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[Vincente Silvario] Rōjūrō Ōtoribashi; Vizard/Karakura Vizards
Topic Started: Oct 24 2008, 02:01 PM (427 Views)
Vincente Silvario
...><> Mr.Bishy...

General Information
Name:Rōjūrō Ōtoribashi
Alias: Rose
Gender: Male
Age: 480
Birthdate: 13/03
Birthplace: England,london
Current Residence: Karakura Town, Abandoned Silo
History:

As a child rose was born as a healthy young boy, in london, and into a wealthy family, he had been fed the right food and given the right clothes.

When he turned two, his brothers were born and they were twins, and rose got confused to which one was which,and he played with them quite alot, and they became a really nice family, until, his mother died in a road accident on the way to work, and then all was lost, they had to stay with there father which wasnt to bad, but he became a drunk and not alot of nice things happened during the years they lived together.

His brothers were treated slighty better than he was, because they were stronger and would in time, bring money to the family, his father went back to work as a officer at a mine, telling them what to do, and the money they already had, was increasing every time they were paid,and the slowly got more and more stuff, rose, was the favourite of the three children and so, inherited most of the money from his mother as the boys got the other stuff, which inturn get stuff off there father whereas, he wouldnt get alot, which made it fair,he however wasnt going to get his money until he turned 18

he lived the same life up until he turned 13, the beginning marker for his teenage years, and perhaps the best years in his life, his father got out of the depression stage and went on to marrying someone else, and they lived together since then,rose was sent to school, as his step-mother saw great potential in him, and so he learned quickly about the many things about life, but never really got into the sceintific stuff, which back then, wasnt as complex as it is now

his 15th birthday was creeping up, and by then he had a lovely girlfreind, who unlike other wealthy familys, she wasnt very rich, but she was smart and kind, which the family thought was only because of she wanting to get into money, which rose saw through, because back in those days, there were many class issues as the higher class never mixed with the lower class, but with this exception, on his 15th birthday.


he finally turned 18, and inherited all the money from his mother, and he then went on to marrying his girlfreind, and they had a child by time they were 21,

roses father shortly died and all the money went to the brothers of the family, which then went on to create a buisness, which in future would be quite successful, owned by the twins familys and nothing to do with rose.

Rose then went on to work at a local store which sold minor products, the shop was robbed dailey and he finaly had enough, in one of the roberys he beat 6 men down and thrown them out,but revenge creeped up to him, and he was beaten to death by the same 6 people, who would eventually, become hollows or shinigami, and he would recongize them if he kept his human memory, which is rare, but still happens.

Born back into Soul soceity, he met with his mother and father, and suprisingly he remembered partial bits of his real human life, his parents were both successful shinigami, gaining as high as 8th seat in the varoius squads,he was then admited to the academy.

Academy year 1 - 2

he started off academy just as any other student and became freinds with many people there, including Shinji, Love and other students who would eventually become his freinds in the long term, he had succesffuly passed all the tests and became proffiecent with the Flash Step and Swordmen Ship, but also passed well in Kido Arts, he barely passed hand to hand combat and so was not admited to the special kido corps or the assasination squad.

Academy year 3

He came back to the academy after a short break and during the last few months he had already acheived his shikai, along with onyl a handful of shinigami, he hadnt learned any of its moves, but he still had the shikai form, due to this he was instantly transferred to a squad

Squad 3

After the first few weeks of joining the third division, he had already obtained 5th seat due to his natural talent, he however did not have a natural talent for leading and was quite lazy, he was trained by his captain in this and quickly became a decent leader, on a mission he had slain 5 hollows, when menos appeared, he led the shinigami with him away and he quickly dispatched the menos with slight wound to his arm, which he obtained from a sneak attack by a hollow

Due to this he was promoted to 3rd seat, and quickly became popular along the shinigami for being caring of his squad members, and also tight so they didnt get out of hand, it was about this time that his former freinds started to join as vice captains and one, shinji had obtained the rank of captain, and quickly became freinds with rose.

Rose due to his popularity, was suggested to be the new vice captain of the third squad, whos vice captain disappeared for quite some time, and so he quickly took this chance to train, and was quite proffiect in his training.

as his other freinds started to become captains and vice's he trained as much as he could, and after about 100 years of additional training he had obtained bankai, when he first acheived it he fell backwards only to land atop Lisa, before smiling she kicked him and he was sent flying into a rock.

Now he had obtained bankai and was already the vice captain, his former captain retired into the 0 division, and he went on trial to become a captain, his tests were watched by none other than Shinji, Ukitake and Love, and he passed, taking over the 3rd squad once and for all, he really impressed his father and mother, who unfourtantly died in the mysterous rukongai disappeareances.

He was dispatched with a group of other captains to investigate the disappearance of Kensei. Showing up as part of the backup squad comprised of him, Love, and Lisa. After working a plan with Lisa to only subdue Kensei, Rose was surprised by a kick from Mashiro, who had also turned hollow. Shortly after being injured, he saw Kensei beating on Lisa and told him to stop as he was not the sort of weakling to attack a woman. He, and everyone else except Hirako were then finished by another unexpected attack by Tōsen. Then all the captains and lieutenants went under a hollowification process before Kisuke and Tsukabishi appeared, then moved them to the 12th divisions reasearch department and attempted to rid them of their hollowification. After being transported to Earth by Kisuke and Yoruichi, he took up residence with his fellow Vizard in Karakura town.

The Inner Hollow

His inner hollow, a younger version of him, much more respectful than ichigos inner hollow, his inner also wouldnt jump in until he really had to,his inner hollow didnt care for what happened, he only waited for when rose was weak enough to take over, a fight wasnt in his best interests, he finnaly found his moment, when he was deep into his hentai comics, were nobody had been watching, he had attack rose, he was caught off guard and went slightly crazy, rose had managed to keep him suppress during the time befor he was exiled, but he couldnt keep it up, they both faced each other and rose was shocked by the quick change of the inner, his freinds warned him, they all wanted fights and so they attack straight away, rose's inner was alot calmer, they stood there talking for several minites and they quickly both disappeared, a huge tree came down upon a cloud of dust, and they both stood there, in there shikai form, suprised the hollow laughed and quickly pushed him back and swinging his sword infront of him, causing a electrical blast as the swords clashed , Rose, who responded with another slash,the two blades met and both of the attacks were stronger than the first

They both jumped towards each other exchanging blows as sparks fireing off to there sides , completly equal, the hollow rose his sword and spun it around, rose done the same, as a yellow reatsu flown around both users they both shouted " BAN-KAI " at the same time and a huge botl of lightening met them in the middle as there swords revolving around them fired at each other clashing and causing sparks to fly off , blowing a 40 metre raduis of tree's over,rocks flown fromthe sky landing between them which disappeared through the ground, they pushed all the reatsu into it, eventually blowing each other back, blood spurted from each side the hollow raised its sword in the air as swords came clashing down at terrifing speeds, rose done the same and they ran towards each other bringing the sword down, waves of swords crashed intot he ground as one went through roses shoulder he fell to the floor.

The hollow suddenly appeared behind rose and brought his two swords down upon his back, cutting through the skin,and sending rose to the floor onto his face, as rose smiled, the hollow noticed the blades wernt revolving around rose, and the swords came crashing out the sky, destroying the hollow.

Rose had finally subdued his hollow once more, and he gaine dhis mask, which he now uses to protect all close to him.


Faction: kakura town vizard
Rank: Advisor.

Appearance
Visual Appearance: Posted Image
Physical Appearance:Rose is an effeminate man with long, wavy, blond hair and a perpetually bored expression. During his time as a captain his hair was somewhat straighter and he wore a frilly shirt under his captains robe. As a vizard he wears a thigh length black coat with yet another frilly edged shirt underneath.
his zanpakuto is at his side and he usually doesnt touch it until he needs to

Personality: An effeminate foppish man with a disinterested air, Rose is a more laid back group member who is more frequently seen tuning his guitar and chatting with Love than paying attention to what is going on around him. He is interested in music and often discusses whatever singles have recently come out. He also enjoys reading manga, a pastime shared with Love and Lisa, although he becomes irritated if anyone spoils a storyline for him.
Visual Age: late 20's early 30's.

Zanpakutou
Zanpakutou Name: Brisngr
Spirit Appearance: a young man who has long silver hair and a katana at his side, his clothes wave in the dark and he tends not to speak.

Inner World: a large circle with blades circulaing around it as the edges, the groun dis flat and plain gray and his spirit usualy sits on a throne in the middle, it has rocks contantly falling out of the sky, but disappearing once they hit the floor, but..they are still solid

Sealed Form: his zanpakutō's hilt is in the shape of a diamond with curved concave edges, and its sheath is encrusted with diamonds.

Shikai
Shikai Release Phrase: Intensify, Brisngr
Shikai Appearance:His sword remains the same although it gains a electrical current running down the blade.

Shikai Abilities:


The blade has electric running around the blade, causing more attack power in each attack , so after 1 hit it would be weak, then the next clash of weapons increases rose's attack, and it keeps going up and up in attack, causing more damage and the enemy to be pushed back further etc.



Bankai

Bankai Name: Ryuken Konami Brisngr

Bankai Appeareance: Blades of electric revolving around himself in random movements.

Bankai Abilities:

1st form - the blade disappear's and form several blades rovolving around him,rose can move the swords using his hands, firing them at the enemy and moving them for offence and defence.

2nd form - by moving them in the air the blades can duplicate themselves as a shower of blades is sent down towards the enemy, they can fire 3 waves before having to be brought back down to recharge, then he can send them back up into the sky.

Hollow Information
Inner Hollow: his hollow is much like himself he is lazy and tends not to want to take over, but using this as a disguise he attacks when rose is least expecting it to try and defeat without a hard fight, he looks the same as rose but he wears white robes and he has his zanpakuto down his back, his hair is also black not blonde.

Hollow Mask: rose gets his mask by running his hand from his forehead down, as it forms in a orangish reatsu, the mask is the same shape as ichigos apart from its got the edges cut into offset squares, the mask itself is covered in orange markings which go in lines from the bottom to the top, spreading outwards as they go higher, the mask also has a thicker jaw line which is orange also.

Hollow Control:Rose has near complete control over his hollow, but he doesnt pocess like the others any hollow powers except cero and bala, his hollow also still trys to take over rose when he is on his own and when he isnt concentrating.

Hollow Powers:
Cero.
Bala.



Edited by Vincente Silvario, Nov 5 2008, 08:10 AM.




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Negro please.

Give me a quick RP Sample of you as Halibel.
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...><> Mr.Bishy...

Sitting there, watching aizen on the throne, not moving a muscle leaning on his elbow on the throne, halibel knew this was how he acted, and he looked kinda bored...halibel waited for approval to leave the room, she had unfinished buisness with a shinigami, who made a fool out of her back on earth, he finally gave approval with a slight nod.


Walking out the room , halibels arms at her sides she focused her reatsu on the door, pushing it open slowly as she walked out, then suddenly disappeared into the darkness.

She reappeared in the plains looking out across the lonely desert and she with a quick wrist movement opened a gargaunta and walked through it.


Thats all i could think off.




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...><> Mr.Bishy...

I guess your waiting for someone else to make a profile for her so you can see which one is better




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Negro please.

Indeed, I'm not sure if you're ready for a character like Halibel, I might decide to approve you if no one else tries out though.
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Vincente Silvario
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would you be more happy if i used this for a custom arrancar, obvously i wont get any of the espada like i hoped buy still, i wanted syazel but i dont have the attitude for him, id like to Rp as most of the espada apart from Ballagan, yammy and that colored dude ( not being racist )




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Negro please.

Tousen Kaname
Oct 29 2008, 03:01 PM
would you be more happy if i used this for a custom arrancar, obvously i wont get any of the espada like i hoped buy still, i wanted syazel but i dont have the attitude for him, id like to Rp as most of the espada apart from Ballagan, yammy and that colored dude ( not being racist )
An original Arrancar? If you want to try.
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i think my rping has picked up abit, with the longer profiles and putting more time into my posts, but as you say i may not be ready for her, so il practice more, give it some time, if someone makes a profile its fine, if not, then il try my best with this one.




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changed character completly, i cant change the title for different character, i resently remebered this dude and so i wanna rp as him ^^
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I changed it for you. :) You're welcome.
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Negro please.

Not sure what to say about the bankai and shikai, too many abilities for each, a disorganized mess of vaguely connected abilities and the ones that are connected are too numerous and over the top and very generic "FIRE AND ICE" stuff.
Four abilities for his SHIKAI? The potential to control both fire and ice in bankai? Most Bleach characters are lucky to have one element under telekinetic control. All kinds of other generic and disorganized elemental stuff and...wings. It's like he's some weird videogame fighter with seemingly random DBZ moves, not an actual written character.

Cut down your bankai and shikai in size and power, try to come up with an interesting guiding theme for both that isn't just "HE CAN CONTROLZ FIRE, ALSO HE CAN CONTROLZ ICE".
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i was gunna just make it ice, but then it would seem to much like hitsugaya, zanpakuto creation is were i failz most ...

but il think of something else




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Negro please.

Please try, it's not about the number of strength of abilities, it's about making united and interesting releases and themes.
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yeh im trying to think of something, i might make it lightening themed, due to him having blonde hair, kinda fits..




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Negro please.

Vincente Silvario
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yeh im trying to think of something, i might make it lightening themed, due to him having blonde hair, kinda fits..
Perhaps, but you might want to do something more original than "HE CONTROLZ _____ ELEMENT" ^_^ Look at characters like Rangiku and Kira and frankly a lot of releases. It's not about such lame and braindead releases or being able to control all of X or Y. HE CONTROLS FIRE. HE CONTROLS LIGHTNING.
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