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[Minato Namikaze] Jashin; S-Class/Missing-Nin
Topic Started: Mar 20 2008, 05:00 PM (76 Views)
Minato Namikaze


General Information
Name:
Jashin
Alias:
Jashin's messenger, Jashin's angel of death
Gender:
Male
Age:
19
Country of Origin and Village:
The Evil Country of Jashin
Current Residence:
Wonderer
History:
Jashin was born into the bloodthirsty and extremely religious country to the east that worships the dark god Jashin, when he was born he had 'Jashin' tattoed on his chest. This made his village believe he was a reincarnation of the evil god Jashin himself, as such he went a full year without a name. The very first word he ever spoke was "Jashin" upon saying this the village was convinced even more and he was named Jashin.

Jashin like Hidan was born with immortality, and is only the third person within the religion to be born immortal. when he turned five he killed his first person, although that person was another immortal that worshipped Jashin. As the village gathered round and prepared to strike judgement on him for his wrong doing, he spoke of one sentence "I am the messanger of Jashin, his angel of death, those who do not please his hunger shall die by my hand" this message didn't fall on deaf ears and the entire village at that moment became afraid of him.

When he was 10 years old he left the village and began to travel the world, spreading death and chaos where ever he went. As his path of carnage and death grew larger by each passing day, he would search out those who failed to please Jashin and kill them. Unlike most others he does not pray to Jashin nor does he perform rituals, unlike the others he believes he can speak directly to Jashin. No matter what he will speak to Jashin for one hour a day, to speak with Jashin he stabs himself through the heart with a blood red sword. During that one hour anyone who interupts him is killed immediately, he also believes he is given orders from Jashin.

Lately he has been in search of Hidan to pass judgement upon him, he will stop at nothing and will kill anyone or anything that gets in his way.
Rank:
S-Class Ninja
Team/Affiliation:
Chakra Affinity/Specialty:
Jashin only knows two jutsu but none of them fall under a chakra affinity, he is also skilled in Taijutsu

Characteristics
Visual Appearance:

Physical Appearance:
A tall and slim young man with silver eyes, his eyes turn blood red during battle. He has neck length blonde hair.
Clothing and Armor:
He wears a long silver cloak with the symbols of Jashin spread over it, the symbols are blood red. The cloak is so long that the bottom of it drags along the ground, the collar is chin-high, but Jashin keeps it folded. The cloak is alwasy completely open. He wears a silver necklace with the symbol of Jashin and black silver fingerlace gloves which also have the symbol of Jashin on them. His forehead protector is worn on his forehead.
Personality:
He is arrogant and curses a lot. He takes great glee in slaughter and battle. he will not kill anyone who he thinks will not satisfy Jashin or is unworthy of being sacrificed to Jashin.
Being Jashin's angel of death as such he shared Jashin's lust for bloodshed, and so he enjoys nothing more than leaving a trail of bloodshed in his wake.



Weapons
Weapon Name: Sword of death

Weapon Description:
A four foot long sword. The hilt is made of silver and has the symbol of Jashin on both sides of the handle, the blade is blood red.

Range: short

Special Abilities: None


Weapon Name: Daggers

Weapon Description: two daggers which he keeps isnide his cloak. They are both one foot long and are completely silver. They both have a thin silver chain attached to the bottom of the handle, the chain links both daggers together.

Range: Short, Mid, Long

Special Abilities: None

Weapon Name: Angels trident

Weapon description: A large white trident. Posted Image

Range: Short, mid

Special abilities: none, can only be used in his angel transformation

Kekkei Genkai
None


Jutsus
Jashin has no jutsu but instead he relies on his two unique abilities. his immortality and his angel transformation.

Immortality
Jashin has been gifted with immortality ever since his birth, the marvelous ability garnering him praises in his village as a gift from the god Jashin to further the god's dark crusade of bloodshed. As such he is able to survive fatal wounds and even retains the ability to speak after being decapitated.

Angel Transformation

By taking some of his opponents blood and mixing it with his own, Jashin then by consuming it while transform into his angel form. He grows a pair of large red angel like wings, his body becomes muscular and turns completely red. When he breaths he released a blood red mist from his mouth. In this transformation Jashin gains the ability to fly and defend himself with his wings, he can spread a blood red mist throughout the area which makes visibility almost zero, he can however feel every movement within the mist.
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TFE Magnus
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Negro please.

A few things:
1.) In Immortality you forgot to switch Hidan's name with Jashin.
2.) Overpowered, I'm not letting you have either of those last two jutsus. No discussion about those, just erase them.
He's already got Immortality and a special transformation, he shouldn't have other jutsu, that's more than enough, I'm not letting him grant and remove immortality, that's way too overpowered. You're already Madara for christsakes. :rolleyes:
3.) I really don't like how you're making it seem like this guy is someone super close devotee of Jashin who speaks directly to him and has been sent to bring Hidan a mission. Can you stand not powerplaying for ONCE with a goddamn character? Can you for ONCE at least make a character that isn't unbelievably overpowered in skills or storyline? Either you're trying to be the Goddess of Hueco Mundo, or you're the direct representative of Jashin, or you're fucking Madara, or you're an unbelievable god.
I don't want this guy any closer to Jashin or understand that religion to Hidan, that's just broken, you're not the mod of this RP, I don't want you coming up with "quests" or "tests" for Hidan. This character will be no closer to the god or religion than Hidan, he's simply another believer who believes he's talking to Jashin and believes blah blah blah.
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ThirteenSins
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Got a light?

I believe the thought of another immortal like Hidan is kinda ugh....lets say we have enough immortal people. Madara...Hidan...Seemingly Pein. I would recommend he be under Hidan, like he is just learning the will of Jashin. Therefore he hasnt attained the abilities of Hidan. That way he has something to shot for. Besides dont you think one S-Class character is enough??
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Status Screen
Name: Neji (Sebastian Reinhold)
Current Level: Level 2
Current XP: 225
XP Till next Level: 150
HP: (334/334)
MP: (130/130)
ATK: (78) -- DEF: (32)
M.ATK: (8) -- M.DEF: (8)
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Minato Namikaze


I see you're point and sorry.

I created this character for a fanfic of mine and just copy and pasted his profile on here. I haven't written the fanfic in a while so I forgot he had those jutsu (there an important part in my fanfic, as Hidan is sent on a trial). Not making excuses for my self, since I should have read through this character before posting it on here.

Again sorry

I have made the changes.

He doesn't have those jutsu anymore, He only believes he can speak directly to jashin. He is stills earching for Hidan to pass judgement on him (that's an important part of his character) but he hasn't been ordered to by Jashin, he himself has decided this.


@Thirteen - Madara ain't immortal he doesn't age, if he is stabbed through the heart or his throat is slit he dies. Any major wound that would kill someone will kill him.
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TFE Magnus
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Negro please.

Alright, as long as you're making it so he's not some OFFICIALLY superior dude RP mod god, he just happens to be another believer of Jashin who believes (key word) he's a super awesome dude. Thirteen is right about "ENOUGH FREAKING S-CLASS" though, but I guess I can't do anything about it. Not like this guy could be a Jonin...


Approved, just try your best to avoid falling back into your powerplaying or overimportant Super Saiyan dudes. :(
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Minato Namikaze


Sure and thanks. My next character will be a Genin or Chuunin anyway :)
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