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[Roffamaffia]Kuchiki Tenshu
Topic Started: Nov 9 2008, 10:11 AM (52 Views)
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General Information
Name: Kuchiki Tenshu
Alias: Kuchiki
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birthdate: 24/7
Birthplace: Soul Society
Current Residence: Soul Society/Rukongai
History: Son of Kuchiki Byakuya , Born in Soul Society as a member of the Noble Kuchiki Clan , he lost his older brother Kuchiki Tentei.

Appearance
Visual Appearance:
Physical Appearance: Same hair as Kuchiki Byakuya , red eyes , big scar on his back received from a menos
Clothing and Armor: Same clothes as Kuchiki Byakuya
Personality: Just like Kuchiki Byakuya.




Visual Age: Not too old
Division: 6th Squad
Divisions: Nop
Rank: Vice-Captain

Zanpakutou
Zanpakutou Name: Ikusen heika
Spirit Appearance: Medium size , very sharp , very long
Inner World: :S
Sealed Form: Small

Shikai
Shikai Release Phrase: Ikai!
Shikai Appearance:
Shikai Abilities: Obtain incredible speed , anyone who touches the shikai becomes parilyzed for 10 seconds

Bankai - Still need to learn Bankai
Bankai Name: What is the name of your bankai?
Bankai Appearance: What does your Zanpakutou look like after you have released it?
Bankai Abilities: What does your Bankai do? Describe the ability of your Bankai in detail and what strengths and weaknesses are gained upon using it. (1 to 3 abilities allowed, depending on the strength of your character and their stage of mastering their Bankai.)

Learned Kidou:
4. White Lightning
62. Hundred Stepped Rails
61. Six Rods Prison of Light
33. Blue Fire, Crash Down
88. Flying Dragon Striking, Heaven-Shaking, Lightning Cannon
31. Shot of Red Fire
Edited by Roffamaffia, Nov 9 2008, 10:28 AM.
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Er... really? Do you really expect me to accept this profile? First of all, I don't know if you noticed, but Kuchiki Byakuya did not have a son. Second, the spot for 6th Division Vice Captain is closed. Last, but definitly not least, this profile is WEAK. Let me repeat: WEAK. The general construction is done wrong, the story is bellow weakest, and the zanpakotou is an excuse to one hit wins. Sorry, but unless you re-do completely this profile, this is a candidate to Rejected Profiles.

And if you re-do the profile, try to take off the "I waz related to Kuchiki Byakuya or anyone in his family"... :)
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