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[Yu&&Lilia] Yu Sawada; Shinigami/10th Division
Topic Started: Oct 31 2008, 01:36 PM (146 Views)
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General Information
Name: Yu Sawada
Alias: None
Gender: Male
Age: Looks 17 but is really 197
Birthdate: June 23 1810
Birthplace: Hokkaido, Japan
Current Residence: Seireitei
History: Yu has no memory of his birth parents, but they were called Maria and Sam. The rest is yet to reveal. He was born with beautiful blue, near black hair, but he was born with a weak body, due to cancer. His mother died at his birth and his father couldn't forgive himself and suicided soon after. They were connected to a organization called 'The Millennium'. His father's rank was 'Noah', a very high position.

He was found by the road, by a man called Mana Sawada and took after his last name, 'Sawada'. This man was also a 'Noah' from his father's company, but he was chased out accused of killing Sam. It was a lie to get rid of both Mana and Sam. Mana took Yu in when he was 5. They had a secret code of communication made by Mana, as he lost his voice a long time ago. Mana also died when Yu was 12, he was hit by a car and the hospital wouldn't treat him unless money was paid at advance. As he and Mana were poor, the only treatment was bandages and a little bit of disinfection medicine. Thus, Mana died.

Yu begun to wounder around in Japan, until he bumped into a gang and asked them for refuge, they refused and hurt Yu badly. A man called Cross Marian saw the whole thing and took him to a hospital close by and paid all the fees for it. By now, Yu was cured of his cancer. He was rumored to be the child most loved by god(since he recovered from cancer) and the destroyer of time(millennium=time). He was going to bring down 'The Millennium' by his own power.

He asked to be apprenticed by Cross and Cross gladly accepted. With another idea in mind. For 3 years he has trained himself to be a master cheater in poker to win debts for his master, who turns out to be a super playboy. He gradually learned how to fight little by little, but still his body sometimes has attacks from the cancer's aftermaths. Cross decided to let him go to school and train him again after graduation, so he told him to go to Tokyo High School, he is a teacher there. He banged Allen's head with a hammer and went, 'he hated that place' was all he said before Allen passed out. Cross was last seen in Indian by Allen. Now he has started to get use to school life in Tokyo High, but he'll always wait for Cross to come back and fetch him.

One day he bought some books home from he was in a hurry, he wanted to read them as soon as he gets home. He crossed the road without looking and BANG, he was hit by a car. That was the end of Yu, or is it? Yu was left out and devoured by a hollow, he then turned into a hollow aswell, but luckily he was defeated and sent to Soul Society to restart. He found out about his powers as a Shinigami and was accepted, then recuited to Squad 2, where he then moved to Squad 6 after knowing his sword's name, Mugen.
Visual Age: 197
Division: 6th
Divisions: 2nd squad, unseated, transfered because of Zanpuck-to's power more suit this division
Rank: 3rd rank

Appearance
Visual Appearance:
Posted ImagePosted Image
Physical Appearance: Yu has long hair that he ties up with a usually white or black hair band. He has the eyes of a rebillion, but he is not going to betray his fellow squad members. He has broad shoulders and a strong build. He is also very tall and rather skinny.
Clothing and Armor: He wears the regular shinigami uniform, his sword to the right. He has a blue ribbon tied to his Sword and to his Shinigami uniform. Mana liked the color blue.
Personality: At first glance, Kanda might seem to be a rude and self centered boy. He is very arrogant and he won't give in no matter what. Underneath he is very caring and cares about all the people around him, not like there is much either. He always frowns and hardly ever smile. He only smiles at the person he either has a crush on or his friends.

He isn't very good at showing emotions so people often thinks he is insulting them for ignoring them, when really, he's actually wondering is the person's OK or not. He tends to smile a lot when he's alone, without company, friends are useless, they betray you. That is whast he somtimes think. That somewhat makes him strong, he practise double what others do. He isn't the one to start a conversation and is always the one to end it.

Zanpakutou
Zanpakutou Name: Mugen (Visions)
Spirit Appearance: Posted Image
Mugen is a purple haired teenager-looking person. He is a rather tall boy. He has handsome hazel eyes. He has a strong build. He is also a little bit on the chubby side. His wears a black and white striped on the side t-shirt with black track pants. His bottom is also that of a misty, ghostly looking so his shoes are unknown.
Inner World: It is mirror world inside Mugen, but the mirrors doesn't reflect Yu, it is pictures of Mugen. He is knownd to be living inside the mirriors.
Sealed Form: Posted Image (only the sword)
Mugen is a black, tiltless zanpuck-to. The whole sword is black and it has a particular patter made of white lines, it is known to change every week to a different one.

Shikai -acheived-
Shikai Release Phrase: Reflect, Mugen
Shikai Appearance: Posted Image
Mugen in shikai form is still a black tiltless zanpuck-to. It turns into a double that is connected at the back of Yu by a silver chain. When it is about to 'transform' a silverish blue light travels down his arm to the other one connected by the chain.
Shikai Abilities: Ability 1) Posted Image <- Eichien, neither world creatures, it sends Eichien out to the opponent. The summon is at the user's choice, depending on how much reiatsu the user uses, it number can go from 1-25 at one time. Rapid fire is avaliable, but takes heavy toll on the user.
Ability 2) If the blade is ever to be broken, it will grow again, but if melted, it will not recover for sometime.
Ability 3) Shinkiro Kusabana, Mirage Flowers, when it cuts the opponent, pollen is spread into the the part of their body to cause a heavy pressure on that part of the body. The pressure as in,(if the arm is cut) the arm will feel heavy. It can be adjusted however the user likes. It can only be recovered by the user'ss will.(NOTE: Poison withdrawing powers can also be used to recover.)

Learned Kidô:
Knows Binding Spells up to 70
Knows Destructive spells up to 75
Knows Reverse Demon(was in Squad 2 after all)
Edited by Sins Of A Killer, Nov 5 2008, 06:55 PM.
Bleach - Dark Revenant
Yu Sawada - Squad 6, 3rd Seat
Eve Lilia - 2nd Fraccion of Uliqiurra Schiffer

Naruto - Death before dishoner
Usagi Kimiko - Chunin, Konohagakure
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Negro please.

1.) I find his abilities quite vague and requiring clarification and maybe better details.
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neither world creatures, it sends those white things out to the opponent

Huh? What exactly are these creatures? Are they summoned, how do they attack, are they just illusions or blasts? How many, how do they work, how strong are they. You can't just go "those white things".
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is able to cut through anything.

It goes without saying that blades are sharp, but this is kind of weird and unnecessary. ANYTHING ever ever? Other swords and armor? :sweat:
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pollen is spread into the the part of their body to cause a heavy pressure on that part of the body.

What do you mean by heavy pressure on the body? Pain? Actual increase in weight? What physically happens, what does the person experience because of the pollen in their body?

2.) And I'd rather you didn't list any bankai for now, it's unrealistic you'd learn it anytime soon and even if you did you'd have to okay it past me, not just update when achieved.

3.) Please, for Spirit Appearance, Sealed Form, and Shikai Appearance, do also actually describe in words, you can have pictures there but not pictures alone, that's Visual Appearance.


Other than those questions and edits, it's looking good, I'll probably approve it soon once I've got these issues straight, welcome and enjoy yourself here.
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I fixed some of the errors.
Bleach - Dark Revenant
Yu Sawada - Squad 6, 3rd Seat
Eve Lilia - 2nd Fraccion of Uliqiurra Schiffer

Naruto - Death before dishoner
Usagi Kimiko - Chunin, Konohagakure
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Negro please.

Unfortunately, the rank you wanted is taken.

http://s10.zetaboards.com/Coloholics_Anonymous/topic/7026557/1/#new

Pick a different division or rank maybe?
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Thankies, please set him as Seat 3 Squad 6 instead.
Bleach - Dark Revenant
Yu Sawada - Squad 6, 3rd Seat
Eve Lilia - 2nd Fraccion of Uliqiurra Schiffer

Naruto - Death before dishoner
Usagi Kimiko - Chunin, Konohagakure
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Negro please.

So you managed to get back into your account? Good.

Approved, keep in mind guys and gals, you may have three characters in total, with a limit of two canon characters out of that and a limit of one MAJOR canon character. So if you already took one major canon character your next character has to be an original or a minor canon character. I'll be the judge of what canons are major and minor, but common sense makes it obvious. Captains, major characters, faction leaders, Espada, etc., are all major canons.
Do check out the Canon List and consider some stuff before the good characters are taken. ^_^
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