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[zutara]Ken Zakari; New Character
Topic Started: Mar 21 2008, 05:12 AM (55 Views)
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Name:Ken Zakari

Age:15

Nationality: Northern Water Tribe

Appearence:
Ken stands at 5ft 3. the tallest in his family. the skin tone is naturally bronze,his hair is a black style parts of his hair go down to his eye at the least his hair is straight and curves around the crown of the head , going down to his eyes,

It has fleck of dark-golden rod and flecks of fern green in his hazel eyes, His cheeks are somewhat chubby, His nose is un-naturally small but the width is normal sized (no idea how big a normal sized nose is) . His ears is small and circular , Ken's mouth is smooth and kissable (He-He) His skin on the other hand is very rough like granite (Hands , Feet)

His eyebrows are short and thick providing small warmth , He also has a scar above the left eye after a fight with the chieftain of the water tribe, His legs are long and muscular from ice weights.

Apparel: Being a nobleman in the northern water tribe , his shirt is made up of bright turquoise and stripe blends of Carolina blue. Kens belt is made up of 2 hides gulfer bear hide from the earth kingdom and wasp fly's Hide
from the deserts with a special ice crystal put in by the crafter in the town of the northern water tribe.

His baggy but furry polar leopard leggings, and for extra insulation it was mixed with snowla bears hides , His boots are made up of the thickest leather in the earth kingdom ... from baby unogi's.

on the other hand outside he likes to wear a normal sized a turquoise hajji its pretty warm ,But has some holes the right side goes down to the feet and Ken sometimes trips over it but his left goes just past the ankle ball. His top half he wears the normal shirt but he wears a coat made of leopard fur


Personality:Most of the time he is devilish and rude , always has a short fuse but on the other hand he can be polite . he is also known for his randomness of insults. Despite having a serious look, he is a joker at heart and loves poking fun at people, allies or enemy's. he is also a bit of a slacker who would never do something unless nagged into it or it was truly important.

He now often jokes about how he wishes he could still be lazy and do nothing.He generally try's to fit in, but does what he can to blend in, preferring to stand out rather than disappear, a trait which he has learned over the years that is how he became a joker if he is in a bad mood he is Blunt, Very crude and mean , Very sarcastic, he Tries to be independent most of the time but people think he just needs a helping hand.

Ken can't be summed up in just a few words, as he is a mixture of things that you could say about a person. When first meeting people he can up-straight,but sometimes he can be shy . Once he gets to know a person, he likes people trays to be happy, he tends to tell people what they want to hear to prevent hurting them or upsetting them, But he comes out with the wrong words and does the opposite he is trying to do . he is not easily embarrassed, Learning is sometimes his best Friend, it always gives him the edge on what to think of a prank to do next Ken is otherwise a confident boy. He tries his best to stay in shape and have characteristics that most people find "attractive" big abs, muscular legs, that sort of thing.

Becoming jealous easily, he gets either very sad, but if said the wrong thing it will turn into anger. he usually avoids the person/people that got her jealous for a few days/weeks. Luckily for her (and probably everyone else) Talking to everyone as if nothing ever happened, reducing the amount of stress in his life.


Background/History:Ken was born into the northern Water Tribe. His birth was one of the regular, nothing extraordinary happened. The only thing of coincidence that occurred, was the winter solstice which took place the day before.

Ken was a normal baby, Having a odd habit and by causing trouble. he began to walk at 2 years old , and even to speak at 2 and a half years old. His first word was "Mama" followed by "splash" and then "Dadda." When merely an infant, and always seemed to have a trick up his sleeve. His brown hair was an assortment of curls when young, but now days he has long hair goings down in straight and curves that go down to his eyes

When reaching the ages of toddler-hood, ken learned to speak like a normal child at the age of 7 (12 - 14) but for some reason could not read until he was 9. His reading became a hobby reading on such various things such as ,Bending scrolls and Bios on creatures in the north pole

When reaching his childhood (10-12), Ken was placed into bending lessons. he worked through it with no traces of bending but did not do any bending ,one day in the waters of the tribe he was fishing alone for his "master prank"

when he was fishing a elephant tuna grabbed the bait an started pulling the canoe along with him he tied the line around his hand . but it pulled him in, Unable to swim Ken thought about his life , the next thing he new he was on the boat . he had swam back to the boat and got back on , he started shouting at the tuna . he began waving his hands like a maniac until finally an iceberg caught his attention , pieces of ice were floating around him he put his hands beside his chest , the ice dropped into the water he went back home to tell his mother. then his mother enrolled him on master pakku's school for waterbending he has been learning waterbending since then

refrencing to erlier: the fight between the chief arnook and ken was because he involved a prank between his freind and him but it involved stealing one of chief arnoooks posessiong, the chief caught him and they had a fight

Items: Bronze Sword and bending and a lucky pendant

Currency: 49 water tribe money


Abilities:

Strength:6
Speed:9
Constitution:5
Spirituality:3

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Skills:

Unarmed Fighting:
water bending: 5
Weapon Proficiency: 3
Weapon Bending:1
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Ohhhhh YEAH!

Please actually read The Complete Guide and use the character template specified.

Also, try to use correct grammar and capital letters at the start of sentences. It makes it much easier to read. Thank you :D


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zutara


done it
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RedBldSandman
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Ohhhhh YEAH!

Okay, better but a few things:

1. There is no war currently in the RP so please take out any references.

2. You make a reference to a fight with the chieftain in your description. Could you add a bit in your history about why this happened (He's only 15...)

3. Your abilities have not been done correctly. For waterbenders:
Strength and Constitution start of at 5 whilst Speed starts as 6 and Spirituality at 3. You can then add an additional 4 points.

4. Your skills have not been done correctly. You have 10 points to spend. You have only used 1. Moreover, You cannot weapon bend if you cannot normally bend. Furthermore, you have a bronze sword but have no weapon proficiency; without weapon proficiency you'd most likely be more of a threat to yourself with a sword than your enemies :D

Make these changes and it should all be good.


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okay i done all that
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RedBldSandman
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Ohhhhh YEAH!

Just one thing now. Weapon bending takes 2 points to put it up once. This means his weapon bending will only be 1.

Make that change and then start in the Northern Water Tribe.


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