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| Vincente Silvario | Sep 30 2008, 08:39 AM Post #1 |
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...><> Mr.Bishy...
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General Information Name: Sajin Konamura Alias: None Gender: Male Age: 645 Birthdate: 23 august Birthplace: Unknown Current Residence: 7th squad headquarters History: As a boy he was quite intellegent as a child and learned many things from his father, including basic herblore, combat and other things to defend himself. At his first day at school he was bullied, for being big, and fat, crying most days and getting into fights all the time, when he graduated from school, he went on to collge studing Medical care and other medical stuff, he then went onto university learning advance sceince and health. Sajin worked in a hospital, he worked alot and tried not to harm others he had done miracle treatments and, until, one day he was hit by a car, knocking him off his feet, the hospital didnt come out to save him quick enough, he died on the scene and was constantly running from attacking hollows, not knowing what they are, he was saved by a unknown being, and was quickly burialed to soul soceity, when he got there he was discriminated from society, as he noticed he was hairy big and scary, he walked around many months on himself, and practicing his strenght by hitting trees. While practicing once in an open grassy area, Tosen chances upon someone, and because he is blind, had no idea where the person was. It was only when Komamura spoke that he realized he had talked in the wrong direction. Complimenting Komamura’s ability to hide his presence so well, Tousen said that he had never been able to not feel someone’s presence before, even though his eyes cannot see. Komamura was highly touched, for this was among the first times that he was not looked upon as an outcast. They slowly became freinds, helping each other train, he soon enetered the academy and became profieccent in all classes, he passed, and soon was entered into the 11th squad due to his strenght, he fought many times with his captain training loads and having fun, quickly rising in the ranks to vice captain, but his life was to be changed forever, his captain was challanged by a man who called himself, Kenpachi, they fought vigerously, with kenpachi becoming the victor, making Sajin want to kill him, but he leanred to keep this anger, soon, he was told by tousen and Aizen, that he himself, had the correct reatsu to obtain bankai, and trained like mad, day in and out for many years, he finally obtained bankai and was very pleased with himself, he entered the captains profeictancy test and passed, becoming the 7th squad captain. After Aizen’s death,Komamura visits Aizen’s body in the 4th Squad Relief Station, accompanied by Tosen. the day of Rukia Kuchiki's execution itself. As Tetsuzaemon Iba, his lieutenant, rushes towards Komamura, landing in a kneeling position and apologizing profusely for his latecoming, Komamura stops him in mid-sentence. He says that he knows Iba understands that he needed time to think through his own thoughts, for Komamura had reservations about Rukia’s execution that Iba had already perceived. They were, however, overridden purely by Komamura’s deep gratitude for Shigekuni Yamamoto-Genryūsai. Komamura reveals at this point that because of his appearance, he was always an outcast. Yet Yamamoto took him in and took care of him, and because of this Komamura always strives to do something for Yamamoto. It is the same reason that has driven Komamura to become a Captain among the Gotei 13 Squads. At this time Tosen appears with Shūhei Hisagi, his lieutenant, and Komamura asks him whether he holds the same view. Tosen merely replies that his eyes reflect the path of least blood and that he believes he walks the same path as Komamura. Later, Komamura, Iba, Tosen and Hisagi stop Kenpachi Zaraki and his group in an open courtyard. Going through the verbal sparring, Zaraki is left with Tosen and Komamura. Komamura, getting tired of Zaraki’s arrogance, unleashes Tenken upon Zaraki, and Tosen follows that up with Benihikou. Despite the heavy damage however, Zaraki laughs off the attacks and the three start fighting. Despite their attacks, Komamura and Tosen are thrown about. Zaraki sneers at Komamura and asks him to release his Bankai and fight him. Komamura is greatly angered and answers that he does not require Bankai to fight a traitor like Zaraki. It is at this point that Tosen begins speaking to Zaraki, telling Komamura first that he will “do it”. When news of Aizen and Tosen betraying Soul Society reaches him, and he rushes over to the Soukyoku Stand and jumps onto Aizen, who stops his blade with one hand. As Aizen calmly mentions that it has been quite a while since he last saw Komamura’s face, Komamura gets angrier and asks Aizen how he can still smile at this point in time, mentioning as well that he will never forgive Aizen and Tosen for betraying Soul Society. Angered at their betrayal, Komamura finally asks Tosen for an explanation. Getting none, Komamura immediately does Bankai. However, under Aizen's Zanpakuto's hypnosis, he realizes too late that Aizen is right in front of him. Aizen then does a Hadou kido spell (Black Coffin) and defeats Komamura. Komamura regains consciousness at the time of the three leaving, shouting for Tosen to get back down. “Why did you become a Shinigami?” he asks. “Was it not for your friend who died? Was it not for justice?” Tousen replies that he had told Komamura before that “all that is reflected in these eyes is the path of least blood. The path I walk is justice.” A week after that, Komamura stands in front of the grave of Tousen’s dead friend, asking her what she would have said to stop Tosen. Then, Hisagi makes his appearance, and Komamura is asked if Tosen will ever come back. “Without a doubt,” he replies. “By our own hands, let us open his eyes.” Appearance Visual Appearance: ![]() Physical Appearance: His build is massive, and he remains the biggest captain out of the gotei 13 he is very musclular and has remarkable strenght,as a " dog " he has a fur coat, which is orange/red with a white patch on his head and his belly like a fox he has yellow small eyes. Clothing and Armor: He wears the standard shingami outfit, with golden colour plates on his shoulders which his helmet used to lie on, his whole outfit is huge like himself. His haori is over sized and never usually cut, he keeps it in mint condition and gets it cleaned daily, due to him being a dog, his golden plates are quite strong, but a good reatsu could cut them, he wears golden plates on his wrist and the top of his hand aswell, which add weight if he is punching, causing alot more damage Personality: Physically imposing, Komamura is a gentle giant. He is the quintessential loyal and grateful subordinate. His deep gratitude to Yamamoto for taking him in overrides all his own feelings, and for Yamamoto he will do anything, even die. Komamura is a serious man, deeply scarred by the times he was spurned by society for his appearance, yet undyingly loyal to the values he holds. Like Ukitake and Unohana, he is not tough or cruel with his squad, preferring to lead with impartiality. Visual Age: N/A Division: 7th Divisions: 11th Rank: Captain Zanpakutou Zanpakutou Name:Tenken Spirit Appearance: A samuria warrior, with a sword, black armour and no face, he appears to be a shade. Inner World: A Large wood with many spirit animals living there. Sealed Form: A large Zanpakuto with a brown hilt and a triangleler shaped guard, strapped to his waist on the right side. Shikai Shikai Release Phrase: roar Shikai Appearance:Tenken creates various body parts of a fearsome armored giant to copy whatever body part Komamura moves Shikai Abilities: Tenken creates various body parts of a fearsome armored giant to copy whatever body part Komamura moves; for example, should Komamura swing his sword, a gigantic disembodied arm wielding a sword appears and does the same thing. The body gigantic parts generated by the Initial Release possess strenght and attacking power proportionate to their size, making it quite powerful although quite slow. Bankai Bankai Name: Kokujō Tengen Myō'ō (Heavenly Punishment of Kokujō's King) Bankai Appearance: brings forth the entire giant. As in the shikai, the giant copies every movement made by Komamura, allowing him to deal colossal damage. ![]() Bankai Abilities: A much larger and the full version of the giant appears being stronger than its shikai, relying on Brute strenght. the giant has the melee power equivalant to its size, making it a very strong. Komamura has the option of being the giant itself making himself less vunerable Learned Kidou: he never uses kido. -------------------------------------------- Dropping Isane Kotetsu since i think il enjoy this character alot more |
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| Beriadan | Sep 30 2008, 09:18 AM Post #2 |
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Dx This needs waaaay more bulking out before I will even consider approving. The history needs to be built up, as does the appearance section. This is a step up from a mere vice-captain, you need to make the profile much more detailed and generally clean it up. Punctuation and simple things like that need to be used too... ![]() Also get a smaller picture for Komamura, I don't want to keep scrolling across the page to read the general parts. |
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| Vincente Silvario | Sep 30 2008, 09:25 AM Post #3 |
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...><> Mr.Bishy...
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Okay, thanks for help, il edit it asap, and il find a smaller picture ^^ |
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| Vincente Silvario | Oct 2 2008, 07:59 AM Post #4 |
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| Beriadan | Oct 5 2008, 02:18 AM Post #5 |
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You better roleplay him well Approved.
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