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[magge] Lornax Pax; Protoss
Topic Started: Oct 25 2008, 06:51 AM (48 Views)
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Name: Lornax pax
Age: 340
Gender: male
Rank: Acolyte
Psychic: yes

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Appearance:
2,5 meters tall. 150Kg. he has blue skinn rather than the normal grey skin protoss usually have. purpule eyes.

Armour/Clothes:
Lornax wears a cheap armor dipped in gold paint, it offeres very little protection. But it's all he can get. He wears a cloth hanging down from the metall belt, representing his family.

History:
Training with his dad everyday as a child. Lornax paid a keen interest in fighting as a soldier for the protoss empire. He had heard stories of the great warrior Fenix, and wanted to be as good as him.

He soon realized that strength in battle was not enough. He had to see a patern in his enemies in order to defeat them. When he was old enough to be enlisted into a training program for the protoss he studied his students fighting techniques. He used what he had learned from watching pepole fight and fighting himself into a original fighting style. Although he did not always win some protoss warriors took an interest in him.

Always trying avoid his oponents blows and neglecting the way of speech he lost some of the interest the warriors had in him. "Fighting isn't everything" they said. On his freetime, if there was such a thing, he read what feenix had achived. Lornax decided to learn more about how to speek correctly, in order to gain favorable allies and friends. although he did that the last year of the studies, he got a lot better to defend and attack others using nothing but his words.

Personality:
Lornax has a strong willingness to learn new things, how to improve his fighting style and how to better create alliances and get pepole to like him. He is quite blunt and speeks his mind. Something he is respected for but sometimes he crosses the line. He is an intelligent protoss who sees a pattern in most things. Even though he is blunt he is quite friendly and offers his help in most cases where he thinks he can improve his relations in the protoss empire,

Attributes:

Strength: 4

Intelligence: 6

Dexterity: 4

Charisma: 3

Constitution: 3


Equipment, & Transport:


Honor:

Equipment: 5

Vehicle: none

Mission Log:
Edited by magge, Oct 25 2008, 06:58 AM.
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The Modern Day Kensei and Keeper of the old ways

Please expand history This is a good start but I would prefer there to be a wee bit more meat to it. The history is how you build your character. So if you expand the history, personality and finish his equipment you're good.
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