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[Saigo] Kaien Ichikuro; Chunin/Konohagakure
Topic Started: Oct 7 2008, 06:42 PM (56 Views)
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General Information
Name: Ichikuro Kaien
Alias: Kai
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Country of Origin and Village: Konohagakure / Hidden Leaf
Current Residence: Konohagakure / Hidden Leaf
History: Both of Sai's parents lived in kiri before they were killed in wartime. Then he was moved by Kirigakure's government to Konoha where there were more advanced ways of a teenager living on his own. So now he lives in Konoha, the very last of his clan that he knows of. He lives by himself in a slightly distant part of Konoha, but he always knows what's up and such. He is a very talented shinobi, Knowing a plentiful of Suiton moves in his arsenal, however he knows very few other techniques BESIDES suiton, which is a major downfall if he were to deal with a Raikiri attack or ninja. His clan had two branches. The Taiyoh(sun) branch and the Tsuki(moon) branch. He is a part of the Taiyoh branch, and that branch is the one that is trained heavily in ninjutsu and Taijutsu. The Tsuki branch is trained heavily in Genjutsu and Ningu. He still trains daily at Konoha, generally by large bodies of water and such. His favorite training spot though, is actually located on top of Hokage mountain, where few people bother him. There is a small pond there that is nice, and quiet, where he likes to hone his suiton skills, and train. He is commonly mistaken for someone named Kitaku, though he knows not of who that is.
Rank: Chuunin
Team/Affiliation:
He is part of the Konoha shinobi, but is currently subject to change into a ninja group. He joins others but none are permanent.
Chakra Affinity/Specialty: Suiton (Water)


Characteristics
Visual Appearance: Ichikuro Kaien
Physical Appearance: He has glasses but never wears them, and he has dark red hair that shines almost pink at dusk and dawn. he has Hazel eyes and slightly tan skin. His body shape is slender, but also athletic. He is around 5'9" and weighs about 130 lbs.
Clothing and Armor: teal jacket he wears. It is always unzipped and under the teal jacket he has a black tee shirt. He wears a single black sweat band on his left wrist and has dark gray pants like wind pants he always wears. He also carries the common shuriken pack on his right thigh and small item pouch on the back of his waist.
Personality: Kaien is a pretty laid back kid. He's friendly, but sometimes he can be teetering over to the wrong side. He can seem dangerous, or happy, but hes always mellow. His clans personalities are all nearly the same, which is normally quiet. he's the only one who breaks the chain, hes never really quiet, merely reserved. He speaks his mind which can get him in trouble, but other then that he is a pretty good kid.

Weapons
In his shuriken pouch he has shuriken, kunai, steel wire, and senbon. In the pouch he has at the back of his waist he has explosive tags, and a blank scroll, as well as a small mirror, and smoke bombs.

Weapon Name: No name
Weapon Description: A black katana in a black sheath. Roughly four feet long. It is on his back with the handle pointing up towards his left shoulder.
Photo of Weapon: none
Range: four feet
Special Abilities: none.

Weapon Name: No name
Weapon Description: white katana in a white sheath. Roughly three feet long. It is on his back with the handle pointing up towards his left shoulder, and is placed slightly lower then his black sword.
Photo of Weapon: none
Range: three feet
Special Abilities: none.


Kekkei Genkai

Kekkei Genkai Clan Name: Ichikuro
Village of Origin: Kirigakure
Jutsu name (optional): Gyatsu(Water Manipulation)
Clan Jutsu:
Clan Limit: Gogyou Douzen- Kai has the ability to manipulate water like Gaara can manipulate sand, only because water will always be water, he can't increase or decrease its density like Gaara, although powering Chakra through it will give it a solid shape for a short period of time. How much chakra is put in determines how strong it is. He can only manipulate the water for exactly five minutes, and he can manipulate any reasonable amount of water.
Weakness: It costs him concentration and chakra usage to use his Kekkei Genkai, and still he hasn't mastered it fully.


Jutsus
Clone Jutsu, Replacement Jutsu, Rope Escape Jutsu, Transformation Jutsu,

Jutsu Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton (water)
Range: long
Type: supplementary
Effect: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body, only around a kilometer. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Jutsu Name: Gousuiwan no Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Suiton (water)
Range: short
Type: supplementary
Effect: Gousuiwan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Using his ability to manipulate water, Kai will reform his arm/arms/limbs in a more muscular form. This stronger limb allows him to deliver more powerful blows and swings with weapons.

Jutsu Name: Mizu Kamikiri
Rank: B
Element: Suiton(water)
Range: medium
Type: offensive
Effect: Mizu Kamikiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To utilize this technique, he will slam his foot/hand to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

Jutsu Name: Suirou no Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton(water)
Range: short
Type: supplementary
Effect: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Jutsu Name: Mizu Shuriken
Rank: D
Element: Suiton(water)
Range: medium
Type: offensive
Effect: Using water infused with chakra to give it shape, these are just like regular shuriken only lighter and faster, and they consume a slight amount of chakra.

Jutsu Name: Suiton Heki
Rank: B
Element: Suiton(water)
Range: short
Type: Defensive
Effect: Creates a wall of water that is completely clear but infused with chakra so it is extremely solid. The wall is about twenty feet up and surrounds the user on every side except for underneath them, however most enemies do not realize this. The wall will stay up for a maximum of four minutes, then it will fall. However the user can drop the wall at any given moment if they so wish.
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Could you use the Jutsu template for all you're Jutsu, and expand on the history a bit.

Everything else is fine, however I'd like to tell you now, not to overpower you're Kekkei Genkai.
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Alright! I edited my post and such, I think it is alright now.. But you can double check and lemme know ^^
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You haven't filled in his personality, and also limit you're B rank jutsu to at the most 3
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"You listenin' you cowardly prick, you don't come out here right fuckin' now and I'll crush this little bastards head. You take too long in comin' out and I'll crush the little bastards head and piss on it's corpse, you got ten seconds"


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oh crud your right. and Okay I'll edit it down a bit
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Syao Byako

Shogo Kiriyama
"You listenin' you cowardly prick, you don't come out here right fuckin' now and I'll crush this little bastards head. You take too long in comin' out and I'll crush the little bastards head and piss on it's corpse, you got ten seconds"


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