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| Deleted User | Sep 30 2008, 06:37 AM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Telek; Later renamed as a Darius Mauhle Alias: Maul Gender: Male Age: 459 Birthdate: 30th December Birthplace: Africa Current Residence: Las Noches Fortress History: Telek was born in a coastal tribe in Africa, to a very war-directed culture. Ever since as a little boy, Telek was trained to be a valorous warrior, to bring new territories to his tribe, as well as to bring honor, and prosperity to the family. This was what he wanted the most, and was what he strived everyday to achieve, not only to prove himself as a Warrior, but to prove he could fill in for his father, the current "king". He trained by his side, and with him, side by side, mano a mano, growing as a warrior and as a man. By the time he was 19, he faced his first great battle. It was a total slaughter... he killed many, and lost many friends to that battle. But the greatest loss was that of his father, at the hands of a coward enemy who played dead and stroked him on his back before Telek could do anything to prevent his father’s death. This scared him deeply, as he saw his father almost as indestructible. Darius ran to the said coward, and battled him. It was a very even fight, since both warriors seemed to be their tribe’s prime. However, Telek proved his advantage by successfully defeating his opponent in unarmed combat. Somehow, he managed to escape Telek’s grasp, but Telek sworn to hunt him down and kill him. The said coward turned out to have become his tribe’s king, just as he became. His tribe, from what he understood, was nomad; they moved from turf to turf, and rather than taking and keeping, they would take, harvest and abuse the land, and leave the ruined turf behind to someone that might want to take advantage of it to rebuild and use. Sometimes they would come back to take over re-built territories, just for the need. This greatly displeased Telek… he would need to stop them, lest they would threaten his rule. However, it would seem his rival started to take the southern territories, while he himself would take on the northern ones. This seemed like a challenge… his rival was forcing him to either run or face him. In only 4 years or so, they had grown in strength, both their own physical and their territorial strength. At last, the greatest battle arrived. It had been 6 years since they last seen each other, and yet, they knew quite a bit of one another. They both knew of one another’s status within their tribes… they both knew this battle needed to happen… and they both knew one could only die by the hand of the other. It was a matter of honor at this point… so they went for it. Howling, Telek raised in the air his rather rudimentary axe, as his fellow tribe warriors ran across the battlefield to fight the enemy’s army. He himself held back, as did his rival… they stared at each other for awhile, from atop their high positions, before running to each, to meet in the final combat. It was a hard battle to fight, since both of them had improved their skills, but Telek was only wielding his axe out of respect for his father. As the battle developed, he ditched the axe and went for the knife, and then, both fought at their maximum extent, which ended with a victory to Telek, killing his mortal opponent. Well, half a victory; his tribe lost, and just after he killed his rival, his tribe ravaged his tired body with brutal blunt slashes. He became a hollow out of the feeling of failure towards his father’s goal of domination. He had failed; he had died way too young, and the violence that ruled his life had drifted his mind away from girls, thus dying without leaving a son to carry on his legacy; his tribe would have most likely been destroyed too. All this made his mind franticly regret most of his actions; it brought forth all sorrow, hatred, dismay… Telek lost track of his consciousness for a great period of time. He was a very strange hollow, having a big whip like tail, and strong muscular structure, built mainly to close range combat. He couldn’t stand the plains of Hueco Mundo from the start, as it made him feel starved from the second he was there, so he soon travelled to Earth, using instinctively his abilities granted to him upon his Spirit Chain break. Appearance Visual Appearance: Will put up soon. Physical Appearance: Darius looks a bit buff, but its not that much muscular. He is tall, has large shoulders, tough rib cage and bricks for abdomen. He is dark skinned, dark brown eyes and shaved head. His hollow mask, or what's left of it, it's his leash like collar. Clothing and Armor: He uses a white tank shirt, with a hole on the stomach where his hollow hole moved. He has not too baggy pant style kimono, stuck inside the army like black boots. Personality: Darius is mainly defined by his bluntness of speech when angry, and at the same time, wise when the occasion calls for some mocking, or sarcasm. His speech is marked by hatred towards those who consider themselves superior to others, and thus, to shinigamis. He can be cruel at times, due to his long life as a hollow, which lead him to be mindless enough to kill for no apparent reason, but ever since he ripped off his mask he regained alot of his former humanity, and now, if he can, he will preserve life. First of all, a dead body encumbers and serves no advantage, and a living person can be useful in a number of ways. While in battle, Darius focus most of his game into throwing his enemy off balance. He terribly despises those who think themselves too great to demonstrate their true power in battle, and will go all out on their kind just to give them no second chance of doing so. He goes has hard as he can against these enemies. Enemies who Role Play Sample: Show me your stuff. Visual Age: 25 Rank: Undefined; competing for top 3 Espadas. Zanpakutou Zanpakutou Name: Perseguidora Sealed Form: A combat knife, on the back of the waist, 45º angle to the right. Resurrección Resurrección Phrase: Chase 'em, Perseguidora. Resurrección Form Appearance: Around Darius arms grow arms as big as himself, with side plates that go up twice his head's size. His fists are huge too, having almost the radius of the torso itself. On his skull, the mask takes a place as if it was a gas mask, covering the mouth, nose and ears, but keeping the shaved head and eyes on the open. His boots remain the same, but covered by a second layer of hollowish matter, making them white instead of black. On the upper arms, there are a series of tip closed pipe like structures comming out of the arm bicepe and shoulder muslces, which are one of the sources of power. The lower arm, right before the fist and up to the elbow, there are open pipe like structures, directed from the fist to the elbow, in a 30º angle. His torso enlargens a bit, and he grows a foot too. Resurrección Form Abilities: The resurrección works in two stages, which can be triggered independently from one another, but that can be combined too to make powerful combos. The pipes in his shoulder work the fluid circuit inside the upper arms, which affects fast the arm flicks. If he builds pressure, it can build up to the point that on release it will add much more kinetic buffer to the punch, giving it more destructive power. The second part is the pipes structures on the fist and arm. Using almost the same method, the pressure built in the upper arms, after innefective, can be transferred to the fist, which uses high kinetic pressure to build up steam, creating a rocket like effect, multiplying the speed of the fist, and thus, it's power. [Principle of Kinetic Energy] Hollow Powers Hierro, Sonido, Bala, Cero, Royal Hollow Flash. |
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| Hellyaman | Oct 4 2008, 05:31 AM Post #2 |
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Royal Cero? I don't think that it is a hollow power. |
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| Hellyaman | Oct 4 2008, 04:21 PM Post #3 |
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Also, take out the part about destroying most things on your first stage. Just say that it adds more bite to the punch. Destroying most things is slightly godmodding. |
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| Hellyaman | Oct 9 2008, 11:40 AM Post #4 |
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Expand your history. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 10 2008, 08:05 AM Post #5 |
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Lol, Royal Cero is Royal Hollow Flash, that thing Grimmjow uses against Ichigo. Since Cero means Hollow Flash, it's the same. Sorry that it sounded godmodded, but I'm not a native english speaker, so at times it might come hard for me to fully express myself, or to find good words to express. I'll fix it. I am working on the history.
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| Hellyaman | Oct 11 2008, 09:21 PM Post #6 |
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You meant gran rey cero. |
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