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[Mr_Bucket_Hat] Otori Lake; Shinigami/2nd Division
Topic Started: Oct 29 2008, 01:57 AM (103 Views)
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(I will make the changes in bold, so you can see what Im getting at.)


Name: Otori Lake

Alias: The wastelander

Gender: Male

Visual Age: 45

Birthdate: 17-11-1858

Birthplace: Seireitei

Current Residence: Where ever he can lay peacefully.

Current Location: Seretei, within the gotei thirteen holding cells.

Division: Second Division.

Divisions: 13th, and rogue.

Rank: 4th seat.

History: Otori lake was a quiet child growing up, generally observant. His mother was a shingami,
while his father was a soul that had been given a soul burial by a shingami,
who became Otori’s teacher in his years of Shingami academy, in demon magic techniques.
At 50, he enrolled in the Gotei 13, and joined the thirteenth squad,
and gradually rose up the ranks, to become the fourth strongest Shingami in that squad. Until….
In his seventy-second year, his parents, and his teacher who brought them together, all died.
Otori was outraged. He learned from his squad captain that a huge hollow had killed an entire team of his division, and had gone on a rampage.
The teacher had come over to the Lake’s house for tea, and had heard the commotion.
They rushed out with their Zanpakutous, and found the hollow, blood flowing from wounds, and blood around its mouth.
To their horror, they saw most of their neighbours fallen in the street, some ripped to shreds.
They attacked, despite their age, and the fact that only two were shingamis, and both were retired, and managed to defeat the hollow.
But, they were horribly wounded.
The father was the first to fall, caught and ripped in half by the great beast.
The teacher went next, fireball after fireball hitting their marks, but a huge claw clasped him, and broke his back.
His mother, blood splattered around her, bleeding from her leg and head, roared, and released her zanpaktou, and got close to the beast.
She allowed it to grasp her, and waited for it to bring her to its mouth. She swung downwards, cleaving the great skull in two, but not before it tightened its grasp.
She screamed in agony, and when the hollow vanished, she fell to the ground, and lay there.
She breathed for a few minutes, before slipping out of her body, and into the great beyond.
Otori wept for days. He gave up praying. He gave up eating. He drank only enough to survive.
He dived deep into the world of his zanpakatou, where the guardian, who loved him, gave him solice.
He talked to her, learned all he would about her. He even asked what was her favourite food, and she laughed long and hard at this.
After several days of deep meditation and hermitage, he emerged, and walked to the thirteenth division captain. He removed the shingami uniform, and handed it to him. “Thank you. For everything.”
This was all he said, before walking to the gate to the other world, and stepped through.
Shingamis were sent to find Otori, and few returned. Squads were sent back, and only a fraction returned.
They always said that they were attacked by Otori, who would never talk to them.
The truth was, the very first squad to come after him had attacked him first, for he hadn’t even stopped to listen to them.
He had decimated them. Only one returned then, and he was the one who drew his sword first.
His dishonour was so great, he lied, telling how Otori fought first, and fell ill. He died shortly later.
Otori grew steadily stronger, and stronger.
He fought hollows, sometimes even going into the evernight desert of Hueco Mundo, to fight them, especially when they retreated.
He fought the shingami who came after him, or the ones who encountered him, and tried to kill him.
He was a fugitive, and he knew not what to do.
At the age of one hundred and fifty, he had heard of the Aizen incident,
and although rumours spread that he had joined forces with the three traitors,
Otori had set himself against them. And everyone else.
Until...
After coming into contact with several shinigami who said they required help. It seemed a new breed of Vaizard had arrisen, the dark and mysterious Xueshi Syndicate. And the rogue shinigami, the Dark Ones.
Otori came back to Soul Society for the first time in fifty years.
He was placed into custody, and did so willingly.
He awaits in the holding cell for a messenger, or a captain to explain what they need done.
He wasn't sure if this was a trap.
He wasn't sure if he would get out.


And he had to admit it.

He was having fun.

Appearance
Physical Appearance: His hair is just long enough to fall about his head, past his ears, and a deep brown.
His chin is regularly stubbled, but rarely bearded. His eyes were a hard hazel. He supports a scar that runs down the left side of his face, from eyebrow to below the cheek.

Clothing and Armor: After giving up his shingami uniform, he eventually found clothing to his liking.
Sand coloured boot cut jeans, with a heavy parka jacket, which supported a tri coloured flag on its right arm. He wears a dark crimson tshirt.

Personality: Otori is quiet, attentive, but slow thinking.
He will regularly dive into a situation without thinking of all the consequences.
The only exception to this was during his meditation after his parent’s death. He has regularly jumped into Hueco Mundo after a hollow, to find an ambush.
This hasn’t stopped him though.

He is shy, and rarely socializes, and has never fallen in love. He is loyal, but not sheepishly loyal (will explain if nessicary).
He holds to pacts that hurt no-one, and is willing to help those who desperately need it.




Zanpakutou

Zanpakutou Name: Rainmaker.

Spirit Appearance: Posted Image

Female, wearing a dress whos colours range from deep green to bright blue. Bright brown hair, brown skinned, with shocking steel grey eyes. About 5 foot 8 tall.

Inner World: Posted Image
A bleak desert. Orange sand, with no oasis in sight.There are no plants, not even cacti to break the scenery. Only dunes. Only when Otori achieves bankai, the spirit has told him, will it rain, and plants would grow.

Sealed Form: Posted Image
Green bladed, with a wooden handle. Wooden center with golden engraved lettering running up it.


Shikai

Shikai Release Phrase: Fall.

Shikai Appearance: Posted Image

The blade becomes sligthly longer, and splits into two main blades and two smaller blades, seperate in the middle, and spreads out towards the top, connected at the base.. The handle turns red,

Shikai Abilities:

Riverflow:
Otori swings his sword, and his will to cut flows out from his sword. Like Ichigo’s ability, but has less range, but unlike ichigo’s, it can change direction, and flow into a longer thinner, or shorter thicker shape. This is incredibly useful if it is a wide area that Otori wants to use it on, or a single strong foe.

Beneath these waves:
Otori plunges Rainmaker into the ground, up to the hilt. The ground will ripple, and become a wave, in the direction Otori was facing. If Otori mixes this with Riverflow, the wave is directable. And once a day, he can make the wave spread in all directions.



KIDO:
Reverse Demon.

Flashstep.
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Negro please.

Sorry but totally ditch the bankai.
And also actually describe Spirit Appearance, Sealed Form, Inner World, and Shikai Appearance in words in addition to the pictures. :sweat:
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Ah. Sorry. I'll edit it. Sorry about that.


edit: Just out of interest, what was wrong with the bankai? Over powered, stupid?
Edited by Mr_Bucket_Hat, Oct 29 2008, 02:12 PM.
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Negro please.

Just didn't want him to have bankai. Don't want too many, especially for a 3rd Seat.


Approved, keep in mind guys and gals, you may have three characters in total, with a limit of two canon characters out of that and a limit of one MAJOR canon character. So if you already took one major canon character your next character has to be an original or a minor canon character. I'll be the judge of what canons are major and minor, but common sense makes it obvious. Captains, major characters, faction leaders, Espada, etc., are all major canons.
Do check out the Canon List and consider some stuff before the good characters are taken. ^_^
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OK, I had him at third seat, mainly because there's already a lieutenant, and I don't think this guy would be officially on the books, because there's probably a few shinigami families who want my head on a spike. Then the rest of my body roasted and frozen so they can be put on spikes too when my head rots.
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Negro please.

bumped to 4th seat. GET ACTIVE! :argh:
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