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| The King of Fap | Oct 2 2008, 04:49 PM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Shizu Tensu Alias: Shizu the Samurai Gender: Male Age: 35 Race: Human Birthdate October 2 Birthplace: Gensu History: Born in a village located in the northern hemosphere, a place that is isolated from all of today’s current problems and technology. People here are adapted naturally to the extreme condition and killer animals that plague the area, such animal like Strong Whales and Giant Bears, a race of bear that would dwarf the largest bear by four times, and are very strong fighters who practice the art of swordsman-ship and the code of a samurai. Sizu’s father was the current leader of the village and the most powerful member of the Tensu family at the time, Sizu soon took the name after his massive battle with the man. As a young man Sizu wanted to travel the world and become the strongest fighter to ever come out of the village, though his dream had been shot down by almost all the children and adults of the village. Including his father and other family members. Sizu ,however, was a very talented swordsman and had been very cunning and adaptive his surroundings during a battle situation, making him a formidable opponent . His teachers were shocked at his abilities with a sword and gave great word about him during their conversations, praising him almost. He graduated the top of his class and became a member of the protection squad for the village, fight bandits and dangerous animals were just a few of the many hazardous dangers that he face on a daily basis. He also had to deal with a grudging father and a family that had been wanting to kill him for quite some time , going as far as even hiring bandits to attack him when he was on the job. He was to naïve to actually notice these things though and continued on with his daily life. Soon though, these petty attempts would soon become actual attacks against his life from members of his family and would usually be more than just one on one, some ranging from six on one to 14 on one with the winner usually being Shizu. He knew that there was a risk being taken when he won but didn’t actually expect that they would come back for more when they themselves are almost ripped to shreds by Shizu’s blade. It went through unnoticed that these attacks were happening when there were meetings with the village council, they were being paid vast amounts of money that would make the most ritch snob cringe by his own father. Shizu never realized this, never even thinking about it until he actually saw the faces of the people who were attacking him, and just thought that they were making attempts to kill him and the council didn’t see it as a threat. Shizu’s winnings against the members of the family were angering his father and encouraging him to destroy his demon-spawn of a child, him being the father and all, but considered that if he were to kill him he would lose his rank as leader of the village. But for every win meant less people for him to hire to kill Shizu for cheap and more money to go to the over-costing mercenaries who weren’t as strong as any member of his own family. He was left in a very heavy point now and was driven to the place of no-return, he was running out of money and time, his little war against his own son was reaching the three year point and no current victor stood over the horizon. He knew that if the battle were to wage between the two would go on any longer with him paying and pulling the strings, he would go broke and left with no actual home to save him from the cold. Shizu’s father was going to challenge him to a battle to the death. The battle took place in the snow covered valleys that surrounded the village, a place where no one would know what would happen on that day. Shizu had been taken their in his sleep without hesitation by his own father, wearing his soldiers uniform that he once wore when he too was a member of the protection squad. He brought along the sword of the Tensu family and the spear of the Gensu village, weapons that were able to slay the most powerful of opposers. Their battle is said to have been the stuff of legends that even the most able body battle lovers would collapse in the end. He himself cannont remember the event quite so well other than him killing his father in an honorable fashion, him dying before he hit the ground. Relizing that he was unable to return to the village he buried his father in the snow and icebanks and took the sword with him, hoping that it would help him in his journey throughout the world. These events have happened in the past and now Shizu is entering into the future, where he will face stronger opponents than he has ever faced. Appearance Visual Appearance: ![]() Physical Appearance: Shizu is a generally attractive person with pearly white skin and dark black hair, the occasional scar being found across his chest and back areas. He has deep blue eyes that would put the most sane person into the deepest transe, some being mesmerized by for hours by his deep stare. Clothing and Armor: He wears a jet black kimono and Hakama pants, a white obe belt with little trinkets like spoons and bones is located across his groin area. Personality: He is generally nice person who accepts most people as human beings. He is the type of person who gives people compliments instead of insults. He has an addictive personality torwords food and is attracted to most resteraunts by the smell of the intoxicating aroma. Abilities and Weaponry Powers/Abilities: Shizu is an accomplished swordsman and is capable of taking out an entire crowd if wanted to in an instant, though he prefers not to. Tenso Mitazuki part 1: Shizu uses some of his ki to create an illusion of a demon similar to an Asura god Tenso Mitauki part 2: Shizu use more ki energy to create an illusion of men riding horses heading twords his opponent Tenso Mitazuki part 3: Shizu uses all of his ki to create several illusions of himself attacking his opponent Weapons/Items: ![]() Dark Slayer: Shizu unsheathes his sword and creates a blast of ki, this ability is stronger for every time he unsheathes the sword quicker. Q-Lazzerus: Shizu uses ki to channel energy into his blade, creating a large blast of energy every time his blade strikes something. This ability is automatic and does not require any physical attempt by Shizu. 123 pound cannon: Shizu uses ki to increase the pressure that the sword releases when his strike hits, creating a shockwave that is sent from the spine into the brain causing temporary parralysis and even shock. Blade of Asura: Shizu creates a black blast of ki energy that is released when he strikes his opponent, creating a dark shadow that clouds over the opponent, syphoning thier ki into a large ball of energy that is controlled by Shizu's blade. Unlike his ability, Q-Lazzerus, this requires actual attempts of strength to pull of and mostly drains him of his might and ki. (That’s all for now) Roleplay Example The course of the ship had been set, the direction placed, and the lone traveler had now been planning for the day that he would reach the modern world. He paced the deck of his small scooner in a irratationg fashion and was actually muttering some slang terms at himself for being an idiot for forgetting to pack anything other than his swordsman outfit. He knew that he would be ridiculed by members of current society for dressing in such an old fashion, especially with his sword traveling with him on his side. It wasn’t a fear to be ridiculed, he was now used to it from his past, but it had bothered him to see people walking around in nice clothing than him, he was a slave to fitting in. He then saw the oncoming island and prepared himself for society, the new life that he had been preparing for so long was now in his grasp. He smiled and reached for his sword, and yelled loudly, “People of the current generation, prepare for a true warrior.” Power Level - 700,000, this is only because he trains himself to the max every day from sunrise to sundown . |
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| Deleted User | Oct 4 2008, 05:48 AM Post #2 |
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Looks good just a few questions on the abilites though, the 123 pound cannon said it sends a pulse up the spin to the brain. What effect there after does it have? parazlying blow? death blow? Blade of Asura too is that automatic or what? Is it like the Q-Lazzerus? If you could add more detail to them to make it clearer it would help. Also your power level Humans can train yes but they are limited. Even Tien bearly broke past 950,000 in the Cell saga, so im hesitant to let oddly powerful humans running around, even if they have trained alot they would just be skilled not immensely powerful. |
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| The King of Fap | Oct 4 2008, 02:25 PM Post #3 |
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Kay, edited every thing out Tam, hope you like. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 4 2008, 02:28 PM Post #4 |
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Ok I'll aprove it then looks alright, just keep an eye on your power level you may train alot but still humans do have their limits. Approved One more mod approval and your golden. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 4 2008, 02:42 PM Post #5 |
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I've had a rethink and going from 900,00 to 990,000 just because u train all day and night is too unlikely for me unfortunately. I was being trusting but a human would just not be at that level as I mentinoed with the likes of Tien. I've edited it to 700,000 which sound more reasonable for an advanced human fighter. You can progress but not in huge steps as said in the rules. |
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| The King of Fap | Oct 4 2008, 03:06 PM Post #6 |
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Fap is the name, fapping is my game
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Okay, thanks tam |
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| Kiba Nurasami | Oct 5 2008, 12:49 AM Post #7 |
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