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[Guillford] Piccolo; Namek/Z Fighter
Topic Started: Sep 30 2008, 08:21 PM (134 Views)
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Name: Piccolo

Alias: Demon Jr., Piccolo Jr.

Gender: Genderless

Age: 10

Race: Namekian

Birthdate: 789 A.D

Birthplace: Namek

History:

Several hundres years later Piccolo took part in the World's Martial Arts contest. He made it to the finals with, easily with his special abilities. His opponet in the final round was young boy named Goku, who at this time he did not know was also a alien. Piccolo fought Goku and when it seemed he had one, the tides were turned back onto him and he was defeated intstead. Because of Piccolo's rage, Goku was forced to use a killing blow/ This ending Piccolo's life, but Piccolo had a plan. Right before he passed he spit up an egg, and egg witch contained a genetic copy of himself, nonone knew what lay inside.

From the egg was born Piccolo Jr. or now the only Piccolo. Piccolo trained for three years by himself out in the wildness of the earth. He couldnt figure out how someone such as Goku could have defeated his father. So he enterd the njext tournament under the guise of Demon Jr, and quickly made it to the final rounds were he would face Goku. But just like his father, piccolo was also defeated. Piccolo hated Goku so much from that point on, that he dedicated himself to training to destroy him one day, and to take over the world.

Although five years later while he was training a mysterious person showed up. His name was Raditz, and he confronted Piccolo and was going to kill him but realized it was not worth his effort. He headded off after his next target: Goku. Enraged by thought of this person calling him inferior and Goku better just sent Piccolo over the edge. " He wil not take over my plans fro defeating Goku and taken over this world", he said to himself before he took off to find Goku.

When he found Goku, he was slighly beaten and had come to found that his son Gohan had been taken by the man named Raditz. " You know Goku, the only way you can get your son back is if we do this together", he stated. It was also the only way that it was assured that Piccolo would be the one to kill Goku in the future. So the once hated enemies became allies and headed off towards weree Radditz was.

It was a fierce battle between the three but in the end Raditz was ahead and was going to win the fight. " Goku, I have a technique tha could beat him, but the problem is I need to charge it up", he said to his new ally. " Alright I got you Piccolo", replied Piccolo. So goku dashe forward and got behind Raditz and held his tail, the one weakness that Raditz had. Squeezing it caused Raditz to kneel down in pain and at the moment Piccol began charging his attack. " Get of me Kakkarot, you and the Namekian won;t stop me", he screamed as he started to rise again, shrugging off the severe pain coming from his tail. " Goku, I need alittle more time, Its not enough", yelled Piccolo when he saw Raditz getting up. Trying to buy somemore time Goku put Raditz in a full nelson and held him in place. " Fire Piccolo", he yelled from behind Raditz.

Piccolo eyes widened. Like this I can take two birds out with one stone, he thought to himself. When the attack was finally ready, " Special...Beam...Cannon", he yeled thrusting his two fingers forward and sending a spiraling beam of Ki out. The beam poierced through Raditz killing him and went through and killed him aswell. But right before Raditz died, he revealaed something. " You fools, you thought I was much..ha/ In a years time two of my companions will be coming to earth, who are ten times stronger then at the minimum", he laughed before kicking the bucket Piccolo should have been happy, he should have been felling like he was ontop of the workld, he had finally taken out the only person that stood in his way of world domination. So he took little Gohan home, who he discovered had a hidden little power of his own, as it was demonstrated earlier in the fight.


Later that year, Piccolo has a vision. One of his death at the hands of the soon to be new arrivals. So instead of just using Gohan now, Piccolo plans on training him to be his successor. Its during these next couple that Piccolo's whole demeanor changes. He sorta becomes a surrogate second father for Gohan, and soon learns a new feeling...one of love. During this training Piccolo has to blow up the moon to prevent Gohan from continuing his animal rage in his oozaru form. These new emotions show up after the Saiyans arrive , when Piccolo dies protecting Gohan, and buying time for Goku to arrive, back from the afterlife. Goku with the help of Krillin and Gohan defeated Nappa and Vegeta, saving the world. But when Piccolo died, Kami died with him, destroying the Dragonballs in the process.

Gohan and Krillin soon found a way to bring Piccolo and the others that died back to life, it would require them to travel to the plant Namek, the birth place of Piccolo's father. They soon left with their friend Bulma as well and travel to Namek. Hearing news of this, Goku heads after them in his own ship hurrying to catch up to them. They soon ressurect Piccolo so he can help them defeat the evil lord Freeza. After Piccolo was brought back to life he assimilated himself with another Namekian named Nail, thus giving him a great power boost. This stunt almost doubled Piccolo's power on the spot. But this boost was not enough and Piccolo was beaten again, he was even beaten by a weaker form of Freeza. Goku arrived soon later on the scene and took over fighting Freeza. Later on in the fight Freeza uses Piccolo as a target to piss of Goku, and almost killed Piccolo in the process. 'Gohan take Piccolo and get out of here now", Goku said to his son. So Gohan picked up Piccolo and they headed for their ship to head back home.This trigggerd Goku's rage and caused him to go Super Sayjin, and giving him the power to defeat Freeza once and for all.

THe plamet at this point had taken all it could from the battle of the two titans and was slowly imploding on its self. The planet exploded just as the ship carrying Piccolo made it out. In a sense Piccolo had lost again, to Goku, even though he died. Its at this point Piccolo loses all intrest in defeating Goku, he knows its never going to happen, and just accepts his fate.



Appearance
Visual Appearance: Posted Image
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Physical Appearance:
Hair- None
Eye Color- Black
Height- 6'2
Weight- 185lbs
Clothing and Armor:
Piccolo only wears the same outfit most of the time. The outfit consists of purple baggy pants, purple sleeveless top, white cape with shoulder pads, and a white wrap on his head. He wore a pair of street clothes once so he could take his drivers test, but that is it.
Personality:
Piccolo only cares about one thing. Becoming strong. But later on in his life he started to develop other feelings and has developed a sort of father son love for Gohan and will protect him with his life if need be. In battle Piccolo is very cunning, he knows what he can do, and uses that info to his advantage to create strategies.

Abilities and Weaponry

Powers/Abilities:

  • Zanzoken: In this attack Piccolo moves so fast, that he leaves an image of himself behind. Thus, it looks like the he is in several places at once, or has made copies of himself.

  • Flight: Using a degree of Ki control, Piccolo can fly over short and long distances, depending on how much Ki he uses. If he focuses more of his Ki he can increase his speed to great amounts.

  • Ki Blast: Basic attack that fires a blast of ki.

  • Ki Wave: Another basic attack that fires a beam/wave of Ki.

  • Choubakuretsumaha: Piccolo uses this attack by charging up a lot of KI in his hands, then unleashing it in the form of a large beam.

  • Ring Jyou no ( Eye Lasers): Piccolo charges up Ki into his eyes and fires it out in beams from his eyes.

  • Kakusan Yuudou Kikou Ha: Piccolo fires multiple Ki blasts that form balls and fly at the enemy. Piccolos intentional misses his opponent so as to surround the enemy with these Ki balls. When the enemy is totally surrounded, Piccolo closes hi fist and the balls converge on the target all at once causing massive damage.

  • Mouth Blast: Piccolo uses this ability to shoot a Ki blast from his mouth. It can be a very surprising attack, and one which is usually very powerful.

  • Renzoku Energy Dan: A machine gun KI attack, used by Piccolo. It is fairly powerful, especially if the defender is caught off guard, as many beams can be fired home, and the ones that hit have more power than the last. It is good as a distraction tactic too, firing a few of them before charging up a really big attack to finish it off. The disadvantage is that this attack can take its toll on the attacker, due to the large energy drain.

  • Regeneration: Piccolo can regenerate lost body parts, as long as his head remains intact. The time to regenerate depends on the size of the part needed to grow back.

  • Special Beam Cannon: This is an incredibly powerful beam that Piccolo first uses against Radditz and Goku. It is a straight Ki beam with another coiled around it. It is charged by putting two fingers against the forehead the fired by extending the arm and firing form the fingers.

  • Rubber Limbs: Piccolos limbs can extend to great lengths witch he can use as a surprise attack on the enemy. Max range is 40 feet.
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Roleplay Example

" Goku if were going to defeat him you have to hold him still for alittle bit longer. I am almost done", yelled a strained Piccolo. His finger were held to his forehead and a charge of condensed Ki had begun to form. Only a couple feet away Goku was struggling to keep his brother Raditz at bay, until Piccolo's attack was ready. Finally feeling the right amount of energy had collected Piccolo was ready to fire. Piccolo gave Goku a stare, to witch Goku replied with a nod, and gave what little strength he had left and held Raditz in place. " Special Beam Cannon", yelled Piccolo while thrusting his fingers forward, sending a spiral type beam at Raditz. The attack successfully pierced through Raditz then went through Goku as well. The world had a major threat defeated, but also lost a great hero as well.

Power Level -

Base: 13,000,000
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This looks ok but that's really it unfortunately. Also looks like a wiki copy paste job too since at the end you pose a question and he hasn;t trained for 3 years after the fight with Freeza since that only happened 2 months ago in this RP so last bit is a take out and the power level is around 13 mil not 28.

If you can bolster it out make it look original yet to the character I'll give you it but right now it looks copied unfortunately.
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Piccolo_(Dragon_Ball)

i got the detail for the history from here, but its all in my own words. and 2 months after freeza, then that means almost 4 years till cell shows?
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ok well sorta makes me less wanting to give you him now since its a wiki rip basically. We're not running this in line with the anime, it's after the Freeza saga but we're letting anyone in, hell we even got Buu.
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bump, and fixed history
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Ok I'll give you a crack at it looks good enough. If you don't live up to the role though we can pull you off so don;t disappoint me please :p

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