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| quincigamarrizard | Aug 20 2008, 01:25 PM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Ybur Alias: Keel (Human name) Gender: Male Age: 28 Race: Half Human, Half Mera (Flame based alien race) Birthdate: May, 23rd Birthplace: A house out in the countryside. History: He is the son of a female human and a flaming creature called a Mera. Ybur's mother, Kya, was a rocket scientist who had been working on a saucer-like spaceship. After years of work her ship was finished and was preparing for it's maiden voyage. His mother and her crew took of into space to explore more solar systems and search for planets similar to earth. In there voyage they discovered a nearby solar system, which they dubbed Wu Xing, the name of the five Chinese elements. One planet that the landed on was a planet in which an ancient and extinct race developed a highly technological society. This planet was run by machines and computers. The crew then traveled to a planet called Huo, this planet was engulfed in flames. The crew came out in heat resistant suits and when they stepped out the were met by soldiers who then captured them. The crew was brought before the king of these fire creatures called Mera. The king, Erihppas, was about to have them executed when his brother stepped in and stopped him. His brother, Ztrauq, noticed that the humans meant know harm and was increasingly interested in Kya. After the humans were set free to explore and research the planet, Ztrauq decided he would be Kya's guide as she explored Huo. After spending five months on the planet, gathering information on other fuels and ways to sustain life, Kya and Ztrauq had fallen in love. After going out to the capital city of Huo, Agni, they came back to the royal family's castle and found themselves in Ztrauq's room, alone. Kya would soon discover that Ztrauq had the ability to turn his flames off, revealing a body similar to an adult male human. That night the two made a love to each other and promised to stay together forever. The next day, Kya discovered that her stomach had grown substantially. She asked Ztrauq what had happened to her and he reveal that she must have been pregnant. Kya claimed this to be impossible since pregnancy doesn't happen this rapidly. Ztrauq told her that Mera babies are born two days after intercourse. And a day later Ybur was born and took the name of his grand father. Upon hearing of the relationship between Ztrauq and Kya, the king banished them and their crew from the planet. They left and returned to earth. Ybur was much like a Mera, he grew quickly. After only a year he had the intelligence and the appearance of a 24 year old. He stayed at this appearance since then. He began training to be a Mera warrior as soon as he could walk, which didn't take long. Ztrauq taught him in the ways of a Mera, including how to switch between Mera form and human form. Ybur became a strong warrior but wanted to become stronger. He had learned of Master Roshi after watching the World Tournaments on DVD. He began to do research on Roshi until he discovered where the Turtle Hermit lived and went to the island to learn from him. He was taught flight, how to create after images, and even Kamehameha. After training with Master Roshi, Ybur returned to his family and his father began teaching him Mera techniques. He wanted to exact revenge on his uncle for banishing his parents. This fueled him to become the next king of Huo and he trains everyday to do so. Appearance Visual Appearance: The one in the middle, this is his normal form. Mera formPhysical Appearance: Human Form: He has flame orange eyes and has a yellow streak going through his hair; starting near the middle of his forehead going to the middle of his head. He is very muscular throughout all of his forms. Mera Form:Mostly the same as the picture but he has black eyes. He also has no stitches on his mouth. Clothing and Armor: He wears the same outfit as in the first picture but has a flame emblem on the gloves and in the middle of the shirt. In his Mera form his flames burn off his cloths, covering him in flames Personality: He is obsessed with getting stronger. He likes to challenge people to fights and only becomes friends with them if they can fight well. He is kind and well-mannered. He doesn't brutality and only wants to fight for sport. Though like most Mera when he sets his mind on a goal he won't stop until that goal is reached. Abilities and Weaponry Powers/Abilities: Peak Physical form Like most Mera he is very strong, though not like Goku. He is extremely fast and can even make After Images. He is also very agile; able to flips with little effort, along with moves that most gymnast take years to be able to do. BukuJutsu Also like most characters he is able to fly with ease, levitate, and fight while in mid-air. Zanzôken (After Image Technique) An ability to move so quickly that an image of the techniques user is left behind. Most often it is used to dodge an incoming attack and get behind the opponent to perform a counter-attack. Henshin This technique is used to transform into Keel's Mera form. Mera Form In this form he is able to use all of his Mera Techniques though not all require this form. Flame Sword This technique creates a sword out of flames that Keel uses for close combat. Kamehemeha A large blue energy wave that is fired from one's cupped hands. Ybur does not require his Mera form to do this attack. Flame Buster Keel punches the air and fires small weak fireballs at his opponent. These are mainly distractions. Rodoileh This creates a small fireball in Ybur's hand. Ybur makes a fist and them proceeds to unleash a series of hits on to his target. Ybur finishes by firing a dragon-shaped blast at the target. Weapons/Items: Extinguisher Capsule- Used by throwing the capsule into a flame, it burst and releases chemicals found in Fire Extinguishers. This capsule is used for Keel's flames that lit up in nearby environments. x10 Roleplay Example Keel took a pod from his family's ship and went down to Earth. He waited for his father how arrived in a pod a little after Keel did. Watch dad, I'll show you what I can do. Keel began with a series of punches and kicks, his father dodged them with ease. Keel's father Ztrauq fired a Flame Buster and then appeared behind Keel and punched him in the face. Keel was knocked into a nearby tree, breaking it in two and receiving a burn on his face. "Henshin!" Keel turned into his Mera form and charged his father. Their fists collided creating small shockwaves. Keel flipped backward, kicking his dad in the face. He brought his hands together and bright blue Ki formed in between his palms. He brought his hands forward and fired a blast headed straight for his father. "Kamehameha!" Keel took a deep breath and repeated his previous attack. "Kamehameha!! This is the power of Keel-Ybur," he said with a smile though his voice sounded angry and aggressive. Power Level: 830,000 Edited by ShadowDragonTam, Nov 5 2008, 01:09 PM.
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| Deleted User | Aug 23 2008, 03:04 AM Post #2 |
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This is far too over powered, if you have this flame form your not getting super sayian no matter what, even sayians will have trouble getting super sayian in here. You need to tone down the powers and make your history alot more better. The better the detail and everything and indepth of the profile the more likely we'll give you someone strong. |
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| weehay | Aug 23 2008, 05:49 AM Post #3 |
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I don't like the idea of someone having this type of character. being a half sayian and half of a custom race, I don't like that idea. Sayians are already the most powerful race in the DBZ universe, so mixing a sayian with another race (other than a human) I hate the idea. |
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Characters Bleach Dark Revenant Kyoraku Shunsui "Even if i wish for these peaceful days to last forever, it's still only a simply wish. Peace never lasts, eventually conflict will be born again, that is the undeniable truth" Syao Byako Shogo Kiriyama "You listenin' you cowardly prick, you don't come out here right fuckin' now and I'll crush this little bastards head. You take too long in comin' out and I'll crush the little bastards head and piss on it's corpse, you got ten seconds" Divisions ![]() ![]() | |
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| quincigamarrizard | Aug 23 2008, 10:14 AM Post #4 |
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Edited, a lot |
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| Deleted User | Aug 23 2008, 10:54 AM Post #5 |
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Ok well you donw well now, though the training with Master Roshi is a little off, remember not everyone hears of him actually hardly anyone has heard of him when he grew older so it seems a little out there that he would suddenly learn of him and his hidden wearabouts. The Burning Kamehemeha is a big no no I'll never allow it pure and simple, if you teakw the training and go through it all making sure to get rid of all the sayian references i saw one or two then I'll approve this. |
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| quincigamarrizard | Aug 23 2008, 11:58 AM Post #6 |
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| Deleted User | Aug 23 2008, 12:03 PM Post #7 |
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cool much much better so im happy 1/2 approved just need weehay or kiba to approve you now and you'll be gd to go. |
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| weehay | Aug 23 2008, 12:48 PM Post #8 |
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Take out the flame Sayian thing and I'll give you my approval |
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Characters Bleach Dark Revenant Kyoraku Shunsui "Even if i wish for these peaceful days to last forever, it's still only a simply wish. Peace never lasts, eventually conflict will be born again, that is the undeniable truth" Syao Byako Shogo Kiriyama "You listenin' you cowardly prick, you don't come out here right fuckin' now and I'll crush this little bastards head. You take too long in comin' out and I'll crush the little bastards head and piss on it's corpse, you got ten seconds" Divisions ![]() ![]() | |
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| quincigamarrizard | Aug 23 2008, 12:50 PM Post #9 |
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I took Flame Saiyan out already. |
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| weehay | Aug 23 2008, 12:54 PM Post #10 |
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Approved |
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Characters Bleach Dark Revenant Kyoraku Shunsui "Even if i wish for these peaceful days to last forever, it's still only a simply wish. Peace never lasts, eventually conflict will be born again, that is the undeniable truth" Syao Byako Shogo Kiriyama "You listenin' you cowardly prick, you don't come out here right fuckin' now and I'll crush this little bastards head. You take too long in comin' out and I'll crush the little bastards head and piss on it's corpse, you got ten seconds" Divisions ![]() ![]() | |
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| Deleted User | Nov 5 2008, 01:10 PM Post #11 |
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Added your new power level of 830,000 for the tournament. You are able to increase it by training but no funny jumps please. |
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The one in the middle, this is his normal form.
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