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| Roffamaffia | Nov 9 2008, 10:11 AM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Kuchiki Tenshu Alias: Kuchiki Gender: Male Age: 19 Birthdate: 24/7 Birthplace: Soul Society Current Residence: Soul Society/Rukongai History: Son of Kuchiki Byakuya , Born in Soul Society as a member of the Noble Kuchiki Clan , he lost his older brother Kuchiki Tentei. Appearance Visual Appearance: Physical Appearance: Same hair as Kuchiki Byakuya , red eyes , big scar on his back received from a menos Clothing and Armor: Same clothes as Kuchiki Byakuya Personality: Just like Kuchiki Byakuya. Visual Age: Not too old Division: 6th Squad Divisions: Nop Rank: Vice-Captain Zanpakutou Zanpakutou Name: Ikusen heika Spirit Appearance: Medium size , very sharp , very long Inner World: :S Sealed Form: Small Shikai Shikai Release Phrase: Ikai! Shikai Appearance: Shikai Abilities: Obtain incredible speed , anyone who touches the shikai becomes parilyzed for 10 seconds Bankai - Still need to learn Bankai Bankai Name: What is the name of your bankai? Bankai Appearance: What does your Zanpakutou look like after you have released it? Bankai Abilities: What does your Bankai do? Describe the ability of your Bankai in detail and what strengths and weaknesses are gained upon using it. (1 to 3 abilities allowed, depending on the strength of your character and their stage of mastering their Bankai.) Learned Kidou: 4. White Lightning 62. Hundred Stepped Rails 61. Six Rods Prison of Light 33. Blue Fire, Crash Down 88. Flying Dragon Striking, Heaven-Shaking, Lightning Cannon 31. Shot of Red Fire Edited by Roffamaffia, Nov 9 2008, 10:28 AM.
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| Deleted User | Nov 10 2008, 02:03 PM Post #2 |
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Er... really? Do you really expect me to accept this profile? First of all, I don't know if you noticed, but Kuchiki Byakuya did not have a son. Second, the spot for 6th Division Vice Captain is closed. Last, but definitly not least, this profile is WEAK. Let me repeat: WEAK. The general construction is done wrong, the story is bellow weakest, and the zanpakotou is an excuse to one hit wins. Sorry, but unless you re-do completely this profile, this is a candidate to Rejected Profiles. And if you re-do the profile, try to take off the "I waz related to Kuchiki Byakuya or anyone in his family"...
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