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| [WiP] Tis Femina, by Sythe - Naruto | |
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| SuperN | Mar 8 2010, 02:30 PM Post #1 |
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Tokubetsu Jounin
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Status: Work in Progress Title: Tis Femina Author: Sythe Rating: T Fandom: Naruto Pairing: None Summary: Naruto had gone to his last battle with Madara fully prepared to die with his enemy. He did not think he'd be manipulated by old toad sages and thrown to the far past. He did not expect to wake up in the Senju clan compound either. Link: Tis Femina's Fanfiction.net link This is a nicely written story that is just staring out. While it follows the cliche that is time travel it's written in the way not followed by most time travel stories; a positive in my opinion. The minor downsides can be overlooked as they didn't disrupt my enjoyment. This all I can say without giving out the plot. Writing these reviews are harder then I originally though.
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Captain Jim Brass: I don't want to waste time screwing around with this nut case. I'm going to get some bleach, and drip it on her until she gives up the location. I mean they can't accuse us of police brutality for that.![]() Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz. | |
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| Lutris | Mar 9 2010, 12:04 AM Post #2 |
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Okay. This story had me when Naruto was basically made into a chakra-entity. But wtf was with the random turning him into a woman? I mean. WTF. Oiroke is only win when used as a distraction or for hawt Naruto/Naruko smex. A tentative 3.5/5 at this point. Will give an official rating later, as there's still only one chapter. |
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| Howdy | Mar 9 2010, 04:24 AM Post #3 |
Chunin
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Bleh. I got to the part where Naruto is inexplicably a girl, because obviously the demons he absorbed had to make him more "demonic" and we all know that girls are demons. 50 bucks says Naruto falls in love with Madara and shows him the error of his ways, then they fall in love and live happily ever after forever, 'cause they're both immortal-like. No thank you. Edited by Howdy, Mar 9 2010, 04:24 AM.
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| mortalone | Mar 9 2010, 04:48 AM Post #4 |
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Can I vote for "too soon to post this here"? It seems like there could be an interesting story here, but it's unclear if this story will be it. I also have concerns about this gender-bending for no real reason, among other things, but the idea that Konoha won't be formed... well, that's a very interesting spin. |
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| Lutris | Mar 9 2010, 05:39 PM Post #5 |
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^^What mortalone said. ...this fic's gonna be in here for a while, idn't it? :/ |
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| JrdBnta | Mar 10 2010, 02:26 AM Post #6 |
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Genin
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Yup. |
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| mortalone | Mar 11 2010, 06:20 AM Post #7 |
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Jrd, what manga is that avatar from? For some reason it reminds me of GTO. |
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| Lutris | Mar 11 2010, 12:46 PM Post #8 |
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mortalone. ZETMAN. You will go read it now. ...NOW, DAMMIT!
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| Thrillhouse | Mar 14 2010, 06:14 PM Post #9 |
Academy Student
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Damn, I knew that looked familiar. Every time I saw your avatar I had to stop and think (and stare)... |
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| li.u | Mar 16 2010, 11:38 PM Post #10 |
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Jounin
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This goes into the 'Absolute Shit' section for now. Just post in here if your vote changes the overall rating to something not shitty. |
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