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| Minato Namikaze | Feb 15 2008, 05:01 PM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Sosuke Katsurou Alias: Gender: Male Age: 462 Birthdate: May 29 Birthplace: Unknown Current Residence: Soul Society History: Katsurou was killed when he was 16 in a war, he became a shinigami shortly after his death. he spent only a few years in the shinigami academy before becoming a shinigami. He joined the 11th division as he was similar to the 11th division captain. He considers himself of captain level and believes he should rightfully be a captain, because of this he often gets involved in Captain meetings by special approval from the captain-commander himself. His love of fighting often leads to him challenging Zaraki to a fight, which always leads to Katsurou in a near death state. His strength without activating his shikai is impressive, but after activating his shikai he gains a massive power boost. for this he as gained the respect of Zaraki. The fact that his shikai simply releasing his own power which he has sealed by using his Zanpakuto, also means he only relies on his own power and because of this he has not aquired bankai yet. Appearance Visual Appearance: Physical Appearance: He is tall with a muscular build. He has short black hair. He has a innocent handsome look to him, which is greatly betrayed by his brown eyes which are completely unsympathetic and forgiving. Clothing and Armor: Katsurou dresses in standard Shinigami style. Personality: Katsurou is unforgiving, he won't show any sympathy for those who he deems unworthy of it and for those who fail to listen and obediantly follow orders. He is cold hearted and loves to fight, his brutality in combat is often overwhelming. He shows respect to those who deserve it but that respect can easily be lost, he is loyal to his brother and looks up to him. Visual Age: 24 Division: 11th division Rank: 7th seat, although he himself thinks he should be the captain of the division because of his power. Zanpakutou Zanpakutou Name: shibousha samurai (deaths samurai) Spirit Appearance: A Samurai with short blonde hair and drown eyes Inner World: A battlefield covered with thousands of dead bodies, in the background a war is still being fought. The screams of the dieing echo throughout the inner world. Sealed Form: A normal Katana Shikai Shikai Release Phrase: riri-su waga ryoku, Shibousha Samurai (release my power, Deaths Samurai) Shikai Appearance: A black seal which is on Katsurou's chest vanishes, as soon as it vanishes a black reiatsu explodes from Katsurou. his Zanpakuto slowly changes to a black katana with a bone hilt, on the guard are two crystal eyes. Shikai Abilities: one of Katsurou's shikai ability is simply the release of his full power, in shikai he gains a massive power boost. His skin is also hardened and he gains a slight boost in speed. Learned Kidou: He is a Kidou expert who has mastered all Kidou up to 81. plitting Void, he is currently training to master all Kidou above 81. |
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| Shino176 | Feb 15 2008, 06:55 PM Post #2 |
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SCHOOL RUMBLE FTW!
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I'm sorry to just jump in on your thread like this, but the abilty to see into the future is pretty godly >.> Also, destroying most of Seireitei is a bit much
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| Minato Namikaze | Feb 15 2008, 07:38 PM Post #3 |
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He can't see far into the future, he can only see small visions into the near future. He can't see a full fight in the future or how a fight will end, he can see actions that will happen in seconds or minutes. And the destroying most of Seireitei will be explained in his history, most of his history will be posted tomorrow. |
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| Mangaholic1 | Feb 15 2008, 08:43 PM Post #4 |
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>_> that ability sounds oddly familiar |
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| Minato Namikaze | Feb 15 2008, 08:45 PM Post #5 |
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I've never seen any ability like that, so i don't see how it can be familiar. Also I took my abilities from the info about Apocalypse. |
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| TFE Magnus | Feb 15 2008, 09:39 PM Post #6 |
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Negro please.
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I dislike this profile for a number of reasons. 1.) The whole "Make this original character the relative of a canon so I can sneak in someone overpowered" 2.) You don't even realize that AIZEN is the family name. Sōsuke is his first name. The character name should be Katsurou Aizen. 3.) Seeing the future? His SHIKAI can see the future? No. Rejected immediately. Not even negotiating that. That's simple and utter modding, I don't care what degrees you'll make or if you'll try to make it a Sharingen or something. Rejected with no negotiation. 4.) If I EVER, EVER, EVER approved this character, I wouldn't let you have bankai. You can't have your cake and eat it too. 5.) Which brings me to the bankai, which is woefully overpowered...and destroy Soul Society? No. No, you didn't do that. Thank you, come again Overpowered Gary Stu God Jesus King. When will players learn that it's about good writing and character, not piling on as many uberbroken powers as you can? |
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| Minato Namikaze | Feb 17 2008, 11:53 AM Post #7 |
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I have edited and finished the profile, he is no longer the brother of Aizen. I have completely changed his Zanpakuto. The history has been changed but is not as long. I hope this is better and is approvalable. |
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| RedBldSandman | Feb 17 2008, 12:01 PM Post #8 |
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Ohhhhh YEAH!
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I'm sorry to jump in here but this still seems like you're trying to make an uber-awesomeness character! Just through shikai he becomes stronger than the 1st Espada and he's able to rival captains without it!!! That, in my opinion, is way to much power for an original character. It seems like you're just annoyed that you couldn't get a canon and now want the equivalent but even stronger... |
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| Minato Namikaze | Feb 17 2008, 12:12 PM Post #9 |
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I don't think so, I was only going after the last captain which I didn't think was taken because I was reading the captain's meeting. This character won't EVER be getting Bankai, so I made his Shikai powerful. If it needs to be toned down I will, I have no problem with that. The reason Id din't make him Aizen's brother was because I didn't want to change his name. But his power can always be put down if TFE tells me to do so, I will without a problem. |
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| Hazuki Ryo | Feb 17 2008, 12:32 PM Post #10 |
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Meh.
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Just to let you know, as far as Kidou goes, your only allowed 6 spells. Also you Zanpakuto still seems to be a lil on the too powerful side, especially for a 7th seat officer. You might want to tone it done a lot. |
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| TFE Magnus | Feb 17 2008, 03:21 PM Post #11 |
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Negro please.
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Seriously, I don't mean to annoy you Minato, and I'm really sorry, but you're way too overpowered still. You know all of the kidou up to 81 (Unlike what Hazuki is saying, there isn't a limit on six kidou spells, that's just how many templates there are given in the template...still, knowing all of them up to 81 is a bit much) AND your shikai gives you unimaginable power equal to Kenpachi and stronger skin than the top Espada? Are you KIDDING me? This isn't improved at all, you're just using shortcuts. "Alright, I won't have bankai, but I'll have a shikai more powerful than any bankais around and know all the kidou. Also I'll justify it by somehow saying I'm Captain level even though I'm a 7th ranked officer and looking at the powers I've given myself I'm probably one of the strongest people in the universe". C'mon, seriously man, I could ignore the kidou because you could say he's a super kidou expert, but that shikai is never ever going to fly. Stronger skin than the top Espada? Unimaginable power equal to Kenpachi? C'mon man.
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| Minato Namikaze | Feb 17 2008, 04:27 PM Post #12 |
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Fixed everything. |
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| TFE Magnus | Feb 17 2008, 04:35 PM Post #13 |
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Negro please.
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Approved |
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| TFE Magnus | Feb 17 2008, 05:20 PM Post #14 |
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Negro please.
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You're unapproved unless you fix your history. Equal to Captain?! "His love of fighting often leads to him challenging Zaraki to a fight, which always leads to both of them in a near death state. His strength is equal to a captains without activating his shikai, but after activating his shikai is power grows above that of a captains level. for this he as gaiend the respect of Zaraki. The fact that his shikai simply releasing his own power which he has sealed by using his Zanpakuto, also means he only relies on his own power and becasue of this he has not aquired bankai yet." Are you serious? |
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| Minato Namikaze | Feb 17 2008, 05:22 PM Post #15 |
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Oh
forgot about that, I'll change it. I didn't look over his sitory once I wrote it.
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Sōsuke is his first name.
The character name should be Katsurou Aizen. 




forgot about that, I'll change it. I didn't look over his sitory once I wrote it.

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