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new recruitment drive; new post
Topic Started: Nov 9 2008, 05:22 PM (286 Views)
Templer104
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Videos:

CoS warring in action

CoS events

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what you guys think?
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Pretty nice. Do we have any other videos to link to?
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Templer104
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Nov 9 2008, 02:25 PM
Pretty nice. Do we have any other videos to link to?

icies is rather old and like 10 minutes long
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I like the steel angel thing but its a little rough 'n ready in places.
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Titan Zeus
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It looks great, Temp!

But, I'm going to be a douche and mess with your grammar :oops

Sorry, but don't change this if it takes too much work, most people probably won't notice.

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With the addition of the PVP Worlds COS has taken to them...

There should be a comma after "Worlds."

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Our active and experienced Event Staff set up around 10 events a week in various timezone for GMT and US based members, which are both P2P and F2P so everyone can join in.

There should be an 's' at the end of the word "timezone."
Don't use characters for numbers, unless it's a date or year. So it should be 'ten' instead of "10."
Although "GMT and US based members" makes sense, you should either talk about timezones (GMT, EST, CST, etc.) or countries; don't mix the two.
There should be a comma after "F2P."

I'm sorry, I know I'm being a dick by saying that, but I thought I should point it out in case you want to change it.



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Templer104
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thanks titan, any advice is good.


Icie fail lol, i copied that off the original recruitment post from icie oh well, i'll change sometime


Btw OSU ftw, im from ohio myself
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Nov 9 2008, 06:19 PM
It looks great, Temp!

But, I'm going to be a douche and mess with your grammar :oops

Sorry, but don't change this if it takes too much work, most people probably won't notice.

Quote:
 
With the addition of the PVP Words COS has taken to them...

There should be a comma after "Worlds."

Quote:
 
Our active and experienced Event Staff set up around 10 events a week in various timezone for GMT and US based members, which are both P2P and F2P so everyone can join in.

There should be an 's' at the end of the word "timezone."
Don't use characters for numbers, unless it's a date or year. So it should be 'ten' instead of "10."
Although "GMT and US based members" makes sense, you should either tlak about timezones (GMT, EST, CST, etc.) or countries; don't mix the two.
There should be a comma after "F2P."

I'm sorry, I know I'm being a dick by saying that, but I thought I should point it out in case you want to change it.



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Ya those are my bad.

But it's obvious that this is not a grammar or spelling test, and I think people more easily relate to things like "F2P" and "GMT" than the literal spelling out of each word, it would make us sound "upitty" and like we are trying to be supperior.

Anyways, I love the whole post and the videos and graphics are solid. But there is one thing I want to do and that's to get a new event video out. I've got tons of footage from anything from Burn Down Varrock to the new PVP (not the greatest). So it should be good when I eventually get it started.

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Nov 9 2008, 09:47 PM
thanks titan, any advice is good.


Icie fail lol, i copied that off the original recruitment post from icie oh well, i'll change sometime


Btw OSU ftw, im from ohio myself

No problem :)

Where in Ohio? I'm west of Cleveland.


Icie, it's not a spelling or grammar test; but when you make something public, you should use the best possible spelling and grammar. That doesn't mean you have to use it on the forums or on IRC; however, you should use proper spelling and grammar when you're trying making something public (in this sense, I'm using public to mean outside the clan). It's just the one time. You don't have to answer/respond to every post the way I do, respesting English religiously. (That's kind of funny, since I'm agnostic :P )



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bout 2 hours south of cleveland in upper sandusky (not sandusky)
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Nov 9 2008, 07:19 PM
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Nov 9 2008, 06:19 PM
It looks great, Temp!

But, I'm going to be a douche and mess with your grammar :oops

Sorry, but don't change this if it takes too much work, most people probably won't notice.

Quote:
 
With the addition of the PVP Words COS has taken to them...

There should be a comma after "Worlds."

Quote:
 
Our active and experienced Event Staff set up around 10 events a week in various timezone for GMT and US based members, which are both P2P and F2P so everyone can join in.

There should be an 's' at the end of the word "timezone."
Don't use characters for numbers, unless it's a date or year. So it should be 'ten' instead of "10."
Although "GMT and US based members" makes sense, you should either tlak about timezones (GMT, EST, CST, etc.) or countries; don't mix the two.
There should be a comma after "F2P."

I'm sorry, I know I'm being a dick by saying that, but I thought I should point it out in case you want to change it.



Titan Zeus

Ya those are my bad.

But it's obvious that this is not a grammar or spelling test, and I think people more easily relate to things like "F2P" and "GMT" than the literal spelling out of each word, it would make us sound "upitty" and like we are trying to be supperior.

Anyways, I love the whole post and the videos and graphics are solid. But there is one thing I want to do and that's to get a new event video out. I've got tons of footage from anything from Burn Down Varrock to the new PVP (not the greatest). So it should be good when I eventually get it started.

Events are one of the strongest aspects fo cos and can also be a method of recuitment. Flaunt them Icie !!!!!!!!!!!!!!<--- :D
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i can improve the info picture, and make it look better thus drawing more attention to it and adding professionalism thus gaining more interested members if you want?

pm all info and size, images you want on it, colors, theme, etc.
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I like it. I would join COS if I saw that lol.
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looks very nice
i could make a vid if you want on yt for recruitment?
if so please message me back :)
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Nov 10 2008, 09:39 PM
bout 2 hours south of cleveland in upper sandusky (not sandusky)

Yeah. I remember talking to you about this before. I'm pretty sure I had you draw a map or something because I got confused with the river that separates Upper Sandusky and Sandusky :P



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