely redo it altogether. You still aren't anywhere near the same timeline as our earth (if you could actually check that please). The entire thing as a whole needs to be completely redone, not just little snipets, as in scrap the story, make a new one. Thank you.

Edit: The only way we'd let this fly is if your Brits had only recently arrived and now work with the local Coruscant people.
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Kaworu's eyes suddenly widened in anger and exertion, putting a good deal of spiritual power and physical strength into himself as he slammed his spear shaft vertically forward against Jeff's locked blade to send him back.

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Changed History again
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I know you haven't approved my thread but i thought i'd do a map anyways i'll do some city ones soon
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Edited by Philsthemanalhack, Nov 21 2008, 01:08 PM.
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Approved, finally.
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Planetary Defense Grid will take 4 weeks and use 4 ground pads.
500,000 infantry will take a week per 250,000.
1 cruiser 2 weeks
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