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[Little Wolf] Vailen
Topic Started: Oct 6 2008, 06:53 AM (96 Views)
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General Information

Name: Vailen

Alias: Experiment 4938

Gender: Female

Age: 26

Race: What race/species is your character? Genetically created creature.
Half Namek, half Human.

Birthdate: Vailen does not remember the day of her creation

Birthplace: Namek

History: Vailen is one of many failed experiments by Dr. Gero, before creating Cell.
He wished to make the greatest warrior ever seen! A warrior with the strength of a Namek, but the power of a Saiyan. He was to make an army of these creatures in order to destroy Goku for good and claim all the Dragon Balls.
Unfortunately, most of his experiments died in the early stages, or the DNA simply rejected each other, refusing to bond. It was only after 30 years of hard work, that he came up with the idea of adding human DNA to the mix. To his delight, the DNA bonded and life was created. The baby that was born from that test tube experiment was a tiny female, but he loved her anyway. She was the beginning of the realisation of his dreams. It was only when she grew up that he began to realise that something was wrong. She looked like a Nemak, but had none of the Sayan's powers. Frustrated, he worked her hard every day, forcing her to train until she could no longer move. But she could only ever manage the smallest of Ki Blasts. Her strength was not that of a Namek either. She was far stronger than a human, and much much faster, but not quite up to scratch when it came to fighting other races.
Cursing his bad luck, he blamed the human DNA for messing up his perfect experiment, and decided to kill Vailen.
Vailen, now 18 years old (she ages in human years) discovered her creators plot for her demise, and escaped the planet by stealing one of his pods. She was lost in space for many years, not knowing about her planet's destruction.

Appearance

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Physical Appearance: Vailen is quite short for a Namek, standing at only 5ft 6ins. Her body is lithe and tightly muscled, but would appear scrawny compared to other Namek's and her body is more like that of a human. Her skin is a light green, and the armoured patches on her arms, legs and back are an almost neon pink. Where-as normal Namek's have only four fingers, Vailen's hands are more humanoid, but she does have the grey, almost claw-like fingernails. Her antenna looks more like short stubby horns that lean away from the face rather than towards. She has large, black, almond shaped eyes that looked mirrored, and long black hair that she keeps in a braid tied with a blue ribbon.

Clothing and Armor: She has no armour, and wears only basic black trousers, a black vest and a long thick black cloak with a large hood. Her feet are bare.

Personality: Despite a rocky start in life, Vailen is quite a happy go lucky creature. She alays tries her best at everything she does, as she feels bad for letting down her 'Father'. She will take a lot of abuse before she finally snaps, but when she does, she is like a completely different person. She can be very cruel and vicious when she feels she has been wronged.

Abilities and Weaponry

Powers/Abilities:

Flight: Using a degree of Ki control, Vailen can fly over short and long distances, depending on how much Ki she uses.

Ki Blast: Basic attack that fires a blast of Ki. Vailen's Ki Blasts are pitiful at best.

Regeneration: Vailen can regenerate lost body parts, as long as his head remains intact. The time to regenerate depends on the size of the part needed to grow back. She is far slower at this than normal Nameks.

Zanzoken: Vailen moves so fast, that she leaves an image of herself behind. She has yet to use this as a proper attack, as she mainly uses it for running away.


Roleplay Example

Vailen's breath came out in short panicked gasps as she squeezed herself even further into the small space between her Creator's machines. She could hear him smashing things in the other room, searching for her. She knew if her found her, he would kill her. The young creature licked her lips nervously and squeezed her eyes shut, wishing she could disappear from the world. Vailen didn't understand why he was so angry. She had always done as he had asked, always worked so hard. She blinked her large black eyes against the tears that were threatening to fall and waited.
Her Creator's footsteps came closer. Peeking out from her hiding place, she watched as he entered the room, a large jagged sword held in a death grip in one hand.
This was it, she had to run, or she would be slaughtered. Taking a deep breath, she leapt from her hiding plcae and ran from the room, ignoring the shout of anger from behind her. Relaying on her superior speed, she made it to where her Creator kept the pods. Yanking the door open, she clambered into the nearest one and began pressing buttons, ANY buttons! She didn't care where she went, so long as she got away from here.
The last thing she saw was her creators screaming face as she shot off into space.

Power Level -

187,000
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Ok well just a few things I like the ideas, but unfortunately they don't make very much sense. The Namekian people weren't scientists and were Asexual so female coiming out is a little off.

I also have a trepidations over having her spliced with Saiyan DNA we've already had folk try to pull of customs with Saiyan DNA with all the powers, you may have said she doesn;t have any of the powers but I still find it obsolete that it just gives her dark hair for a green skinned Namekian.

You could do with adding in more description to the various things such as abilites and descriptions, remember shes a Namek ie green skin pointy ears pink/yellow patched muscles and so on.

For abilites look at approved profiles and see how it's done for each ability and such. The power level aswell although we mentioned it earlier to you we're going to be using a new chart and well every single power level in the whole RP will be altered so it's gunna affect evereyone not just you :p
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I got the female part from the human DNA. The hair was basically me tryingt o put something of the Sayen in there, as I'd imagine that even if there WAS female Namek's, they'd be bald too! >_< I was thinking of having her being just a human and Namek mix, but I don;t know what someone would gain from that kind of creature. I could choose a different race to be the scientist, but again, I think that they would want to splice a sayen and a namek for the big gooby power warrior type thing!

Hmmm.... gonna have to give this a bit more thought. Any ideas?
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Vailen

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Im gonna give you the thumbs up this one.

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I'll go with this :p have fun :p
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Huzzah! Thankies!
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Aiko Fujiwara (Shinigami)

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Domitila (Arrancar)

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Lieutenant Nemu Kurotsuchi (Shinigami)

http://z10.invisionfree.com/Coloholics_Ano...showtopic=16500

DBZ Character

Vailen

http://z10.invisionfree.com/Coloholics_Ano...showtopic=16493

Hero Character

Angelina Rose (Dragon)

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