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| Umi_no_Samui | Jan 21 2008, 11:06 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Adam Roberts Alias: Zen Gender: Male Age: thinks he should be somewhere between thirty and forty, but since his reunion is around 19 Birthdate: August 22nd… he thinks Birthplace: possibly Twilight Town Current Residence: Traveler Race : Human Class : Melee History: Adam was an ordinary man, as far as he remembers. He might have had a family, or possibly a shop, but it all gets a bit hazy. He does remember one very important thing however: Adam used to be in two parts. His heart was ripped from his body, and turned into a Heartless. His body then became a Nobody. Both were flung into the various conflicts, and both managed to survive thanks to some fluke of luck or divine miracle. But what happened next bordered on impossible. At some point, one half of himself stumbled across the other half. In the midst of a clearing, each half of the man engaged the other in battle. When it looked as though it would end in a draw, both committed everything they had into a final deathblow, each piercing the other’s forehead with claws and talons. In their time as seperate entities, both of Adam's halves met with odd times. Maleficent had taken the Heartless half and, sensing that the orriginal man was strong of spirit, preformed unspeakable experements in an attempt to harness that power. Much of the same happened to his Nobody. Adam awoke day’s later in the clearing, bedecked with armor and bearing three swords that crackled with elemental magic. All he could remember of his previous life was his name, the rest being at best a taunting dream, and at worst hazy wisps. Adam adopted the name Zen, believing himself to be the perfect balance between Heartless and Nobody, hate and emptiness. Zen wants to bring about a peaceful solution to the conflicts of the Heartless and the Nobody, and reunite the two factions. He sees the Keyblade masters as the perfect way to do so. Zen has a burning desire to regain his lost memories and his previous life, whatever it was. Appearance Visual Appearance: ![]() Physical Appearance: Zen is tall and lithe, relying more upon the speed and frequency of his blows in a fight rather than the sheer power behind them. He has brown, close cropped hair, and piercing silver eyes. Zen has no visible scarring. Clothing and Armor: Zen wear an ornate, but functional set of flanged black armor, trimmed in gold. While very decorative, the armor is fully functional and has stood up to several fights so far. Personality: Zen is a rather balanced person emotionally, embracing whatever he feels at the moment. He loves a good joke, and is very dedicated to his cause. Method of Travel Zen has retained the ability of the Heartless to travel between worlds through the shadows, without risk to himself. Weapons Name : The Sanken (The Three Swords) Visual Appearance : ![]() Range : Melee Abilities : Three blades, all harnessed to Zen’s back above his right shoulder. Each is imbued with a different form of the primal, elemental magic. The topmost blade, Hiken, is a sword of fire. It burns his enemies when they fall to his blade. The second, Yoriken, is a blade that will chill an enemy to the bone when struck. The third and final is the Raiken, which dances with the wrath of a powerful thunderstorm. Zen also caries two knives, one in his belt, and one in his boot. While ornate, they have no abilities beyond that of being a sharp knife. Magic Cura: Recovers some of Zen’s health, as well as some of his allies. Speeda: While it would appear that this spell slows time for an enemy, what actually happens is that Zen’s perception speeds up, giving him a quicker reaction time. Gravia: Increases the gravity in a localized area, causing damage to an opponent. Special Abilities Zen has the ability to manifest a third arm of shadow and nothingness. It can appear projected from his torso at any point, or can be created and float within six inches of any point on his torso. The arm is a fully functional arm up to the shoulder, with a thumb and three claw like fingers. Drives, Transformations Eventually, Zen will gain the ability to transform into a winged, Guardian creature. ![]() It has a sword that burns with all three of the Sanken’s powers, and will drastically increase the magic and attack power of all nearby allies. However, this transformation will come at a heavy price: it will leave Zen drained and comatose for several hours afterward, and only lasts a limited amount of time. |
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| R Elric | Jan 22 2008, 01:21 PM Post #2 |
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Your a little too over powered. I would like it if you gave more detail into the abilities of the three swords. You don't explain what extent their power is or how they function. I don't see much point in ur third arm but that's ur choice. You relize what sort of line ur walking here? Your a heartless/nobody combination. I think that would just make u normal again but its ur character. I don't really want you achiving that armored form for a long time. |
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| Mako-Zack | Jan 22 2008, 01:28 PM Post #3 |
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Your race says your human, but you history says your a... a what exactly. Can you explain it a little more? |
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| Umi_no_Samui | Jan 22 2008, 02:58 PM Post #4 |
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He's a human again, but he still has some of the abilities that the Heartless and the Nobodies possess. Sort of a human 2.0 in that he's a little more than human since his re-fusion. And as for the swords, they are sort of like fire, blizzard, and thunder, probably around mid strength level. The difference from the actual spells comes in that they have to make physical contact in order to do the same damage that the spell would. And the point of the third arm is to allow him to weild all three at the same time. And I am perfectly willing to put off the transformation for a good long while. |
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| R Elric | Jan 23 2008, 04:45 PM Post #5 |
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Well I think your almost good to go. I would like if u did something along the lines of, either ur heartless or nobody being experimented on or something. Just to give a little explanation as in to why u still have powers. You allright with something like that? |
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| Umi_no_Samui | Jan 29 2008, 10:31 PM Post #6 |
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Yeah, give me a few more days, I'll figure out something. |
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| R Elric | Jan 31 2008, 06:43 PM Post #7 |
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Alright, try to get it done when you can. |
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| Umi_no_Samui | Feb 10 2008, 05:52 PM Post #8 |
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Ok. Cheick it now. |
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| R Elric | Feb 13 2008, 04:29 PM Post #9 |
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You're Approved. |
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