[Revan46] Jin Haku

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[Revan46] Jin Haku
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Revan46	May 28 2008, 07:52 AM Post #1
Shh...don't wake the baby. CRAP IT'S AWAKE, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!! Posts: 3,250 Group: Coloholic Members Member #2,188 Joined: April 21, 2008	Name: Jin Haku Age: 15 Nationality: Fire Nation Appearance: Apparel: Jin often wears the normal outfits of the fire benders. He also has burgundy armour when he is in battle and wears it underneath his robe for easy use. Personality: Jin has a cheerful disposition and often tries to help out anyone he can. Background/History: Growing up in the fire nation, Jin was able to learn a lot about the difference between him and the other nations in the world. Following his training at the Fire Nation academy, Jin went traveling around the Fire Nation learning different possible techniques of fire bending. When his journey ended he returned to the Fire Nation with his knowledge and has now been pretty much doing nothing but training since his return. Items: Sword of Flames Currency: 45 ** Abilities: Each character has the following base abilities: Strength - 7 Speed - 7 Constitution - 6 Spirituality - 3 ** Skills: Like abilities, every character has an amount of skills they can increase via point system. Unlike abilities, all skills start at 0. Starting characters get 10 points to apply. 0 means unproficient while a full 10 means mastery of a skill. Unarmed Fighting - 3 Fire Bending - 3 Weapon Proficiency (Sword of Flames) - 2 Weapon Bending (specify both weapon used and bending)- Sword of Flames - 1 Other -
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RedBldSandman	May 28 2008, 09:44 AM Post #2
Ohhhhh YEAH! Posts: 2,968 Group: Coloholics Veteran Member #1,098 Joined: November 1, 2007	He's 15 and he's travelled around the world?.... No sword of flames. Use weapon bending to give the sword flames if you want. Spirituality actually starts at 2 pts instead of 5 like the others so it should be 3. Skills: 1. Weapon Bending takes 2 points to put up 1 level. 2. Lightning bending is advanced firebending and you only have 2 pts in firebending and even then, lightning bending is only achieved by a few - No lightning bending.
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Revan46	May 28 2008, 10:35 AM Post #3
Shh...don't wake the baby. CRAP IT'S AWAKE, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!! Posts: 3,250 Group: Coloholic Members Member #2,188 Joined: April 21, 2008	Well to the first yeah he's travelled, Aang was only 12 when he travelled or is travelling w/e lol. To the Sword of Flames it's only called that. Hence why I put some points in Weapon/Element Bending. The picture of it is what it looks like when fire has been put into it, ie. can I keep it. And to the skills, I took out lightning bending and put it into firebending and unarmed combat
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RedBldSandman	Jun 5 2008, 01:44 AM Post #4
Ohhhhh YEAH! Posts: 2,968 Group: Coloholics Veteran Member #1,098 Joined: November 1, 2007	it all looks fine apart from one thing: Weapon Bending takes 2 skill points to put up 1 level so you're currently over the limit by 2 points. You could take 1 level off weapon bending or take 2 points from elsewhere. After changing that, you'll be approved
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Revan46	Jun 5 2008, 04:13 AM Post #5
Shh...don't wake the baby. CRAP IT'S AWAKE, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!! Posts: 3,250 Group: Coloholic Members Member #2,188 Joined: April 21, 2008	Corrected
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RedBldSandman	Jun 5 2008, 07:16 AM Post #6
Ohhhhh YEAH! Posts: 2,968 Group: Coloholics Veteran Member #1,098 Joined: November 1, 2007	look again, you're still 1 over. Sorry but just take one more point off something
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Revan46	Jun 5 2008, 09:06 AM Post #7
Shh...don't wake the baby. CRAP IT'S AWAKE, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!! Posts: 3,250 Group: Coloholic Members Member #2,188 Joined: April 21, 2008	Does it take two points for Weapon Proficiency as well? Otherwise I just need to add one point to the proficiency.
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Jeff	Jun 5 2008, 11:29 AM Post #8
I've got a Ph.D in kicking your ass. Posts: 5,602 Group: Coloholics Elite Member #5 Joined: September 2, 2006	Actually, Red. he/she still has 1 point to use in skills. And no, you can't have traveled around the world at age 15. Yes, Aang did it at 12, and even younger, but there's good reason for it. He's an air nomad with a flying bison. Even if he's in the army, the Fire Nation wouldn't endanger one so young by sending him around the world. Please change story appropriately. You did not specify the type of weapon used in weapon bending. I don't care if the element isn't specified (as that's always intensely obvious) but weapon is important. Then it will be approved.
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Revan46	Jun 5 2008, 07:45 PM Post #9
Shh...don't wake the baby. CRAP IT'S AWAKE, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!! Posts: 3,250 Group: Coloholic Members Member #2,188 Joined: April 21, 2008	I'll change the story, but I did say what type of weapon it it when I listed my weapons I think...
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RedBldSandman	Jun 6 2008, 12:04 PM Post #10
Ohhhhh YEAH! Posts: 2,968 Group: Coloholics Veteran Member #1,098 Joined: November 1, 2007	Jeff Jun 5 2008, 07:29 PM Actually, Red. he/she still has 1 point to use in skills. That's cause he changed it but took off too much Revan, "Weapon Bending (specify both weapon used and bending)" - The weapon isn't specified.
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Revan46	Jun 6 2008, 03:53 PM Post #11
Shh...don't wake the baby. CRAP IT'S AWAKE, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!! Posts: 3,250 Group: Coloholic Members Member #2,188 Joined: April 21, 2008	There we go.
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RedBldSandman	Jun 7 2008, 02:10 PM Post #12
Ohhhhh YEAH! Posts: 2,968 Group: Coloholics Veteran Member #1,098 Joined: November 1, 2007	You haven't changed anything. You haven't edited your history to say you haven't travelled around the world and you didn't redo your skill points correctly - you have 1 more point to spend
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Revan46	Jun 7 2008, 06:23 PM Post #13
Shh...don't wake the baby. CRAP IT'S AWAKE, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!! Posts: 3,250 Group: Coloholic Members Member #2,188 Joined: April 21, 2008	Ok so I changed to just travelling the fire nation, is that fair? And I added a point to weapon proficiency.
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RedBldSandman	Jun 8 2008, 02:12 AM Post #14
Ohhhhh YEAH! Posts: 2,968 Group: Coloholics Veteran Member #1,098 Joined: November 1, 2007	Yeah, all is fine no I suppose. Approved. Start anywhere in the Fire Nation - your secret ability will be revealed at a later date
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