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| Lucario | Nov 4 2008, 02:35 PM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Lucario Hayashi Alias: Demon of the Fallen Ash Gender: Male Age: 1576 appears 21 Birthdate: September, 26, 432 Birthplace: Hinzo, Japan Current Residence: wonderer History: During his time that he was alive had a mother and father and two sisters. He was the youngest and his family traveled from place to place. At the age of five he was growing up like a normal kid until one day when his family left they forgot him on accident. He wondered around looking for them but he never found them. So for a couple of years he was a thief and only stole what he needed to survive. Then at the age of 16 He then became a master thief and was wanted dead or alive. Then one night he was running from the guards he fell into a cavern. He looked around and found a statue. He touched the statue and found him self in a different realm. He wondered it for days until a deity found him. He wondered what was going on and spoke to the deity. As he talked more the deity he learned more about the after life. By the time he finished his conversation with the deity they had come to an agreement that the deity would train him once he was ready. Then the deity dismissed him and Lucario came back into the real world. But the time he had aged more than ten years. He spent his time going back to stealing items. Then the fateful night happened. Lucario had broken into the Shogunate palace and stolen an artifact. He was being chased and he jumped out of a window into the courtyard. He landed perfectly and began to run. As he ran the shogunate had his archers at the top of the palace shoot him down. Lucario dodged them but then he was struck in the shoulder as approached the door. Then the shogunate had more archers come and had them all fire at one time. As the arrows hit Lucario the ones that missed him left an out line of where he stood. They buried his body and that was the end of his life Now as he was about to cross over to the after life the deity that he had meet in his life took him away back to the place they meet. There the deity took Lucario under his wing and began to show him that fighting style known as dark slayer. He trained hard and harder. He was pushed beyond his limits and finally mastered the first step of the stance in only a hundred years. For another fifty years the deity showed Lucario some kiddo. He only learned 2 and Then deity then told Lucario that he must learn the rest on his own. Then the deity gave Lucario some armor and manifested its self as his zanpaktuo. As it did this Lucario's hair turned white and a red symbol appeared on the left part of his fore-head. So then Lucario was released from the realm or his inner world known as Deize and has wondered around the after world ever since. He developed a name for himself known as the "Demon Of the Fallen Ash" he got this name because when-ever he uses his zanpaktuo the smell of ash's is always in the air. Thus it is said that his zanpaktuo spirit which was the deity was an oni that rises from the ash's. Then there was a fight that made "Demon of the fallen Ash" spread through the Gote. Lucario was in a fight with a Capitan. The captain toyed with Lucario as they fought. As they fought the captain wanted to end it so he released his bankai which was a fire type and let out some of it's power upon Lucario. Flames engulfed Lucario and melted him into ash's. As the Capitan left he heard something. He turned around and saw something forming in the ash's. Lucario was reborn again from the ash's and held his zanpaktuo at the captain. The captain asked what he was and Lucario replied "I'm the demon of the fallen Ash." The captain laughed and nodded. The captain then shunpoed out of the area. Then word of the fight got loose and Lucario became known as demon of the fallen ash. Visual Age: 1576 Division: N/A Divisions: N/A Rank: N/A Appearance Visual Appearance: ![]() Physical Appearance: He has two scares on his left arm and one scare on across his face another under his right eye the is verticle. Then he has a large scare all the way across his back.He has white hair and a curse seal on the left side of his fore-head. He has blue eye's peach skin. He is some what toned and detailed. Clothing and Armor: He wears black pants the end at the ankle given it a ballon shape illusion. Then he wears black socks and black sandals. His shirt is sleeveless and also black. He wears a red sash around his waist and a red scarf to hide his face. His whole right arm is completely taped up including his hand and fingers. His right arm is covered by a white/orange sleeve. It goes under his scarf and has a black strap over it. On his left side he wears nothing showing his left arm completely and it has a black for-arm pad over it. Then his left arm has 2 black straps over it. Three bells hang around his scarf which ring everytime he moves. Personality: Lucario usually avoids being the center of attention much less be with a lot of people. If you get to know him he will talk but if he doesn't know you then he won't say much. He usually exerts a cold hearted feelings to those who don't know him. Those that manage to get close to him he will protect with his life. He has no problems following orders but every so often he will break his orders just to make things interesting. He tends to be a smart-ass or a jackass to anyone just so he can get under their skin but he never fails to make everyone laugh. He seeks excitement and is often finds it. He can be hard headed at times but he never fails to get the job done. His loves to drink tea for it seems to keep him calm and at peace. He keeps a book that he writes in everyday on his person at all time. He sits around thinking of his past at times trying to master the Dark Slayer stance. He rarely eats a actual meal. The only thing he will eat is Raman. He has an addiction to Raman but shows absolute love to donuts. He one day hopes to own his own donut/Raman shop. He rarely drinks sake because his morals get in the way. Zanpakutou Zanpakutou Name: Tokijin Spirit Appearance: It is an Spiret that is made up of pure ash. But it takes the form of a man in a black cloak. He has his face hidden in a hood and wears gloves to hide his ash hands. Inner World: Deize is a waste land made up of ash. It's like a desert but the sand is made up of Ash. This sea of ash stretch's for as far as the eye can see. As you walk in the ash smell gets stronger and stronger. The winds are always blowing and the sky is pure red. There is a medow in all this ash where the grass grows and flowers bloom. Around the medow is a 4 large stone walls made up of ash. There is a small opening in this wall. The four walls are used as a prison to keep Lucario from leaving his training. Tokijin uses these four walls as he pleases. Every so often the walls will fall and Lucario is allowed to use his whole inner world to train Sealed Form: ![]() It is a standered samuri sword with nothing special about it. The sheth is black and so is the handle. The handle is wraped in a balck cloth and is carried on Lucario's back Shikai Shikai Release Phrase: Power of Tokijin Awaken Shikai Appearance: His shikai is different in order for him to have achieved it Lucario had to take the fang of an oni. Once Lucario forged his zanpaktuo with it the sword changed completly and the blade grew longer and The handle grew smaller. It turned into a two sided blade and the handle turned red and on the bottom is a gold ball the has a bell attached to the bottom and hangs thereShikai Abilities: Kenatsu: is a special ability that allows the Tokijin to cut a opponent without touching them. Tokijin fires a needles made of spirit energy which can pierce an enemy. The Kenatsu develops into a wave of spirit energy. Soryuha:Lucario charges Spirit pressure into the Tokijin and than releases an amount of spirit pressure in the form of blue arcs of lightning. If Lucario is angered enough the arcs become stronger and can take the form of a dragon but that's only on rare Bankai -n/a Bankai Name: n/a Bankai Appearance: n/a Bankai Abilities: n/a Learned Kidō: Name: Red Lightning Number:26 Type: Offensive/Destructive Range: 1-25 meters Spell: Rajin, mighty god of thunder! I call upon thee! Lend thigh thoust hate, fury, and anger! Description: A variation and more powerful version of "White lightning, number 4" Red lightning essentailly is the same, just a few times more powerful. As the range the caster attempts to use it increases, the less effective it becomes, becoming totally inneffective past 25 meters. This kido can be done without the proper words being recited, this however, will degrade the strength of the spell. Name: Shot of Red Fire (shakkahô) Number: 31 Type: Destructive, Offensive Range: Long range Spell: Ye Lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, The sea barrier surges, March on to the south! Description: Fires a ball of red energy at a target. Edited by Lucario, Nov 5 2008, 02:58 PM.
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| TFE Magnus | Nov 4 2008, 02:56 PM Post #2 |
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Can you just edit this a little so it's using the full correct Shinigami template? Yours is a bit weird. http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/467706/ |
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| Lucario | Nov 4 2008, 03:22 PM Post #3 |
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there finished the template |
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| TFE Magnus | Nov 4 2008, 03:27 PM Post #4 |
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No, I mean use the template correctly. Just copy and paste it. http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/467706/1/#new Because why are there no Learned Kidō section or Visual Age sections specifically, and why is there even an Age of Death leave that to your history? I'm saying, actually use the right template, don't just hammer out a personalized one, it exists for a reason. |
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| Lucario | Nov 4 2008, 04:22 PM Post #5 |
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there done |
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| TFE Magnus | Nov 4 2008, 04:26 PM Post #6 |
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Almost, sorry but I still need you to describe your Shikai Appearance and Sealed Form in words in addition to the pictures...and to fill in Visual Age and Inner World which you forgot to do. |
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| Lucario | Nov 5 2008, 02:46 PM Post #7 |
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I don't know if I did the visual apperance right but I fixed everything else |
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| TFE Magnus | Nov 5 2008, 04:06 PM Post #8 |
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Approved, keep in mind guys and gals, you may have three characters in total, with a limit of two canon characters out of that and a limit of one MAJOR canon character. So if you already took one major canon character your next character has to be an original or a minor canon character. I'll be the judge of what canons are major and minor, but common sense makes it obvious. Captains, major characters, faction leaders, Espada, etc., are all major canons. Do check out the Canon List and consider some stuff before the good characters are taken.
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His shikai is different in order for him to have achieved it Lucario had to take the fang of an oni. Once Lucario forged his zanpaktuo with it the sword changed completly and the blade grew longer and The handle grew smaller. It turned into a two sided blade and the handle turned red and on the bottom is a gold ball the has a bell attached to the bottom and hangs there






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