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Legend of HALVEN GARDE; story! :) read while skilling?
Topic Started: Oct 9 2009, 10:37 AM (261 Views)
dustdevils
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heya! decided to write a story loosely based on rs.

please support it on rs forums. :)

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and i may include COS as part of the story in later parts. :)

this is a preview of my story. hope it captivates. :)





PROLOGUE:

" ALL IN LINE NOW TROLLS!!!! ", General Khalengar bellowed. Instantly, rows and rows of the mightiest trolls fell into formation and listened intently for the forthcoming 'speech of war'.

" Today is the day whence the great master will be glorified! No more will trolls reside within the mountains of Trollheim. It is time to make our presence felt! In just mere hours, Bandit's lair will fall. In days, the Gnome lands to the southwest will be invaded! In weeks, we will over-run Kandarin and Asgarnia! And then..." G. Khalengar paused to savour the smell of impending victory. "... the Elves of Tirannwn WILL beg for mercy- mercy that we will not give."

" Today, we fight like how the great master taught our ancestors to! We will not fail our master now. All of you are already warriors, yet after this battle, you will be heroes! Now charge!!!!!!!!!"

With a massive war-cry magnified many times by the thousands of battle hardened trolls, they charged. Feet easily the size of a small shields pounded the gently undulating ground flat and giant troll maces swung back and forth as the army swept through the thin line of bandits defending their town.

The bandits were fairly well trained fighters, however, even those on horses could barely see above the heads of the largest trolls. Their longswords were also no match for the brute strength and sheer power of the Troll's mace. G. Khalengar himself easily smashed the skulls of 3 men with a single swipe of his mace. Cuts upon his solid muscled torso were comparable only to a sting from a bee and nothing more.

Within minutes, the few hundred bandit foot soldiers were no more and the tiny fence surrounding Bandit's Lair was all that stood between G. Khalengar and victory.

" Lets rejoice my heroes! Tomorrow we begin our march to Burthorpe!"
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Wow dude sounds pretty epic, nice story.
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ok i included beaverboy and skit in the story. cos will come in later.


here's an except:


~~~~~
Prince Beave bowed in acknowledgment.

" And I will send our elite Kandarin Knights to assist you. Sir Skit is their leader and not a better halberdier I have ever seen." Ulthas too signaled for Skit to stand by his side.

~~~~~


again, please support.. and help bump my thread.
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Ha, I like the looks of this man. Keep them rolling out :D

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Hey, cool story man
Some nice imagery, keep writing!
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Just read a couple more parts to it. Good stuff Dust, I'll keep supporting the thread. :D

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thanks icie! yer the man!
and i will thank all who have helped in anyway for my thread on rs forums! :)

characters based on my friends from COS clan:
[in order of appearance]

Prince Beave- beaverboy40

Sir Skit- skittle

ICE- icie juicy

ISA- isa

MAGOM- magommsd

JAMEZ- jamez

Sir Templer- templer104

Dan Thurg- Dark_o_dan


there will be a book 2 when i have the time, so haha.. :) more mentions then i guess!
and hope you guys understand i chose names based on their relevance to my story. after-all, something like this will not sound too good: ' and the mighty dusty slayed the beast with a single arm'

if i were the reader, i be like: wtf is dusty?!

so yea, i changed some of yer names for the purpose of the book. hope its ok :)
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WHAT ABOUT ME
WHAT IS THIS

EDIT: PUT ME WITH SKIT :D
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Mary Hill
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WHAT ABOUT ME
WHAT IS THIS

EDIT: PUT ME WITH SKIT :D

Mary has always wanted Skit. It's cute really...


Anyways about to read some more. B)

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i have removed my story from rs forums after i realised that its a dumb place to put stories. people there are 'epicly' dumb. anyway, i will put it here from now on. exclusively for COS.
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